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Come on, I can see that you are a newbie, otherwise the article cannot have such a strong sense of fragmentation. It is basically an original plot, so the sense of fragmentation is strong. I feel that this character should not do this. In other words, the paragraph is too long. Reading a long paragraph makes me feel like reading an essay. I mind if you follow the plot and intersperse your own original plot in the middle, it will look much better.