Star Dome Railway: the Immortal Rock Lord

Overall, it's okay. The author has a certain understanding of the characters, and the article also contains depth. Most of the characters are okay, but the pace is too fast, which makes it feel like eating fast food. It feels exciting one second and feels different the next. There are also questions about the transitional description of characters. Uncle Yang is too impulsive (the first time he meets Dr. Luo, he takes action before confirming his identity, which is not included in the original plot!), Kafka curses (see Chapter 62 for details), March 7 has no common sense, Jizi can really hit March and Star? Fu Xuan beat Qingque because he was too angry?

The knife will kill me, Wendy will die, Ruo Tuo will die, and the people who follow the emperor will also die long ago... I'm going to have a fight with you! My dearest friend CB was killed by you ahhhhhh [crying] [crying] [crying]

This book has the potential to be a demigod. After reading dozens of chapters, it should be rated at 9 or above. The IQ of all the members is online. It is very well written. This is the fourth time I have read such a book with such an IQ. The author is very impressed. Moreover, the beginning is very reasonable and well-founded.

The character of Di Jun is already one of the best I have seen without being OOC⊙▽⊙, as long as there is no female protagonist, I will recommend it alone

This is a very high-quality Star Iron fanfic that I have seen in Tomato. The writing is good, but the description of some plots is a bit long-winded. I read it quickly, and the plot of Belloberg is a bit slow and a little confusing. It feels like the previous text does not follow the next. But as a first-time author, it is already very powerful. I hope to write more! It is not enough!!!

It's great, but the company may have 2 to 6 messengers. If there are really so few messengers, the company will not be the most powerful force on the surface. Xianzhou has six or seven permanent patrol messengers. Even if they are not taken into account, it is only superficial. Just add the commanders and the seven ships of Xianzhou and take into account the superficial ranking. Of course, this does not include the ability of Xianzhou to consume a divination to summon the star god to attack. It can be seen that the company cannot only have one or two messengers.

The plot is very imaginative and the characters' emotions are well portrayed. Although it is a bit unfinished, I have to say that it is indeed one of the best-written stories in Bengtie. Mr. Zhong's sense of security is still full, and the unique edge of the war god Morax is also well written. The final ending is also okay, it's so exciting [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's so well written, the writing is clear, the characters are rich, and the scenes are described perfectly. I hope I won't suddenly stop writing again.

Zhongli's character is very suitable for his character. If you like watching it [sending heartfelt wishes], come on, come on.

It feels pretty good to watch, I don't watch much of it. By the way, the little gray fur is a star. The treasures who want to find Qiong can avoid lightning.

It's okay. Zhongli is wearing a star iron, which is a good idea.

Come on, author, don't stop updating. I've read several books and they all stopped. Now you're almost the only one serializing them.

It's very well written. Come on, the author. Don't stop updating. I've tried several similar ones before but they all stopped [crying]

I can't wait to see Fengsheng's death. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The quality of the new book is incomparable, and the story is basically original. It has not become a commonplace like other fan fiction, and is exactly the same as the game.

The book is very good. The plot made me feel very comfortable. It is not too crazy or too serious. It is worth reading.

Very nice, I don't understand why the score is a little low OK, except for being short, everything else is fine.

It's rare to see a novel that takes the perspective of ordinary people and truly pays attention to the people at the bottom

Is there any cb book about Genshin Impact and all members?

'As a fanfic, the writing is pretty good, but when will Zhongli become a god? [Thinking] It's finished. It's well written, but it's just a bit short.

The last one I thought was so good-looking was "Three Thousand Immortals"! The old man is reliable, and the author even made up his own knife. After all, he found out that he was simulated... Be sure to read it carefully! (Currently in Chapter 30)

"Sunset Fruit", "Sweet" and "Do you want to eat it?"

I really want to write my own thing. What I personally want to see is Zhongli and the plot. I can use my own strength and mature knowledge to fine-tune the plot to create an interesting plot.

Not bad, this book

Nice looking, good idea

Really good

Looks quite satisfying

Madam, madam, she's pretty

The character is a bit OOC and a bit private, but the writing makes up for it.

Please give the author 50 chapters a day, it's not enough to read