The Campus Situation After Transforming into a Lolita

It can be seen between the lines that the author tried his best to learn a book well, and the subject matter was well chosen, but the writing is not suitable here. The author chose the wrong presentation form of the article. Internet novels not only need ups and downs of the plot, but also need good writing style. The author's choice is similar to Zhou The way of expressing the notes is not appropriate, and there is too little detailed description of the event. Therefore, in order to increase the length of the article, I can only think about the plot. This also makes the article read like a running account, lacking the necessary refreshing feeling for online articles. Such articles are not only tiring for the author to write, but also difficult for the readers to read. Summary: The author has experienced it, and the subject matter selection is good. However, the author did not choose a creative method suitable for online articles. Reading it is a test of concentration.

The story is about a hundred changes, the writing style is top-notch, the writing is partial to the literary style, and there are zero descriptions of women's clothing, women's bodies, and women's degeneration. The heroine is very pretentious, and her seemingly weak character turns out to be stubborn and selfish. The author also kept typing the second female lead's name incorrectly as her best friend, which left me speechless. Moreover, too many accidents are a bit fake, and there is no sense of substitution. Study, study, why are there so many bad things in school, everyone is very busy, okay? Who would keep an eye on other people's private lives.