The Immortal of Jianmu’s Eternal Life

I hope the author can create a character who is halfway to the author's level to add some popularity to this book. Anyway, it would be best if this character can remain invincible until the end. In this way, this book can add some features. He only appears three times in this book. He only took action twice. Anyway, these two times were when the protagonist encountered fatal danger. Of course, he had nothing to do with the protagonist. Anyway, he was just slapped. If you shoot the protagonist to death, you have to ask why the protagonist will be in danger. The answer is immortality. There will always be some unavoidable problems. The first time was by chance, and the second time was when I happened to be passing by and saw him, and then slapped the opponent to death. Of course, the opponent had to be very strong, otherwise the characteristics of this character would not be highlighted. And he knows the protagonist well. Of course, he doesn't look at the protagonist all the time, but sees right through the protagonist. Jianmu is just trash in his eyes. Only in this way can the character's invincible characteristics be created.

The writing is good. It is recommended to divide it into more paragraphs. Don't make it a long paragraph, which seems laborious and affects the reading experience.

Okay, it can be written well, it's just a story. If the setting is not good, you can engage in mobile online shopping. You are suitable for writing urban farming articles.

The plot is surprisingly good