HP: Unspeakable

It's very interesting, the plot is step-by-step, and there is no weak plot. The heroine is good at alchemy and potions, and has precognition Astra felt very peaceful overall, with a sense of exhaustion after all the sailing, and was more like an anchor point for Snape. The first person he saw when he woke up from another world was him, and he was the one who rescued him. Because of Legilimency, both of them saw their own past and grief, and the distance between the two narrowed. Astra and Snape's relationship is currently in the realm of friends, and they look forward to their relationship developing (blindly guessing that the professor will be the first to figure it out [laughter]) And the article is too new, I hope it won't stop updating [Sending my heart]

I feel that I wrote it very delicately and with great care. I even drew the cover myself with great care! I also like the stories I wrote. I really love the characters I wrote [love] [love] [love]

(Note: All words are personal feelings, irrational people will reject them) I really like Teacher Gin's writing. The teacher's writing style is really good and it touched my heart right away. I have been really busy with my studies recently, and every time I see the teacher's fragrant rice when I'm unhappy, I feel instantly excited! ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა Although I can't watch it every day after school starts, I will silently support the teacher! ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა This style of writing is not similar to that of popular literature. Everyone has their own personality and does not revolve around the protagonist. It is really a good book. The author will not only write about the good sides of the male and female protagonists, nor will he only write about the evil sides of other people. After all, only the good and evil sides of the characters are vivid, three-dimensional, and flesh-and-blood, right? At the same time, I urge everyone to read this book. Teacher Gin is really attentive! The teacher will really respond to every reader's comments and questions very seriously. He is really down-to-earth and has no airs at all! ! ! ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧ This book perfectly restored the world view and character settings of the original work, and the details were handled very well, as if it made me step into that magical world again! (๑⃙⃘´༥`๑⃙⃘) 𐂐 Gin-sensei's expansion of the world of the original work is so creative. It is completely in line with Rowling's style, but full of the teacher's own unique style! ୧₍˄·͈༝·͈˄₎୨ The teacher's story made me rethink many issues, especially those about growth and choice, which are very profound. ʕ⸝⸝⸝˙Ⱉ˙ʔ ♡ I can feel the teacher's love and respect for the original work. This kind of care is really reflected in every detail. The teacher really put a lot of effort and energy into this story, and you can feel the teacher's seriousness and enthusiasm in every chapter! This is the best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read! It completely surpassed some parts of the original work and gave me a new understanding of the magical world! ૮₍˶•ᴗ•˶₎ა Even though this book is not a masterpiece, for me, as long as it is there, I remember it, my favorite book when I was young, and I remember Teacher Gin, that is enough. Also: Mr. Gin, I may not be able to post paragraph reviews in the future, and I may not be able to read them often, but I will try my best! Love the teacher! ʕ⸝⸝⸝˙Ⱉ˙ʔ ♡ Your forever loyal readers Wanxia (cn of tiles)

This book is really, really good. It brings Sri Lankan teachings to life. I highly recommend it. They all had unbearable experiences - he lost his friend that summer. "He had no expectations for the future. He only prayed that the future would not be too cruel to him." That time she lost her sister, "But I hate myself very much. I have always been like this. I have brought pain to many people and many creatures. I am stubborn and impulsive. I am gullible and lack of opinion. I am too conceited and unkind. I am unscrupulous and indifferent to life. I have inadvertently touched a power that should not be touched by human beings - but I don't know that Sleeping Dragons should not be disturbed." But he/she met the light that stayed for him/her - "How could you expect a person who has witnessed the light to fade back into the darkness that should belong to him again?" "It was you who redeemed me and made me what I am now, instead of a tired soul in self-exile, full of deathly silence." "Thank you, for everything." "Just like I love you, with my everything." ——Bartender Gin Thank you for being able to reproduce the face of Sri Lanka. I wish you can create better works again. Thank you! [Love][Blow kiss]

Such delicate feelings, whether it is tolerance or collapse after the explosion, it is the two-way healing between Si Jiao and Astra. There is no misunderstanding without a long mouth, only the compensation for regrets and the redemption of the past. You must work hard, I love it so much [crying] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

I haven't finished the novel, but it doesn't affect my review. I haven't finished it mainly because it's good, and I want to read it slowly. I'm afraid I won't be able to finish it if I catch up [I'm about to cry] The emotional line of He Sijiao is also very well written. Two broken souls mend each other. After understanding the experiences of both parties, they discovered that they are the only ones in this world and half of each other. I beg the author to lighten the knife [I'm about to cry]. In addition, I really like the setting of the heroine, the magic setting of the heroine's own world, the smart heroine, the chess player and her knight.

After reading for a long time, I saw someone in the comment area saying that all this is the heroine's own choice, so her pain does not deserve sympathy, but I don't think that is the case. When a person who has been in darkness all year round suddenly catches a ray of light, she will definitely hold it with all her strength, even if she knows that she will be dripping with blood. Some people say that the heroine is too virginal, but I think if you see the child who has reached a fork in the road like yourself, will you bear to watch him go into the abyss? She is not saving others, she is redeeming herself. She is too lonely. She wants to find the meaning of living, she wants to establish a connection with the world, and she does not want to lose the feelings she has finally gained, so let's give her more love. All the above are personal opinions

Good looking ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з I didn't get too involved in the plot of the original work. Anyway, I don't like being too involved in the original protagonist group, especially the kind of academy where two opposing sides are involved, and then the two sides are pulled back and forth, and they have to persuade this one and that one. It's okay for kids, but as an adult we Astra will be very tired╮(￣⊿￣)╭ In this book, Ron Weasley is not a very good character. I feel that he is quite academically biased. Maybe the world is black and white in the eyes of children. In fact, it feels like it is also a problem of the environment. But the author said that he will always believe in the heroine in the future. That is good, I can accept it ❛‿˂̵✧ Dumbledore. . . I'm quite complicated about him and don't like him. It's hard for me to believe that he died in the original novel. . . Astra and Sijiao's early friendship and later love are very frustrating. ୧⍢⃝୨ Really cherishes each other and is evenly matched, but the two people are not enemies. The author portrays the image of Sijiao very well. The little quotation that makes people laugh is like a poisonous snake (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia and the rhetoric is quite gorgeous. Astra is an absolute Slytherin, shrewd and ambitious is never a bad word ₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎♡

Marked at 100, it looks great! It prefers a more serious style of writing. The heroine is miserable. When I read the hundred chapters, there are a lot of plots about the game with Dumbledore. The plot deviates a lot from the original work and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I still prefer to read some stupid articles🏳️. However, I personally don't like the type of articles where the heroine is miserable and is always under suspicion. The main reason is that although the heroine is very strong, she doesn't feel happy at all. I don't know what will happen next. If you like beautiful, strong and miserable articles, I recommend reading it~

I love it so much, but this book is very quiet. No one comments, but many people read it. Don't ask me how I know. (Every time I post a comment, within ten minutes, many people will like it, and the author will reply) [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's really beautiful. The emotional descriptions in this book are rare and delicate. I think the description of the relationship between Astra and Snape is very good. The author's writing style is more literary, but the relationship between Astra and Snape is restrained and passionate. They are not good at expressing but their love for each other will not weaken at all. It is mentioned in the book that they are "the same kind". This recognition makes them closer, but it is also some similar characteristics that may make their relationship a little bumpy (of course this is just my personal opinion) [crying]. What I see in this book is love and responsibility. Of course! The above are some of my personal views on this book and what attracts me to this book. Don't worry too much about it [Sending my heart] Finally, this book is really super super super super super good to read. I hope the author will update it more quickly. I must stick to it [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I really like the friendship and ambiguity between the two, who knows, it's so cute, secretly poking at each other, similar experiences, different souls, caring for each other more than anyone else. I like Snape here very much. In fact, I like everyone written about it. The author's comments are very warm. I can really feel the author's love for Snape from it. The words are full of love. I want Snape to be happy. I like this novel so much. Please be sure to finish it [Blow kiss]

He is the most sincere author among the many HP fans I have seen. She (he) is not writing a novel, she (he) is analyzing this magical world. Whether it is from the characterization or the arrangement of the plot, you can appreciate it carefully. It is a good work worth reading several times. Looking forward to its final appearance.

Two people who are riddled with wounds heal each other with the warmth of their souls. Love is not sympathy or charity; it is the resonance between her and his soul. The two independent and stubborn people always tolerate each other. Love gives birth to the flower of courage, which shines with the brilliance of reflected sunlight on the road of courage to survive. (Normally I don't leave a review until it's finished, but I strongly recommend this book, so I'll give you an impression first #When leaving a review - The Secret Room is finished

I have basically read Severus fandom all over, and I feel that the quality I require for reading is still very high, but I am sure that this is the most, most, most, most beautiful book I have ever read [crying][crying][crying][crying], I hope it will be updated soon ah ah ah ah

Excellent writing style! ! ! I didn't expect to see such a good hp fanfic on Tomato. The plot is reasonable, the heroine's portrayal is very delicate, and the original characters are very restored. It's my favorite Sri Lankan feeling hehe [Love]

Wow, it looks great, highly recommended! ! ! I just watched it during the holiday yesterday. I had stopped watching it before because the author said there were a lot of foreshadowings (I like to read things that are mindless). However, I couldn't help but continue reading. I couldn't stop reading it. I regret not reading it earlier. I still want to read it. Look, come on, [blowing kiss] But I'm about to take the college entrance examination, so I can't watch it for the time being. I'll watch it again after the exam is over (my heart is so itchy, I still want to watch it, woohoo), and now my second-level scores have dropped a lot, and I really can't play anymore, woowoo, wait until I come back in June! Just think of it as hoarding articles [almost crying] Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]

Highlight the emotional continuation and innovation of the original work! As someone who loves HP's original works to the core, this fanfic really stood out to me and I must give it five stars without hesitation! What attracts me most about it is the perfect continuation of the emotions of the original work. There is a deep love and respect for that magical world flowing between the lines. As soon as I opened the book, a familiar feeling came to my face. The plants and trees of Hogwarts, the laughter of teachers and students, were as vivid as in my memory. The author seemed to be holding a magical key, opening up the beautiful memories of the original work in my heart, allowing me to immerse myself again in that world full of magic and dreams. However, this fanfic is not just a simple repetition of the original work, it has its own unique innovations. The author cleverly conceived a brand-new story and started a unique adventure for the protagonists. In this process, the new characters intertwined with the original characters, creating different sparks. The setting of the new characters is also very brilliant. Each of them has a distinct personality and background, which injects new vitality into the entire story. Moreover, the author is very clever in handling the relationship between the story and the original work. It not only retains the core elements and classic plot of the original work, but also brings freshness to readers through new perspectives and plot development. This kind of innovative writing method in inheritance is really rare. In addition, the logic of the article is clear, the plot is compact, and there is no redundancy. The author's writing style is concise and clear, yet accurately conveys various emotions and atmospheres. Whether it's the tense and exciting battle scenes or the warm and touching moments of friendship, they are all written so well that they sometimes made my blood boil and sometimes moved me to tears. This HP fanfic, with its deep continuation of the original emotions and wonderful innovation, has become the best among HP fanfics. (In my opinion) I believe that every reader who loves HP can find his or her own favorite points in it. Thumbs up again for the teacher and highly recommend everyone to read!

Very well written! The characters are not OOC at all, there are many small details, the plot is compact, the characters are deeply understood, and the relationship with the original protagonist group is also handled very well. Moreover, being with Si Jiao is really a match made in heaven [Adoration] [Adoration] [Sending Hearts]

No ooc at all! ! It can be seen that the author has a deep understanding of the original characters. None of the main characters are flat and the author is very good at creating characters. This is a rare and wonderful HP article

It's good-looking, don't read the introduction. It's super good-looking. The heroine in the author's works is flesh and blood and has a soul. The most important thing is to redeem each other with CP Sifu. Moreover, the heroine's role as the chess player playing against Dumbledore is so beautiful. The heroine is so handsome, and the feeling of fighting against fate is very strong. Let me watch it!

No matter what they go through, Astra and Severus will firmly believe in each other and protect each other. Love is an existence that is higher than reason. It is the one that will still firmly choose you through all the embarrassment and darkness. It will not let go of the hand that leads to the light together. It is the right person who will stand in your future. Although, GGAD's be is doomed.

This is the best fanfic I have ever read. The author really portrayed the psychology of Sri Lanka very delicately. As a person who usually doesn't comment at all, I can't help but admire the author's plot setting. The combination of exquisite writing style and delicate and sincere emotions gradually penetrates into the heart of Si Jiao, a heart-wrenching person.

This book is very beautiful. The heroine is really smart and powerful. Snape in this book is not very OOC. Anyway, I like every character created by the author [Blow Kiss]. The author writes very seriously. She writes many small details and foreshadowings, and this author keeps updating them! Who knows?

It's very beautiful and the writing is very good. Forgive my poor mind for not being able to think of any words of praise. I've read more than a dozen hp and cp fanfics in the past two months. I like this one very much. I approve of this one. This is my favorite book. There is no second place (but I will like the sentences in the articles of some authors. They are very beautiful) The heroine is gentle but still sharp Sri Lanka Religion Reshapes the Soul in Redemption In my case, Sijiao did not "love" Lily. He could not recognize abnormal emotions due to childhood trauma. The stars from another world guided him, and he also became the anchor point of the stars in the other world (personal thoughts) The author will also listen to every reader's thoughts and correct some minor flaws. He is a very, very good person/author. He reads comments every day and answers them seriously. I am really touched. 🥹I made some small requests and he also responded seriously. I am so moved😭 Every little detail really makes me cry. Just go in and that's it Five stars, super beautiful, can't satisfy my praise for this book.

It's great to read. This is truly the most character-driven book I've ever read. Based on the original work, the heroine and her previous world are added, and there's nothing inconsistent. The heroine is the kind of character that I like very much, and the relationship with Sri Lanka is also very smooth, and it feels like a perfect match. This book is definitely one of the most worth reading in HP fan fiction.

I really like Si Jiao and Astra written by the author. They have the same experience, which led to the meeting of their souls. Seeing each other's redemption makes my heart warm. It greatly makes up for my biggest regret about HP. The writing is great (very loud praise), and the author is as caring as a hair [blowing kiss] ps: You are so active

I love you, I will enjoy this book and look forward to every future installment. Bless you and may every character I like have a happy ending. Praise you for inviting me to glimpse a corner of another world through words. I'm so happy, I love you🥹 And, fifty points from Gryffindor.

It's good to see, Snape is a genius, and so is Astra. The sympathy between geniuses, the mutual understanding and support between the two of them, it's best to say hello, ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, please do more, although I feel that there will be small knives, not big knives, if I cheated later. Woo hoo (I only watched the movie version, I couldn't bear to read the original novel, and I couldn't bear to re-read it) I no longer want to stand at the beginning of the story, looking at the predetermined ending. I hope that the parallel world created by the novel can prevent Si Jiao from being trapped by those eyes for the rest of his life. He also has his own wonderful life.

Quite an excellent piece of work. When it comes to fandom, I always value the image and setting of original characters more, and Astra is a complete, stand-up soul. This is a rare thing. Baby, thank you for your hard work writing the book! 😽😽😽Keep up the hard work💪💪💪🫵🙀! ! !