Harry Potter: Unspeakable

It's very interesting, the plot is step-by-step, and there is no weak plot. The heroine is good at alchemy and potions, and has precognition Astra felt very peaceful overall, with a sense of exhaustion after all the sailing, and was more like an anchor point for Snape. The first person he saw when he woke up from another world was him, and he was the one who rescued him. Because of Legilimency, both of them saw their own past and grief, and the distance between the two narrowed. Astra and Snape's relationship is currently in the realm of friends, and they look forward to their relationship developing (blindly guessing that the professor will be the first to figure it out [laughter]) And the article is too new, I hope it won't stop updating [Sending my heart]

I feel that I wrote it very delicately and with great care. I even drew the cover myself with great care! I also like the stories I wrote. I really love the characters I wrote [love] [love] [love]

(Note: All words are personal feelings, irrational people will reject them) I really like Teacher Gin's writing. The teacher's writing style is really good and it touched my heart right away. I have been really busy with my studies recently, and every time I see the teacher's fragrant rice when I'm unhappy, I feel instantly excited! ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა Although I can't watch it every day after school starts, I will silently support the teacher! ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა This style of writing is not similar to that of popular literature. Everyone has their own personality and does not revolve around the protagonist. It is really a good book. The author will not only write about the good sides of the male and female protagonists, nor will he only write about the evil sides of other people. After all, only the good and evil sides of the characters are vivid, three-dimensional, and flesh-and-blood, right? At the same time, I urge everyone to read this book. Teacher Gin is really attentive! The teacher will really respond to every reader's comments and questions very seriously. He is really down-to-earth and has no airs at all! ! ! ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧ This book perfectly restored the world view and character settings of the original work, and the details were handled very well, as if it made me step into that magical world again! (๑⃙⃘´༥`๑⃙⃘) 𐂐 Gin-sensei's expansion of the world of the original work is so creative. It is completely in line with Rowling's style, but full of the teacher's own unique style! ୧₍˄·͈༝·͈˄₎୨ The teacher's story made me rethink many issues, especially those about growth and choice, which are very profound. ʕ⸝⸝⸝˙Ⱉ˙ʔ ♡ I can feel the teacher's love and respect for the original work. This kind of care is really reflected in every detail. The teacher really put a lot of effort and energy into this story, and you can feel the teacher's seriousness and enthusiasm in every chapter! This is the best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read! It completely surpassed some parts of the original work and gave me a new understanding of the magical world! ૮₍˶•ᴗ•˶₎ა Even though this book is not a masterpiece, for me, as long as it is there, I remember it, my favorite book when I was young, and I remember Teacher Gin, that is enough. Also: Mr. Gin, I may not be able to post paragraph reviews in the future, and I may not be able to read them often, but I will try my best! Love the teacher! ʕ⸝⸝⸝˙Ⱉ˙ʔ ♡ Your forever loyal readers Wanxia (cn of tiles)

This book is really, really good. It brings Sri Lankan teachings to life. I highly recommend it. They all had unbearable experiences - he lost his friend that summer. "He had no expectations for the future. He only prayed that the future would not be too cruel to him." That time she lost her sister, "But I hate myself very much. I have always been like this. I have brought pain to many people and many creatures. I am stubborn and impulsive. I am gullible and lack of opinion. I am too conceited and unkind. I am unscrupulous and indifferent to life. I have inadvertently touched a power that should not be touched by human beings - but I don't know that Sleeping Dragons should not be disturbed." But he/she met the light that stayed for him/her - "How could you expect a person who has witnessed the light to fade back into the darkness that should belong to him again?" "It was you who redeemed me and made me what I am now, instead of a tired soul in self-exile, full of deathly silence." "Thank you, for everything." "Just like I love you, with my everything." ——Bartender Gin Thank you for being able to reproduce the face of Sri Lanka. I wish you can create better works again. Thank you! [Love][Blow kiss]

Such delicate feelings, whether it is tolerance or collapse after the explosion, it is the two-way healing between Si Jiao and Astra. There is no misunderstanding without a long mouth, only the compensation for regrets and the redemption of the past. You must work hard, I love it so much [crying] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

I haven't finished the novel, but it doesn't affect my review. I haven't finished it mainly because it's good, and I want to read it slowly. I'm afraid I won't be able to finish it if I catch up [I'm about to cry] The emotional line of He Sijiao is also very well written. Two broken souls mend each other. After understanding the experiences of both parties, they discovered that they are the only ones in this world and half of each other. I beg the author to lighten the knife [I'm about to cry]. In addition, I really like the setting of the heroine, the magic setting of the heroine's own world, the smart heroine, the chess player and her knight.

Good looking ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з I didn't get too involved in the plot of the original work. Anyway, I don't like being too involved in the original protagonist group, especially the kind of academy where two opposing sides are involved, and then the two sides are pulled back and forth, and they have to persuade this one and that one. It's okay for kids, but as an adult we Astra will be very tired╮(￣⊿￣)╭ In this book, Ron Weasley is not a very good character. I feel that he is quite academically biased. Maybe the world is black and white in the eyes of children. In fact, it feels like it is also a problem of the environment. But the author said that he will always believe in the heroine in the future. That is good, I can accept it ❛‿˂̵✧ Dumbledore. . . I'm quite complicated about him and don't like him. It's hard for me to believe that he died in the original novel. . . Astra and Sijiao's early friendship and later love are very frustrating. ୧⍢⃝୨ Really cherishes each other and is evenly matched, but the two people are not enemies. The author portrays the image of Sijiao very well. The little quotation that makes people laugh is like a poisonous snake (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia and the rhetoric is quite gorgeous. Astra is an absolute Slytherin, shrewd and ambitious is never a bad word ₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎♡

Marked at 100, it looks great! It prefers a more serious style of writing. The heroine is miserable. When I read the hundred chapters, there are a lot of plots about the game with Dumbledore. The plot deviates a lot from the original work and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I still prefer to read some stupid articles🏳️. However, I personally don't like the type of articles where the heroine is miserable and is always under suspicion. The main reason is that although the heroine is very strong, she doesn't feel happy at all. I don't know what will happen next. If you like beautiful, strong and miserable articles, I recommend reading it~

After reading for a long time, I saw someone in the comment area saying that all this is the heroine's own choice, so her pain does not deserve sympathy, but I don't think that is the case. When a person who has been in darkness all year round suddenly catches a ray of light, she will definitely hold it with all her strength, even if she knows that she will be dripping with blood. Some people say that the heroine is too virginal, but I think if you see the child who has reached a fork in the road like yourself, will you bear to watch him go into the abyss? She is not saving others, she is redeeming herself. She is too lonely. She wants to find the meaning of living, she wants to establish a connection with the world, and she does not want to lose the feelings she has finally gained, so let's give her more love. All the above are personal opinions

He is the most sincere author among the many HP fans I have seen. She (he) is not writing a novel, she (he) is analyzing this magical world. Whether it is from the characterization or the arrangement of the plot, you can appreciate it carefully. It is a good work worth reading several times. Looking forward to its final appearance.