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Is There Any Ma Jiawen Who Plays the Role of Mihoyo in Other Worlds?
I want to read a book similar to "Integrating Star Iron and Playing as Star God at the Start".
I've Really Had Enough of Diaosi Acting, Let's Do Something Decent
Bang Bang Bang! the Heroine Has Designated Yan Qibao as the End, but I Can't Believe That I Can't Find a Good Book.
The Protagonist Possesses the Power of the Herrscher and Is No Longer Disintegrating
Looking for a Novel About Transforming into Mei, Kiana and Other Herrschers
Zhan Shen, the Protagonist Is a Girl
I want to read a book like "Zhan Shen: Actually I am the God of Pancakes and Fruits". That kind of identity is inherently invincible. He is not from time travel, nor is he an aborigine. There is a slight sense of world-weariness
God-Killer, a Man Dressed as a Woman, Please!
Play as Characters from Honkai or Genshen in Other Worlds
Your Majesty, Weichen Wants the Book Played by Mihoyo, Can You Give It to Weichen?
The Protagonist Has a Role-Playing System
It would be better to have fewer roles and each one to play a little longer
Zhan Shen and Star Dome Railway Linkage
I want to read a book similar to "Slayer of Gods: My Star God Spokesperson". Is there any novel in which the God of Destruction appears in the Starry Sky Railway Star God?
Is There Any God-Slaying and Honkai Impact?
Have You Ever Worn Cosplay and Then Worn It into a Non-Cos World?
Is There Any ಥ_ಥ That Kills Gods + Collapses Iron?
If you want to watch something similar to "Zan God: Reincarnation of Ranpo, the Dazzling Ninja is here!" Book.
Looking for a Book Where the Character Beng Tie Travels to Other Worlds
I want to read a book similar to "Zongman: The House of Everything".
I Heard That Zhan Shen Has Released a Lot of New Fanfics, so I'll Post Them as Soon as Possible~
Please Tell Me If There Is Any Book About Killing God + Mihoyo
I want to read a book similar to "Slayer of Gods: My Star God Spokesperson".
I Want the Protagonist to Have Herrscher Abilities but Not in the World of Honkai Impact III.
As long as it's not the kind that can't be seen, it's fine
Is There Any Honkai Impact 3 + God Slayer?
I was thinking that there are Genshin + Zhanshen and Bengtie + Zhanshen, why not Bengsan + Zhanshen? I feel like the Herrscher's power should still be feasible, right?
Two Heroine Fan Fiction
No male-to-female changes! ! !
Are There Any Zhan Shen Books in Which the Protagonist Is a Girl?
I want to read a book similar to "After Traveling Through the God-Slayer, I Dare to Tease the God of Time".
Zhan Shen and Mihoyo
I want to read a book similar to "Slaying the Gods: Hunting the Gods in the Name of Pioneering". I have a feeling that this book was written by Star God himself. The world view of God Killer is very good. Lin Qiye always feels like a decoration.
Killer God + Mihoyo
I would rather see the person in person, and then don't mess with it! Push! Book! Don't recommend people with OOC characters.
How to put it? First of all, the author is a newbie and the text is very immature. Let me talk about the pressure of combat power first. Although it is a normal plot requirement, it cannot be too outrageous. This is what many people said in the comment area. Take Kevin for example. He just came into contact with Honkai Impact when he was still a normal person. Kevin knocked down a tank-level Honkai Impact 30 meters tall with one bat. The author can learn more about Honkai Impact 3 from your description of Kiana. It can be seen that you are a semi-cloud player. You should have only played a few games and learned about Honkai Impact 3 from watching videos and novels. In terms of writing, the first two chapters are quite satisfactory. Later, Kiana appears after sparring with Herrscher of the Sky for no apparent reason. Kiana then sees Himeko inexplicably and recalls that she transformed into a fire flame and jumped out of the consciousness space without even killing him. Where did the body come from? The fight against Konglu was done hastily, and after it was over, he suddenly sensationalized Konglu to change his ways and live with Kiana. It was a bit too taken for granted. According to the stage you wrote, Konglu couldn't be convinced in just a few sentences, unless it was the second creation of the Spirit of the Spring. The story happened without any foreshadowing and was just lumped together abruptly, making it very uncomfortable to watch. The beginning of the novel is very important and is the key to attracting and retaining readers. Since the author is a novice, I would like to give four stars to encourage him. He can learn more experience and treat this novel as a practice. These are my personal opinions. I think these words are relatively objective and useful based on my experience. For proof, please see the browsing time of my homepage. I hope it can help the author.
The writing here is also very beautiful. Author, please update.
It's beautiful, but the words are a little lacking
Good looking, good luck to the author
It's pretty good, but the plot jumps too fast.
I want to see blood flowing into a river
Let's add Janna as the author's heroine.
This book is so beautiful
In fact, the author set the combat power based on the end of the previous civilization. To put it bluntly, the protagonist regains his previous strength.