I'm Already a Jounin, the System Just Came

You can cheat me out of love, but you can't cheat me out of money. I can love many people in my life, but I really can't make much money! "What?" You can deceive me about my feelings, but you can't deceive me about money. I can love many people in my life, but I really can't make much money!

It's a rare sober male protagonist. He doesn't have the pretentious and exaggerated feeling of Japan, and he doesn't have any bonds, passion, forbearance or grievance. He just seems to be in a good mood. He doesn't forcefully suppress his fighting power, but he won't collapse. He also has a thorough understanding of relationships. He doesn't get tired or oily when getting along with him. He won't refuse to communicate with other women because of the single heroine, and he won't go into heat everywhere. One of the rare good books about Naruto.

The writing is very good, a bit biased towards daily writing, but the writing style is very good and can control the development of the plot. There are not so many conspiracies, especially the two old consultants. They are really just old antiques with good intentions who do bad things, unlike Danzo, who is a bad guy. It's just that the update is a bit slow. Urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent. I want to see if you can open a multiple shadow clone to write 24 hours a day!

It's a good novel, and it seems to be developing towards a multiverse. It might end here. I felt a little tired of reviewing it before the 200th chapter, so I skipped it and found that it turned into a harem novel. I like the idea of ​​a single heroine or no heroine. It is recommended that the author add a harem tag to avoid attracting people like me who like to have no heroines, and lose ratings in vain.

There is a high probability that it was written by a female author! I didn't even look at the author's gender! But the book is still good! Nothing too poisonous! There are a lot of two-dimensional memes! But not to the point of being disgusted! Overall a very good book!

No need to say more! Highly recommended! A very nice fanfic! [Eat melon] Advantages: The writing is meticulous and humorous, and some new and interesting Internet memes are reasonably inserted. The pace is moderate, the author knows what the readers want to see, knows what to write in more detail and what to omit, making it very comfortable to read. The plot is not procrastinating, the characters are vividly written, and every character written in the book is very interesting. The protagonist's personality is clear, there will be no capricious changes, and it is very reasonable. [Eat melon] Disadvantages: Very few, almost none. At the beginning of the novel, Kushina's feelings for the protagonist appear very abruptly, although there are explanations later. But to be honest, this is not really a shortcoming. [Eat melon] Evaluation: Judging from the author's writing trend, it should be to write about multiple worlds. I hope that the combat power will not collapse and the writing style will be maintained. This book is a perfect masterpiece. [Eat melon] Rating: I can give it between 9.3 And 9.4. The future is infinite. Come on, author [salute] Later, the combat power increased faster and faster, causing the plot rhythm to be written faster and faster. I couldn't continue writing, so I had to end it [face covering]

It's very interesting, very imaginative, and it made my stomach hurt from laughing so hard.

This novel is like a wonderful journey through time and space, taking readers into a world full of infinite possibilities from the moment the pages are turned. Its charm lies in its indescribable attraction - it does not rely on thrilling plots or gorgeous rhetoric, but relies on a unique temperament that makes people immersed in it and unwilling to leave for a long time. The structure of the novel is exquisite and natural, as if it is an invisible network woven by the author inadvertently. The clues of the story are intertwined just right, without making people feel confused, and full of progressive suspense. Each chapter is like a well-designed maze, guiding the reader step by step deeper into it. When the truth is gradually revealed, the feeling of sudden enlightenment is like a beam of light in the darkness, illuminating the whole soul. The characterization of the characters is even more delicate. Each character looks like an ordinary person coming out of life, but they show extraordinary power in the story. They have no superpowers or a perfect aura, but they struggle, grow, and fight in their own destiny. Their joys and sorrows are so real, as if they are right next to us, and their choices and decisions also make us constantly reflect on our own lives while reading. The protagonist's journey is full of ups and downs, but every setback becomes an opportunity for growth, and the seemingly ordinary supporting characters also add warmth and strength to the story in their own way. The advancement of the plot is even more exciting. The author does not deliberately create thrilling scenes, but uses delicate emotional descriptions and real life fragments to make the story create waves in calmness. Every turn seems natural and reasonable, and every detail is full of profound meaning. This seemingly plain but hidden mysterious narrative method allows readers to always maintain a sense of tension while reading, but they will not feel tired. The language style is also a major feature of this novel. The author's writing is concise and warm, without too many embellishments, but it can directly touch people's hearts. Every sentence is like a carefully polished pearl, exuding a soft light. Whether it is the description of natural scenery or the portrayal of the characters' hearts, they are full of delicate observations and profound insights. The power of this kind of writing makes readers feel a long-lost purity while reading. The most moving thing is the emotions and themes conveyed in this novel. It does not deliberately exaggerate the joys and sorrows, nor does it have any profound philosophy, but it shows the brilliance of human nature in ordinary stories. It allows us to see the beauty and hope in life, and also allows us to find resonance in reading. It is a literary work in the true sense, not only to tell a story, but also to convey a kind of warmth and touch the heart of every reader. In short, this novel is a rare masterpiece. With its unique charm, every reader will be immersed in it and have a long aftertaste. It is a work worth reading over and over again. You can discover new details every time you read it, and gain new insights every time you think about it. It is a literary work that can really get into the readers' hearts and a truly good novel.

It's beautiful. I've been looking for a story about the heroine Kushina for a lifetime [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

This book is also a rare good book in Tomato. Among the Naruto fan fiction, this book and "The World of Naruto through the Eyes of Reincarnation" are the only ones that can make me interested in reading. Please, the author, please don't finish it [please read carefully]

Not bad, not bad. There is nothing wrong with the power promotion system and basic logic. There are no poisonous points overall. The power grows faster and faster in the later stage, which is normal for system flow and unlimited flow. Overall, this book is quite good and worth reading.

The rating has been lowered, at least 9 points or above. There is nothing toxic about the plot. The ideas are interesting and the writing is passable. So far, it is a high-quality product. I hope it will not be unable to suppress the plot in the future. The writing and plot structure are 8.9? ? ? Why did you offend someone? When I changed the world and wrote the entry "What True Lord", I was worried that the subsequent plot changes were too blunt or the author's writing was not enough. As a result, from Demon Slayer to Marvel, the logic is smooth and the plot is smooth. It is an absolute fairy tale.

This start is okay, the key is that there are too few updates, rush rush... When you update 2,000 words a day, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the rawness of your writing will be criticized. When you update 4,000 words every day, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you update 6,000 words a day, the meager praise begins to sound, and the number of dead ends begins to decrease. When you update 10,000 words every day, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you update 20,000 words every day, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you update 100,000 words every day, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

A very well written piece of music. The perspective of the mountain clan is rare. The details of life combat missions are very realistic. The low score is probably due to the lack of coolness of the article and the whitewashing of the consulting duo, which many diodes cannot accept.

The writing is okay, and the protagonist's growth is controlled very reasonably and acceptably. Even if you are a starting jounin, you can't control the progress, and the moderate jokes are funny at the same time. Important battles are also described in detail. OK. The author really thought about things from the perspective of the protagonist.

There are too few single heroine Kyu Yukina books, I finally found one [crying][crying][crying]

The writing is quite good, and I don't think other Hokages will go through the main plot of the anime once, and there are really not many people who major in illusions in the Hokage novels. I like the invisible harem story very much. The ones I can confirm are Kushina and Tsunade. The others are more obscure. In the end, more than 30 people are mentioned.

I finished half of it in one night. I took off after killing Madara with more than a hundred chapters. Then I went straight to Invincible at a fast pace. I won't watch it when I go to other worlds. If you like watching Naruto, just read half of it. In fact, I think it's good to write some daily life after Invincible.

The book is quite good. I saw foreigners watching Kung Fu on Douyin, and I immediately thought of a new black entry that the author might be able to use. , Zhou Xingchi threw throwing knives in Kung Fu and ended up hitting himself. [100% Hit in the shoulder][laughing evilly]

It's a very good Naruto fanfic. There aren't many Tomato writings that are this good. The protagonist is finally not some Uchiha bitter and hateful, and the cheats are reasonable and interesting.

The beginning was perfect. Although there was too much content in the system, I could still read it. After all, it was fresh. Until the beginning of the third game, it was like a train that derailed, losing some readers and the book. It was reasonable but I couldn't write a million words. A reasonable outline is quite important for a book that I have read for such a long time. The five stars are mainly because of the rhythm and content. It is comfortable and neat in daily writing. The male protagonist has a likable personality, the system is too powerful, there are many female protagonists and Kushina is included, it is perfect, [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying], it is very important to write Conan or One Piece with such strong writing skills. It is quite important to be able to write Japanese comics well in daily life. It has interesting ideas that hit the mark perfectly, does not ruin the original work too much, and is a fun and reasonable book. Nothing is too bad at Tomato.

This is a Naruto fanfic that is worth appreciating. It is not set in the Naruto era, but is set before the Third War. The protagonist has a sinister character, coupled with a series of sexy operations, coupled with the funny entry system, and the rare use of Kushina as the heroine. It is really funny and full of shit! I hope the author will work hard to update it continuously! Come on!

It's good, but I feel that the combat power has increased too quickly, and it's almost multi-dimensional. It's a bit unsatisfactory.

Is Xin Jiunai a single heroine? Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

I'm almost finished reading the update. The remaining chapters are too jumpy and I can't keep up, but the first 100 or so chapters are still quite interesting. It would be better if I added some intrigues or dark plots. However, the upgrade of combat power is a bit fast. Although it is fun to watch, I am a bit afraid that you will not be able to grasp it.

Well, it's indeed pretty good. Unfortunately, the plot progresses a bit quickly. The entry settings of the system are quite interesting. Both the positive and negative aspects are set well. In addition, regarding the so-called whitewashing of the other two people in Konoha F4, I do not support it, but it is acceptable. The protagonist is in a free man state with sufficient combat power and will not be affected by the two of them. It does not matter if he is defined as a good person. Anyway, there is basically no plot between these two people.

I have read Chapter 5 so far, and I feel very good. The writing is very touching to me. I will give it five stars first. I hope the author can maintain his standard.

The Naruto part of this book is really good. The author has his own understanding of Naruto, and the explanation is very reasonable. If this is an anime adaptation of Naruto, I think it will be very exciting. The first half is really good.

It has a beginning and an end, and is not broken. Although the rest of the writing is a bit boring due to imagination, the whole book is funny and relaxing. It is a rare Naruto fan in foreign persimmons, 👍

Overall, I really like this book. It has a relaxed and pleasant atmosphere. The pace in the first and middle stages is okay, but the pace in the later stages feels a bit fast. Of course, from the setting point of view, it is amazing that this book can be written for such a long time. Many books fall apart in the middle stage. The setting is very good, but the method of obtaining abilities is a bit too simple. As a result, the protagonist basically has no pressure at all in the whole book, but the plot is still relatively smooth, and there are not many poisonous points. I feel that the score is still slightly low, I think the score is about 9.2.