Pirate: I Am Developing My Power in the Revolutionary Army

The author gives himself a favorable review. [Cool] Explain. First, this is a semi-invincible fanfic of fruit + bloodline. The main focus is bloodline. There are space pirates in the One Piece world. Who knows what kind of big world this is. The strange bloodline is somewhat normal [face covering]. Don't talk about the strength of the fruit. The protagonist is invincible in the end. If you feel happy in the middle, that's it. If you don't like it, just pretend I didn't say it. Second, this is a novel about developing power, and the time span is not that fast. Of course, I want to write it longer, but the current results are not ideal. I may consider speeding up the progress and trying not to be too eunuch. Third, there is nothing to say. If you have any questions, you can ask them and I will try my best to consider them. Now there are no comments or reminders for updates. I don't know what my problem is. Maybe I'm just enjoying myself and just treat it as my YY. I wish you all the best! !

Give me a suggestion, welcome to discuss: When writing a pirate fanfic, you must consider the development and potential of the Devil Fruit eaten by the protagonist. The strength of the Devil Fruit is not absolute, but is determined by the developer's talent, combat suitability, domineering combination, plot positioning, and the nature of his willpower. Combining Kaido's "Domineering Supremacy Theory", Oda's preference for "plot killing", and the setting that "Devil Fruit is the product of wish power", the top fruit must meet the following conditions: 1. Rule-level ability: able to break through the laws of physics or the law of cause and effect; 2. Highly compatible with Haki: the fruit's ability can be strengthened or qualitatively changed by Haki; 3. Awakening potential: After awakening, you will have the ability to transform the environment or operate concepts; 4. Carrying the will: Resonating with the "will of the world" or the needs of the times.

How should I put it? [Thinking] Is this spring fruit too over the top? It took more than a year to develop and it is more comprehensive than Doflamingo's fruit ability development. Also, this Bacalia tribe has the blood of the giant tribe, but the "ability to turn abstraction into reality" is too It's incredible. It's a match for Yubel who has the power of thinking. It's obvious that this Spring Fruit is only a low-level fruit in the first half of the Grand Line and is on the same level as the Kilogram Fruit, but the protagonist just ate the Shock Fruit (physical destructive power) + the Meat Ball Fruit (healing method and function). Sex) + the feeling of Shining Fruit (full compression shaving speed), it squeezes out the first Shocking Fruit in the Superman series. According to the author's thinking, this fruit should be a stretch fruit or a bouncing fruit (similar to Fujitora Isho's Gravity Fruit or Golden Lion Shiji's Fluttering Fruit) He can also learn the Sixth Marine Style at a glance, and killed three spy agents of the world government just after time travel. CP0 is very unreasonable, and there is a faint tendency that the whole body turns into a spring instead of the natural elements turning into wires. Generally speaking, it is a bit abstract. Are the female protagonists currently Betty (captain of the Eastern District Revolutionary Army with the strongest auxiliary superhuman-type Inspiring Fruit ability) and Lua (original half-fur bunny girl)? [What]

A good novel with few problems and good ideas. In fact, I really want to complain about Bird Cage (its toughness is infinitely high, and it can't be cut open even with a smile). If all the moves are made at this level (it can be invincible)

Why don't you add a system? The spring fruit has been developed into a shock fruit. I don't dare to think about it later. I'm afraid it won't be the same as the rubber fruit. When awakened, it will become all springs, right? [Smile]

Not bad, the writing is fast and not boring

To be honest, it's pretty good.

Come on, you can stick to what you write.

It's so interesting. I hope the author will include Robin, Raijiu, Rebekah, Violet, Yamato, and Aunt's beautiful daughter, Mitsukihi, Stoshi and other beauties! ! ! ! There is also a sword of Qiu Shui or Demon Sword, plus an empress! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very nice, super cool

There is no poison point yet, you can enter the trap

The Seven Star Sword is so awesome, don't think about it.

It looks good, wouldn't the author consider changing the cover and name? [Facepalm]