Zhanshen: My Line Is Not Simple

The front part is okay, and the creativity is good, but when I start traveling through the world later, I feel a little confused, and I feel that there are many details that need to be polished. But overall it's not bad. Come on, author

I think it looks great. Although the timeline is a bit messy, I think it looks really good. I hope the author can add Zhang Zhao in the explosive speed car (I don't mean to intimidate, I just hope, because I think Zhang Zhao is very useful)

The red string is broken, the bright mirror is missing, the morning dew is shining, the fragrance is resting, the old head is groaning, the pain is parting, try to eat more, don't miss the concubine, the golden water is flowing, and I will say goodbye to you.

It looks good, but the author had better add a zombie gathering place at the beginning of the article [face covering]

I finally wrote a book about traveling through the heavens starting from killing gods.

Not bad, the plot is quite attractive? It also integrates other worlds, such as the world of Conan, Jackie Chan, One Piece, etc. Save the God of Zanli and save other worlds by the way.

It's nice to look at. The subject matter is quite new.

Overall it's pretty good

The imagination is novel, but it's very beautiful.

It's pretty good, at least better than what I wrote.

The logic is clear, very good and unique.

Multiple heroines or single heroine?