Transform into a Martial Arts Lolita and Separate the Road Between Life and Death with One Punch

Why have I become lazy? Su Bai used to write at least 2 or even 3 or 4 chapters a day.

Okay, it's the same as the previous book, just a bit dull. With more interesting things, the viewing experience will be greatly improved. At least, no one will quit halfway because of the too long lull.

In Chapter 113, the combat power has reached the ninth level. If it is counted 50 times, it is considered invincible in the world. . . . . My sister has not yet entered the apprenticeship, my best friend has not yet entered the first grade, and the protagonist has not yet entered college. The previous interpersonal relationships are no longer on the same level, and I feel like my fighting power has collapsed. Previously, it was campus + sister development + best friend posts + upgrades. These highlights are very good. After Invincible, the previous attractions will inevitably be weakened, and I don't know where the subsequent attractions will turn. Wait and see later to comment [Learned] Well, since the battle strength collapsed, updates unexpectedly stopped. . . . . It is very difficult to fill the pit in the front, and the author has pitted himself. It's a pity, this book is actually very good. It would be much better if you suppress your combat power and wait until you graduate from college to start exploding. Sad [covering face]

If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so? Why bother to treat the sister so perfunctorily? It seems that the sister is a little pretentious. That's right, my brother is weak and needs a lot of rest. It was wrong of my sister to urge her brother in this way. My sister is also very distressed for hurting her brother! But my sister is feeling sorry for her brother, so you can't help but update. Am I right? Brother?

Now Nan Huairou has not awakened his talent. Once the opponent's talent is awakened, he will directly fly into the sea and soar into the sky. What does this paragraph mean? Does she have any other talents? Why don't I seem to see it written down? The fact that she is still slightly obese after learning the Zhuang Technique shows that Song Yuanyuan comes from a good family and does not lack nutrition at all. She is very different from her. She will definitely be able to awaken her martial arts talent before the martial arts exam in the third year of high school. Nan Huairou's panel can't be found and only the superior bones are found. The talent of Song Yuanyuan's panel is listed as "none", but later the author will awaken his martial arts talent later. This setting was not clearly written and was just brushed off. If I missed it, it's my fault.

The writing is pretty good, and the battles are very graphic. I just don't know who the other heroine is? But I prefer them all to be wings. All earned. And as long as you are not sure about the relationship, there is a high probability that it will not be blocked. Of course, this uncertain relationship is only in the article and will not be known outside the article. However, this will place higher demands on the author's writing style. The plot needs to be more exciting to attract readers. Of course, everything is based on the author's settings. Also, the characterizations of my sister and Su Huairou are too flat. It would be better to give them a more contrasting character.

The new book supports me. It's still a poor start with cheats. This time I have a sister, but I don't know if she's her.

It was really interesting to write. But the routine is still the same as before. It's just that the protagonist of the novel from two or three years ago was replaced by a female.

Currently, the content of the posts is small, non-toxic and non-revealing. Good reviews! The feedback brought by the protagonist's upgrade is relatively comfortable

Su Lingyin improved very quickly and worked very hard. Nan Huairou helped Su Lingyin a lot and was a very good friend. It just feels like the two sisters Su Lingyin and Su Ya are starting to drift apart. Su Lingyin is not as tall as her sister Su Ya, and is treated like a primary school student by Han Xue, haha. Very nice, the author will update it a lot

Can the author write that the protagonist was framed into a secret realm and held back by a mysterious inheritance for a few years? Then they all thought that the protagonist was dead, and the protagonist's sister also thought that her sister was gone. Then she transformed into an S-level spiritual root. Then when the protagonist came out, he found that his sister was invincible, and he was directly attacked and taken down by his sister. This would be very fun.

So far, it doesn't seem to be toxic. The student who played well behaved a bit disgustingly, but he stopped immediately, so it's not a big problem.

I hope my sister will have more roles in the future. I feel like my sister will become a backdrop if this continues. Nan is a perfect fit for the heroine. She has a deep background and is at odds with her family. She formed a deep friendship with the protagonist in Novice Village alone. She is attracted to the protagonist and has a full stack of buffs.

It's simple, biased towards hundreds, the writing style is excellent, and it's biased toward hydrography, and there are zero descriptions of women's clothes, women's bodies, and women's degeneration. The writing of a strong female character is very detailed. She has grown up step by step, and the speed has been accelerated in the later period. The writing is very good, and it is very enjoyable to read. There is also a bit of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, and the setting is also very good. High martial arts + alien beasts from another world invade the earth. It is a pity to discontinue it.

It's so beautiful, no need to say more. I came here from Su Bai, and the writing is so good. But I still hope that this book will have a complete story. The last book was really fun to read, but the progress in the later stages of writing was too fast, and many pitfalls have not been filled [crying]

The same style as always. Focusing on the improvement of the protagonist, the interaction between the two heroines is very light. It is estimated that it will be as powerful in the later stage as the book of Changsheng Loli. Like!

Will there be someone with the protagonist template later?

Author, please don't stop updating! Come on! Come back, author! (Very loud)

Meow~ Su Ya's big book is still so beautiful. Come on, Suya!

I think it's ok. I still hope that I can show off my talents in a high profile to gain resources and make my sister better. In this environment, we can describe the senior management working together to fight monsters, instead of hiding and pretending to be pigs and eating tigers.

It's great. I hope the author can continue to write it. To put it bluntly, I don't know why I always get interrupted or unfinished books like this. It's very uncomfortable. I sincerely hope that the author can continue to write more books. I will continue to support the author. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good

This book has a score of 8.6. It's a little bit toxic, and there aren't many plots. Who can fill in the gaps I'm missing [Punch Out]

The upgrade speed later is frighteningly fast.

Hao Kan, [adoration] comes from the author's previous book

It looked good in the early stage, but the pace was relatively slow. This book most likely borrowed from the story background system of Swallowing Starry Sky or something like that, but later on as the talent awakened, it grew too fast, and it felt like there was a big gap. It can be seen that the author is not good at writing this kind of article. If you add some words if you don't write well, it will easily fall apart. I hope the author can keep writing and don't finish it hastily. I have been chasing it for a long time and I have read it seriously. Come on, author.

The plot of overdevelopment in the early stages is great to watch, and it didn't drag out even after watching the overdevelopment episode. The best snowball should be like this. As long as there is no collapse later, you are really invincible. This kind of problem is that the plot is good and I don't know how much more can be written.

I am looking forward to the future development, the author wants to work hard ＾0＾~

So pretty, meow, the most beautiful meow in the universe

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