Cultivation to Immortality and Immortality

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot is reasonable! After reading more than 400 chapters, I feel that the first part is okay, but in the later part, I feel that the protagonist is weak in combat. He pretends to be invincible while killing several foundation builders with a golden elixir at the sixth level. I am really speechless for a long time. There are more than one plot like this... I am almost poisoned! ! Abandoned the book! !

He is so obscene and obscene that he only takes action when he is always at a higher level than the enemy. This habit is very worthy of praise. Unlike other novels, while talking about being obedient, he always encounters life and death crises and relies on inexplicable power to save his life! The only shortcoming is that there is no harem, there are not many water characters, and the author is very conscientious. The plot line is very clear and detailed. I must like it [like]

Good-looking and reasonable, this is how a mortal can cultivate immortality, starting from 0-1 and getting up step by step. Very true and reasonable. It's unreasonable to compare to other people who are very awesome at the beginning of time travel. Recommended to watch Not bad, not bad. It suits my taste. I hope the author can write millions of words. I also give some suggestions to the author: At present, the mainstream of Tomato🍅 is the time-travel + system. The protagonist accidentally traveled to the immortal world system, and the protagonist also mentioned that he wanted to go home (Earth). Then this return home may become the inner demon of the protagonist (it will only be mentioned after the emperor, saint or more realm breakthroughs). Then the protagonist becomes an emperor in the small world step by step, and the emperor in the small world becomes an emperor. Emperors in other worlds will find out. (Era contains multiple immortal planets, the big world has emperors, and there is another era outside the era). There can be a heroine, but she cannot be a virgin or a drag queen. We can meet once in hundreds, thousands, or tens of thousands of years, because we have our own paths to walk and we can't always be together. The return to the Earth plane can be found after conquering one's own era. (At this time, the earth plane is bursting with technology, but it is still impossible to cultivate immortality.) The protagonist returns home, and the inner demon has broken through the realm. He helps the earth plane church to cultivate immortality (the earth plane cannot cultivate immortality without aura, and provides things that produce aura to transform the planet). The protagonist takes away part of the technology. The earth plane combines technology and immortality, and then the protagonist returns to his own era. Hundreds of thousands of years later (at this time, the era is attacked by another era), the protagonist cannot resist (at this time, the earth plane can span multiple universes due to the combination of technology and immortality). Because the protagonist leaves a signal mark, the interstellar travel on the earth plane discovers and goes to the protagonist's era. The earth plane behind supports the protagonist in escaping. The earth plane also remains in the protagonist's era. It's actually almost finished here, because it already has 3-5 million words. If you still have something to write about later, you can also explore unknown eras. Refer to the books "Undead Emperor Master", "Chen Xun", "From Immortal Cultivation Civilization to Scientific and Technological Civilization" and "Xianwu Emperor" for ideas. But you cannot imitate them and come up with your own new ideas to write. Author oil

I've recently fallen in love with this type of book. It's really good. It's quite funny. I keep reading it. It's not bad. The author is amazing. I really persevere. I update it every day with 6,000 [likes] and support [laughs]

The author's writing style is really good, it scored at least 9.5 On Tomato. It's a pity that the setting and excitement of this novel are a bit unsatisfactory. Otherwise, it would not be the current 8.2 Points. Come on, I still give you 5 stars.

It's a very good book, but it's a bit short. To sum it up, it's 6. It can get a little crazy sometimes. There is no need for the plot to drag, the pace is neither fast nor slow. There aren't many pitfalls. What I don't like is that Xiaobai's life experience is a bit cliche in writing. I almost gave up on it. Although I just mentioned it, I remember it deeply. There are also a few trump cards. Although there are many trump cards, there are no powerful trump cards. I am playing against someone who is a level higher than myself. The enemy used all his cards and narrowly escaped being seriously injured. Xiao Changqing (I can't remember his name) is a better character (I like it more personally). I suggest writing him as a monk who failed to break through to the Nascent Soul (perhaps you think so too). The emotional line is also pretty good, but I don't recommend having a harem. There are also too many lines about mortals, which makes it boring to watch too much. There are also frequent enemies, and then kill people to get treasures. If you have watched this kind of plot too much, it is recommended to explore forbidden areas and obtain treasures (such as the Nascent Soul Cave). There is also the person whose fate is the protagonist (I forgot his name, it seems to be called Chen Fan). I suggest that he also practice and improve faster. For example, the protagonist gives him fire-attribute ores/spiritual objects. It feels like the things given to him are a bit less. After all, Chen Fan is not nice to the protagonist. There's a lot more I want to say, so I'd better wait until you finish the update to check it out. I'll save it up, and the updates are a bit sparse.

The author's writing style is very good, the story is fascinating and beautiful!

This book is very interesting, the content is light-hearted and not bloody, and it is a rare good book.

It is well written. Each character is vividly written and not clichéd. There are no plots that are disgusting or insulting to one's IQ. The plot is also written smoothly without being laggy and the word count is low. I look forward to writing better in the future.

Not bad, compact and exciting, no peeing spots throughout the whole process, super exciting. Come and read [Admiration]

It's not bad, don't say it, this kind of dog is very good-looking, the plot is not long-winded, ups and downs, just don't go off track, hold on [like][like][like]

A very good fairy tale, slow-paced but steady. Even though it is said to be a forbidden love story, the plot caused by jealousy is more than half the length. There are too many emotional descriptions, and there is a faint tendency to recruit a harem.

It's not bad. The writing is relatively smooth, but the updates are too slow. I waited for a few days to save it and read it together. The beginning is very exciting. It's quite addictive to read. Please update it soon.

Their relationship goes from suspicion and testing to gradual trust. There is no brainless sweetheart, only the pull and sincerity of adults. Every emotional rise is deeply tied to the advancement of the plot, making people heart-wrenching and heart-pounding.

A very good Gou Daoliu, not the kind who can't walk when he sees a woman. He is decisive and decisive in killing. Come on, author.

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A pretty good article about cultivating immortals, the writing is first-rate

It is very exciting, very beautiful, easy to understand, and gradually deepens. It makes people unable to stop reading it. I read it in one sitting. I hope the author can write more excellent and more attractive novels. I will give you like [like] [like]

Integrating the elements of Immortality Style and Gou Dao, it breaks the conventional narrative of cultivating immortals and explores the way back home in the story of survival in another world.

It's okay, it looks good from the front, let's evaluate it first

The author's writing style is exquisite and well written.

The content is okay and the storyline is cleverly designed.

The story is fast-paced and a good-looking fairy tale.

The transformation from an ordinary person to an old man is very realistic. There is no golden finger, it all depends on careful observation and learning. Every step is on thin ice, every decision is a matter of life and death. The author perfectly shows how terrible the price and wisdom a "mortal" needs to pay if he wants to survive in a world where the jungle is strong.

Immortality does not suppress the protagonist's cultivation! Love it, looks good

I prefer this book about cultivating immortals, the pace is soothing

The structure is concise and reasonable, the writing style is delicate, and the writing is excellent.

The plot is compact, smooth, natural and rigorous. It's really interesting and I'm completely hooked.

The twists and turns and bizarre storyline are very attractive.

It's good-looking and has a little more novelty than some similar books. It's interesting to read only if the chapter in the original world is boring. After all, it has reached its climax in another world. The sudden drop in pace is a bit off-putting, but the original world is okay. A book worth recommending [Like][Like][Like]