Shanyang Li's Immortal Cultivation Record

The logic and rhythm are very good, but I have obviously been a little anxious recently. Don't be anxious, get your mind right and write well. A masterpiece with tens of millions of words is not a dream. I hope the author will become a god in one battle! Write well, write slowly, and don't collapse! ! !

This book is rigorous in its combat power, and there will be no collapse scenes or exaggerated plots. Except that the first forty chapters are a bit bland, the following plot is worth watching, so feel free to go [Salute]

This book is the most popular novel about immortality that I have ever read. There is no golden finger, no system panel, ten times the time, no soul guidance of old monsters, no dimension reduction attacks by time travellers, and no leapfrogging monsters. There will be birth, old age, sickness and death, and there will be a lot of deaths in wars. The tribesmen have their own ideas, and marriage depends on whether they can match each other.

The best novel in history, there are no brainless chances, no cheats, no systems, only practical and capable, full of content, and reasonable plot. If it continues like this, it will definitely be better than A Mortal's Journey to Immortality, and it will definitely be made into a TV series or animation. I'll just leave these words here for everyone to witness.

The writing is actually pretty good, and I prefer it among the family stories. But I still want to remind the author that every character created by you has his own intention. Whether it is a decent villain or a villain, you should treat your characters with care and not give them names like epilepsy. If you don't respect the characters you write, how can you make others respect you? Respect your book? I feel that the portrait of the author reflected in the novel is a bit vulgar. . .

A very nice book, but the price is a bit low.

"The whole book is like a finely woven web. From the foreshadowing in the first chapter to the current closed loop, every twist and turn is both unexpected and reasonable. What impressed me most was the psychological description of the protagonist when he discovered the truth. It was not deliberately sensational, but it made me clenched my fists. The only regret is that the middle branch line is a little slow, but the overall rhythm is tight. I stayed up late to read it and still have more to say - suitable for readers who like to follow the plot immersively.

To be honest, in my heart this book definitely has a 9.5. The protagonist does not have a powerful golden finger or a system. They are just the right resources and are quite reasonable. The only regret is Jiang Yao's pseudo-elixir. I hope that in the future, when the protagonist goes to Shenxu Mountain, he can arrange a secret method for the heroine to cultivate a pseudo-elixir into a golden egg. It will be perfect. (The above is my personal opinion, please don't criticize, and the author updates it three times a day. [Like] [Like])

It's good to read. I've been reading it for several days. I'll give it a try first. It's a five-star review. Let's see how it goes in the middle period. Many novels are very boring in the middle period. Most novels are okay in the early stage, but decline in the middle period and turn into garbage in the later period. I'll wait and see.

It's a refreshing piece of writing in the Shuangwen era, but I always feel like something is missing. Although I don't know exactly what's missing, it's definitely something that can't be written with serious software (not Huang)

The writing is very good. After writing hundreds of thousands of words in the human world, I put the small world on the clan and fly to the spiritual world together. After cultivating to the end of the tribulation, I put on the clan and ascend to the fairy world step by step. It is very good to directly create a Taoist family. The natal magic weapon is a failure. If you use a ball of fire as your natal magic weapon, isn't that missing a way to fight the enemy? Originally, the golden elixir monks had elixir fire. Wouldn't it be nice to directly subdue the fire and make a natal magic weapon?

This book is good. I have been reading it for so long. The protagonist is not perverted. It is very suitable for people with brains to read. It is very comfortable and recommended.

I finally found a real article on cultivating immortals without cheats or systems. It's not easy. Please update according to the number of words in Qinglian Peak.

Overall, it's pretty good. The subject matter is novel and the story line is more logical. It's similar to the story of a mortal cultivating immortality. I don't understand why the rating is so low. This novel is definitely above 9.5, And the author updates it 3 to 4 times a day. It's very good [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Hasn't the Luo family been destroyed? Why did the Luo family suddenly appear again?

Five-star support

It is recommended that the author prepare a family relationship table in the first hundred chapters so that readers will not be confused when reading [smile]

The family power that develops very logically, real development, no obtrusive exaggeration, fascinating, the rating should not be so low

There are no major problems overall, and the logic is all online. It's worth a look.

It's very interesting. I hope the author can update it five times a day and three times a day. It's enough to read.

I like this kind of immortality cultivation book that has no system, no extra spiritual treasures, no old man with a white beard, and no treasure space. It is a down-to-earth cultivation family that practices step by step and moves forward step by step. Good luck to the author! I'm optimistic about you! ! !

Not bad, not overly exaggerated, very real

I've been following the updates, and I really like this novel about family cultivating immortals.

Not bad, it's an okay non-system and cheat-free immortality novel. I can't stand the cheat-finger system. It doesn't have any sense of intensity. It just does the system tasks and then directly pushes them all the way.

It's very relaxing to watch, and there's no intrigue. It feels a bit like reading martial arts novels before.

A good book

Five-star support

Beautiful, really beautiful

No one is watching? Why isn't there a single paragraph comment? ? ?

How about four pictures a day, each with 6,000 words?