After Her True Identity Was Exposed, the Princess’s Consort Panicked

The first dozen chapters are very depressing, and I'm sorry for your discomfort. Except for correcting typos, I spent the rest of the time reading the most brutal chapters 6 and 13 over and over again, constantly savoring the suffering of the protagonist. It's not that I brought the protagonist into me, but I have always played Yu Gui, such an extremely complex and contradictory person. She is lonely, has low self-esteem, is tough, paranoid and even crazy. In my initial outline, there was no Yu Gui's adoptive mother and younger sister, but when I was playing her, I discovered that she was... Really lonely, so I ended up with a gentle mother and a silly younger sister. I don't know if Zhao Yaoyao will become a pervert in his return. I will be so perplexed that I will suddenly think of her in my spare time, and then my heart will itch and my mind will be full of her.

It's good-looking. Regardless of the men I mentioned earlier, even though they are two girls, their emotional lines feel quite normal and not ups and downs. I feel like their emotional lines go with the flow. Even when they first met, even if they wore men's clothes and gradually got to know each other, I don't know how the little princess knew each other. The woman who disguised herself as a man didn't know how she could relax and like Gui. She just felt that their fate was very natural. The princess found out that Gui was a woman and revealed her identity in a very cryptic way. But I have to say that the author's writing style is very delicate and the writing is quite good in the hundreds of chapters.

It's not a novel setting, but I've still seen it now, so I'll boldly comment on it [Note][Note] The writing is actually average, but sometimes a sentence will suddenly appear that makes me smile. I like this very much. Like discovering a treasure Overall it leans toward everyday style. Occasionally, a bit of power style is interspersed, but the effect... Can only be said to be okay and needs improvement [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] I like your simple background setting very much, without a lot of baffling background abilities, so even though the setting of your whole book is not novel, I still read it. Sometimes clear soup with less water is also good. Give you a like 😘😘 I prefer that your next narrative tend to be more everyday. You are obviously not good at describing power struggles in the court. So the part where the protagonist goes to court seems very childish. You can try to reduce this kind of plot and summarize it with a brief description. The effect will be better I like this kind of ordinary daily life very much, I hope you can stick to it [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Come on [sending my heart]

The back part is quite sweet, it makes people's mouths turn up. It's just that the main character in the previous part was too miserable, and too much was written about the previous life. I wrote 6 or 7 chapters. I could write less about the previous life, and don't make the main character too miserable.

Good looking. Love watching. The author's writing is very good The protagonist's emotional description is full Very good article 🥰🥰[Admiration] Sister sister sister sister sister (cross out) Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie

It's very well written. In my opinion, the first few chapters that many people criticize are actually the shaping of the protagonist's personality. It is precisely because of what she has experienced 🤭 that the protagonist has become a tough and somewhat insecure person. This is also the source of the protagonist's personality charm.

The author's writing style is really good, and the narrative style of Xu Xu Lai is not so straightforward, interspersed with some beautiful or poignant ancient poems, which makes it very comfortable to read. The author's writing is really good. The proportions of describing scenes, environments and people are very good. There is not too much dialogue, but the narrative is very clear. The sentences are beautiful and smooth, with basically no typos. However, there are some things in the plot that are not very reasonable, and some things are not very in line with that era, even though it is fictional. If you read it as a sweet love story, it's pretty good.

The first part is indeed a bit depressing, which may be why many people can't stand it, but I don't think it's too hard to accept. The second part is more relaxed, although it's a bit idealistic, but reading novels is just to have fun and relax, so I don't think there's much need to worry about it. Generally speaking, the writing is pretty good. The writing style can be a bit plain and simple in some places, but it's still okay, come on, author. If you really can't stand the front part, you can actually skip reading, or you can just read the back part 🤔🤔🤔

The writing is very good, it's a bit sharp in the early stage, but it gets better later on. It's sweet but not industrial saccharine. In short, it's very beautiful.

It's beautiful, the rare fresh writing style really makes people's eyes shine. The past and present life in the first few chapters are all tragedies, but they do tell a good story.