High Martial: Your Trait? It Belongs to Me Now!

It's a new subject, and the writing is very good. The author is a newcomer, and the writing is already very good, but I have a few suggestions. Don't advance the story too hastily, otherwise there will be a sense of discontinuity. For example, in the first few chapters, some people suddenly appear without explanation, which feels strange, but the progress later is very good, but I feel that it is still too rushed. As the saying goes, it is better to slow down the pace of the story and flesh out the characters and world view. After all, it is a new subject, and it will feel better to read. Finally, the author gives a big boost.

When I first saw the title of the book, I didn't pay much attention to it because the title was too common. I preconceptionally thought it was just an ordinary cool novel. As I slowly read the back part, I found that the author's skills are very good. Whether the protagonist is upgrading or fighting monsters, it's quite fun, but it's fun but also smart, and I think this kind of article that writes about the consciousness of the galaxy is really good. I think whether a book is good or not depends on whether it can arouse the reader's emotions. Then I think this book is a good book. It was a pleasure to read, and it aroused my emotions. The writing style is also good, and the foreshadowing and dialogue in the text are very high-quality. I recommend everyone to read it.

There are not many bad points, but the number of female characters who may become heroines is a bit too large, but it's not harmful. Let's see where it goes next.

There are many elements! It feels good! -Aha

Come on, author! After searching for it on Tomato for so long, your book is still pretty good, at least it looks smooth. I hope it will continue to be more polished and the setting will have a lot of development to write about. Come on!! @ Please

Although it is a world of entries, since the author has already written about Kung Fu and basic martial arts, shouldn't he add some more? You can't rely entirely on the entries, but the writing is okay 🤔

Personally I think the writing is very good, keep up the good work, author Don't be those short and feeble seeds. It's the 21st century, pay attention to In the era of efficiency, update quickly

I like it, but I hope to receive them all 🤭. If nothing else, I can give you gifts every day.

It feels quite interesting

It feels good to see it now, and it's not a shame. Feels good to me