Passerby A, She Can't Be a Demon Cultivator

It should be a masterpiece with at least 9.5 Points. I don't understand why the score is so low [face covering] The female is the main cultivator and the male is the second sex. This is good! Moreover, this book about cultivating immortality is very valuable. Unlike some novels about cultivating immortality that mention cultivation level casually, this book's about cultivating immortality is indeed serious and down-to-earth. There are so many big women inside! Even the villain has her own charm! And this system of heavens is not cliché, because many people have it, and it is not the golden finger that only belongs to the protagonist. In short, it is indeed a rare and good article about cultivating immortality.

There is a section in the introduction that is so amazing that it made my scalp tingle. There is a male sword master in this novel, not the sword master but a man. Good. The first helper in the dungeon is a woman. Finally, it's not the female supporting character who targets the female protagonist and then the male character comes to save her. Does the heroine have a roommate? A body of muscles, as strong as an ox, with the figure of two heroines. Di. Also, in the novel, he is a disciple, not an apprentice, which is very good.

①Female reading friendliness: very good. Light, harmonious, acquiescent, unintentionally female-centered, and vaguely female-dominated; women are better than men, and there are no words that insult women and some words that are modified to insult women. ②Writing and plot quality: good. The author's words and writing are very solid, and the writing style is good and the plot direction is not unreasonable; it is a refreshing novel but not a fast-paced novel. The heroine is a demon cultivator, but the character is relatively quiet (some book reviews said that she is a "devil in the magic circle" hahaha). Therefore, the writing style and plot development also tend to be more down-to-earth and solid, but not boring or obscure. ③ Breast gland friendly, the heroine is a true demon cultivator, there are normal growth plots of hardships, setbacks, difficulties, and no abuse/rejection plots. I feel that the plot of the road dungeon is weird at the beginning, and it seems a bit disconnected from the previous style of painting, which is a bit not to my liking😳 Okay, I jumped to the back and the familiar feeling came back. It looks good.

Published by the author and teacher, it must be a masterpiece for your daughter. It is assumed that women are the first gender, and they pay great attention to the choice of words and sentences. Most of the supporting characters are women, and cultivators are rarely seen in fairy tales. It seems that there is a math major among a bunch of sports students.

It is far more exciting than expected, and the opening chapter is not eye-catching. It is different from the current fairy tales with explosive values, which is refreshing. The wording and sentences in it are even more refreshing. Every sentence has women as the main body instead of the so-called flipping position and staring at men. It's really interesting. The quality of the novel far exceeds the current ratings. I specially logged into my account to rate it, hoping not to be buried. Author, please keep writing.

The protagonist is super charming and has high business intelligence. You can see from the introduction how good the writing is, and the main text is also at this level. The wording is female-oriented, the important roles are all female, and the male ones are only for viewing, which is very comfortable.

A very good, relatively orthodox fairy tale. Although the protagonist has ordinary talent, he has a very good character. The Tao she cultivates is also very interesting, and her weapon is relatively niche, which is the stick method. All in all, it looks great. It's so beautiful, the author is very talented

The female content is extremely high! Defaults to the primacy of women, a heroine with no humiliating lyrics, a cool novel that can be upgraded quickly, a heroine who is decisive in killing, calm and ruthless, and the world view is very well written.

There are no humiliating female words, neutral words are used correctly, there are many female characters and highlights, the default is to be the first sex of women, and women are the first. These points instantly surpassed those popular female novels in foreign countries, and it was so comfortable to watch.

A very orthodox article about cultivating immortals and upgrading. The heroine has no CP, so it is suitable for those who want to slow down and savor it carefully. This novel has a more common classification of immortal cultivation backgrounds, such as Qi training, foundation building, etc., But in addition, the author has his own settings for other martial arts and a special understanding of the concept of immortality. Pay great attention to the wording: ① There are no insulting words for women in the whole text, and neutral words such as boy, apprentice, etc. Are not used; ② If it is a male character, it will be specifically highlighted, such as a male swordsman, etc.; ③ Many derogatory words next to the word "female" have been replaced, such as , hat, .

The female character is pretty good and she counterattacks very well👍🏻. Seeing the system in front of me, I thought it was a dungeon for cultivating immortality and fusion, but I didn't expect that other people also had systems, so there weren't many dungeons left. It's a pity because the subject matter is quite new. I don't feel much pleasure at all. In the early stage, I was suppressed a bit harshly and was a bit stable. In the later stage, when my cultivation level improves, I should feel more comfortable [Thinking]

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful. How can I describe it? It would be great if the fairy tales I grew up reading had this world view. Women are so human-like, and the friendship between them is so chivalrous. The plot changes are very smooth, and the combination of cultivating immortals and multiplayer systems does not feel inconsistent. Along the way, it's not just my mother who sheds tears when mentioning Sikong Yao's growth. I still remember Sikong Yao's words at the beginning: "I just want to live a peaceful life, and for this, I am willing to give everything." Ah, I am so happy to see it, I shed tears.

First of all, the writing style is refined, and the protagonist has a distinct personality, who is cautious and hateful but also has some good intentions, and is very three-dimensional; the female content is very high, and it shows the world of immortality where women are the main body. It is very ironic to reverse the image of a man and a woman who often presented a man with a wife in the past; the language is also carefully used, such as disciples, etc., And does not insult women, which is worthy of recognition. However, the description of sexual relationships is still unnecessary. Whether it is four women fighting for one, or the sexual relationship between the supporting characters and men, it is relatively uncomfortable. It is probably understandable that it is intended to be an irony of some male pornographic routines, but it goes too far. Although there are shortcomings, the author has an insight into and is clearly aware of the abnormality of the current situation and is trying to change the counterattack. Moreover, it is rare to find lyrics about women without humiliation in Tomato. I hope that the author can continue to work hard and write more excellent works [Like]

Although there are not many chapters, it is really one of the best novels about cultivating immortals that I have ever read. The heroine is one of the few who is calm and steady. The plot design, character, and image are very well described. It's really beautiful (˵¯͒¯͒˵).

I strongly recommend this female-centered novel, with strong female characters and no CP, female group portraits, a female-to-male ratio of about 8:2, the default role is female, ♂ will be marked (and it comes with a series of pretentious descriptions of appearance and benefits), and there are no words to abuse women. The whole text does not judge the appearance or morals of any female character. There are all kinds of female characters in it, those who are greedy for profit, those who kill people and set fires, those who are lustful, those who bully superiors and subordinates. The female characters can be of any identity, including romantic talents, aloof swordsmen, and strong bodies. It is highly recommended.

I read it in one sitting, there are some minor flaws, but the writing is good, the writing is smooth, the content is very interesting, there are so many strong female characters, please update it soon [I'm about to cry]

An unexpectedly good book. I originally thought it was a traditional fairy tale, but I didn't expect it to have elements of the infinite flow of the heavens. At present, it seems that the heroine is a bit like a demon and a Buddha, and her character is very resolute and decisive. However, the copy is less inked than expected, and most of it is the plot of the main world. I hope the story in subsequent copies will be more substantial.

It looks like it's a hidden gem in the ocean, but why hasn't its score improved? Can't figure it out. The first is that I feel that the author's writing style is really contagious. In many places, I can resonate with the characters in the author's works who hate the way of heaven and sigh at fate. The heroine is also an ordinary person, and she is not mentally strong enough to be invincible. She has been fighting alone, and it is inevitable to be vulnerable. Drama. So I think maybe at the end of Volume 2, the heroine chose to sacrifice to fight fate and manipulate him. It's only now that the heroine has regained her memory, and I feel it again. The heroine's overwhelming rage. It's really flesh-and-blood, just like the first time I watched The Truman Show. At the end of this movie, the male protagonist chose to walk out of the false world and get rid of the so-called fate. Now I am also looking forward to what the subsequent plot will be like. Now the heroine knows her situation. Can he still successfully find his opportunity? What other systems will the author write about? Is it also a part of fate that the heroine gets the sword made of jianmu?

A very good book, I can't understand why the rating is so low. In my opinion, this book is at least 9.5, And 9.5 Is conservative. I have read articles about cultivating immortals for so many years, and this is the first time I have seen this kind of Zen. The writing style is very good, and the writing is not embarrassing. From the descriptions of Zen, it can be seen that the author must have practiced cultivation, and the "Zen" really comes to his face. I'd also like to praise the author's choice of words! She is very female-oriented, and she also pays attention to avoid those words and words that are disobedient to women. She is a natural female-centered cultivator.

Very nice. Female-centric background. At the beginning, it is mainly about cultivating immortals, interspersed with infinite missions. After the world of cultivating immortals, you will enter the road to survive. There should be more world views in the future. In the world of cultivating immortals, the heroine has mediocre qualifications at the beginning. She is a handyman disciple who sweeps the floor. Her goal is to live a stable life and has a Buddhist mentality. But the system came, bringing opportunities and crises to the heroine. With her experience in the world of immortal cultivation, the heroine realized that she must have enough power to live the life she wanted. Driven by fate, she became a demon cultivator - a disciple of Jueming Jianlu. She seized all resources to strengthen herself and made rapid progress. However, the invasion of demons put an end to all this. However, the heroine's hard work in training was not in vain. She survived in a strange way and entered a new world with the continuous invasion of demons. The image of the heroine is well created, and the description of the heroine's psychological activities shows the heroine's mentality changes very clearly, which is also very empathetic and understandable. In the beginning, he was a sweeping disciple with a bit of Buddhism. Later, he entered the Sword House and killed decisively, seizing every opportunity as much as possible, but he still retained his bottom line and justice as a human being, and was not controlled by the intention to kill. The companions the heroine meets also have their own characteristics. The senior sister is friendly and just, the roommate is frank and forthright, the fellow demon cultivator is focused and militant, and although the master is a demon cultivator, she has guidance and protection for the heroine, and her requirements are strict but not extreme. The period when the heroine is in Jueming Jianlu is my favorite so far. It may be because the heroine's strength has improved, so she has also won respect and status. Therefore, here the heroine has companions to compete with, and powerful teachers who can quickly improve her strength. There is also warmth when stationed in the village. Although opportunities always require life and death, this stage always gives people a sense of upward hope. It is really refreshing to watch the heroine become stronger little by little. At present, the rating of only 7.0 Points is far lower than the actual level of the book. The author is very experienced in writing, and the character creation, plot advancement and even world view presentation are very complete and interesting. Recommended reading

The Demonic Sister! ! I finally saw this orthodox demon cultivator. It looks so good.

Cool! The author is very good at writing, the relationship between the women is really great, and the character creation is also very solid. When I watched it, I really lamented the impermanence of the world. The weak and weak people come and go without leaving any trace like mayflies... There are also many types of male characters, including soft, slender, gorgeous, and arrogant ones. Very comfortable to watch

Gao Kaiping, the beginning of the novel is very novel and well written. The heroine is lucky enough to have an adventure. She did not expect that all the servants in a sect can obtain the system of all heavens and worlds. There is a big conspiracy behind it. The sect is also harvesting these servants all the time. The heroine stays away from the sect incognito. After changing the map later, the plot is a bit dull and the hook of the plot is not too big. But the author deserves five stars for being a woman. Many of the characters are female, and there are no degrading words for women. It is very comfortable.

The setting is novel, the writing is good, the lyrics are not insulting to women, and the content of female characters is high

Good-looking, Yaozi is so handsome, the eldest grandma among grandmas, and the most beautiful woman among women.

It's so good to watch that I couldn't help but comment after reading it for a long time. The author's writing skills are very good. I feel like I'm about to have an epiphany while reading (?) I'll read it again later. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes [laughing]

The writing is very good and the reviews are completely female-first, so it's five stars. But why should she suddenly fall into a life-and-death war when she is living a good life and ask her to practice magic skills? There is a feeling that I simply don't want the heroine to be good, just like many time-travel novels, inexplicably traveling through the past to fight in the house or palace, or dressing up as a deadly villain or cannon fodder, and then being forced to survive. And what is your way, my way? This kind of questioning is actually very boring, because as long as it is round, you can say whatever you want. If you want to use the question as a clue, unless there is a higher intention or something more interesting, it will be very ordinary.

So pretty! The writing is very good, the plot is exciting, and the training part is not boring. Although from the perspective of the heroine, the martial arts are about killing and practicing in the devil's path, but overall, she doesn't seem impetuous? Instead, he asked the mind many times, giving people the impression that the skills are foreign objects, the practice is to cultivate the mind, not to cultivate immortality but to cultivate the true self, and what is cultivated is the true self, and the bloody aura is not heavy.

It's so exciting. I've finished reading the second volume now. I wonder who understands the heroine's words: "The disciple's destiny is Sikong Yao." . Ahhhh! So handsome. The love between the girls in it is no longer just a fragrant and soft little cake. The author is willing to write about women. Everyone is very vivid, and the story is very smooth and not watery at all. (It took me a few days to read Chapter 100) The heroine has a calm personality, is relatively kind, is decisive in her actions, and is down-to-earth in her cultivation. The narration is all about women as the first gender, which is refreshing and refreshing. I really recommend it.

It's so beautiful, highly recommended. I didn't skip the first chapter until the last chapter, I read it completely. There are very few such books. The author's writing is profound and amazing! A rare article on cultivating immortality. Moreover, it is from a non-CP female perspective. Most of the characters in the article are female characters with different personalities. The author is really good at writing group portraits. Moreover, most of the decent villains are female characters and are extremely reader-friendly. In my opinion, this book is at least a 9.5. If this book doesn't collapse, I will definitely keep it.