The Gun Barrel Is Justice! Fill-In-The-Line Baby's Adventure in Another World

The author gave himself a five-star review, isn't it too much? [Shy][shy][shy]

The writing is okay. There are some inappropriate places (such as knocking yourself over while playing RPG. In fact, as long as you play it once and gain experience, you won't be like this). The world background introduced is still very attractive. Let's see how the human world unfolds in the future. It stands to reason that the living conditions are so harsh, and the world should be much more serious than Japanese-style Western fantasy.

Indeed, I feel that the previous plot is a bit too long and not very attractive, so I would like to make a suggestion, that is, you can write a summary in the previous author's introduction, skip the previous more mixed plot, and allow new readers to enter the main plot more quickly. This is purely a personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Of course, the author can also refer to @. (⌒O⌒)

Not bad, but I feel like this magical world is a little too strong at the moment. Do you plan to use energy weapons or kinetic weapons in the future?

Overall, it's pretty good. Chapter 90 is a must-read, but the progress is a bit too sloppy [laughter]

It's my favorite type, overall it's okay, I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist There is a female protagonist, so she probably has a harem, ugh

Bro's writing is so bold and powerful. Please be sure to write it down. Oh, it's time!

I hope the combat effectiveness will not collapse too quickly

It's very beautiful. It reminds me of the time I watched Release the Witch.

I like it, it looks good, I like the writing and the plot is also good

It's not bad. The pace is slow. It feels like Suicheng is playing a big game. It's perfect if the pace is not too long. The story of the witch is about to speed up.

A relatively good alien novel, at least the combat power has not collapsed.

Fighting is fun, fun, fun, fun, fun

You can leave it at that!

Come on, don't send it.

The subject matter is to my liking

Well written, I hope I don't die

That's a five-star review.

Nice looking, nice details

How shameless, promise me, you must watch it

Alas, it doesn't work very well. I just saw a section I liked and it disappeared.

It's okay, but the front part is a bit verbose. If the author changes the front part, many people will read it.

It's pretty, but the front is a bit verbose.

It's my favorite subject, I like it very much.

It feels good, very good. The author uses all kinds of tricks... [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The author is slacking off

How old is the heroine? It looks good and there is nothing wrong with it. Please remind the author that there are armor-piercing bullets from colleges and universities, such as M995, 993 and m61, which can significantly damage light armored vehicles. Don't tell me that these eggs can't penetrate armor.

It's okay, I hope to have more fighting fun

Did the author go for short and medium stories? ? ? And it felt a bit long-winded in the early stages. It's purely a personal feeling.