
The Goddess Who Became a Hero Sets Out to Defeat the Demon King With Her Phone
成为勇者的女神带着手机讨伐魔王
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 125k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
51Chapters
920Reads · all time
In booklists 3
Female Lead, Superpowers or Magic, Mature Writing, Nothing Too Childish
So many books these days are way too childish. They’re just shallow wish-fulfillment stories, and it’s embarrassing to read them without using your brain.
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Any Anime-style Light Novels on Tomato? Preferably Slice of Life! No Fanfiction!
Something with a higher concentration of anime and manga references (whispers). Nothing too tragic, I can't take it (kneels in thanks).
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# Any Novels Like KonoSuba: God's Blessing on This Wonderful World? 😭😰
I want books like Hey, Wonderful World!
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Reader comments 1
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I have finished reading Chapter 14. I tried to write a novel once in high school, but I graduated after only writing about seven or eight chapters. Now that I am in college, I reconsidered and decided to slightly modify the protagonist setting and content style before starting to write again. In fact, I have no habit of reading novels or comics. I mainly read comics, but I hope that I can write a story that people like. Recently, the idea of starting to sacrifice my entertainment time of playing games to start writing novels has become stronger, so I started looking for novels to read in Tomato. I looked at how other people's novels were written, but after looking through some, I couldn't seem to find anything similar to the content and style of what I was going to write. Most of the ones related to anime were fan fiction, and what I was going to write was my own original stories and characters, but the setting was mainly It's Long Aotian's cool writing + comedy + pure love, but it will talk about some animation-related content and even jokes. Seeing a lot of the content in this book reminded me of the book I wrote when I was in high school. I always feel that there are similarities in some places. Some of them are similar. The content of the characters bickering with each other is a little bit similar to my style. I may have been influenced by some anime such as Suqing, so I think this kind of bickering is sometimes quite interesting, but sometimes it may feel a little awkward if it is not well written. Since I have not read any novels, I may not be able to give any useful suggestions, but I have to say that the author has a lot of things that are worth learning. If I compare my feelings, if it were me, I would also hope that readers would give me some suggestions and comments without hesitation. That's fine at all. I think maybe you can try to show it to your acquaintances first and ask them to give you some suggestions. After all, it's not easy to insist on writing so much. Just by having the courage and perseverance to write so much even if no one reads it, you have already done it. Far better than me. I admire you on this point, and I also support you to continue to persevere. In addition, I personally think that by reading your own works over and over again, you may always be able to find out what you think is not perfect and can be modified. I hope the above content will help you.