Hp: the Eldest Daughter of the Malfoy Family

It's very good-looking, and the reading atmosphere is also very good. Every time I see Sorry Raphael in the comment section, I get a lot of fun. There is nothing to say about the writing style. The author's control over the Malfoy family can be said to be the best I have ever seen in fan fiction. The protagonist's strategizing temperament can be guessed immediately even without telling me that she is from the Malfoy family. Another highlight, I think, is the emotional scene. Although everyone says the progress is too slow, it is actually quite good to relax and unwind. The subsequent development will most likely involve Raphael proving his worth and then Xiao Xier will be guided by two friends? So looking forward to it Author, please update quickly, I will always keep an eye on you...

The author's writing is very good. It's the first time I've seen a new author write an HP fan so well. The heroine is very likable and fits Malfoy's character. I hope the author can update it as soon as possible. I can't get enough of it [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's particularly beautiful. It's rare to see such a pretentious original Slytherin heroine, and both of them are original. Wow, it's so beautiful!

It's a very nice fanfic. Each character has his or her own characteristics. The reading atmosphere is very interesting. Every time I see a comment saying "I'm sorry, Raphael", I laugh. The friendship lines between Sil, Leta and Flora are really good. Especially Leta. At first, I thought she and Sil were CPs (I'm sorry, Raphael, but it's really embarrassing [shy]). At first I thought Raphael was a cold-blooded type, but he turned out to be a very straight-forward guy with little experience but the courage to ask questions and learn (who doesn't like a straight-ball puppy who always thinks about you)? Seal is the kind of person who is ambitious and very rational. Who knows, that feeling of strategizing really pokes me. As for the love line, I feel that it is thin and flowing. It is relaxed and not too abrupt. Big, hungry, hungry [crying]

Hp double heroine fanfic is my favorite category. Judging from the relationship with the protagonist group so far, it can be said that it has no relationship with the protagonist group. The most important thing is that the original double heroine and the two protagonists are both original creations by the author. It is the fanfic I want to find (わかります). This is what I want to see!

It is a very good novel with a relatively light style. It is very comfortable as a fanfic. The characters are well-shaped and three-dimensional. The plot is quite innovative. It does not revolve around the protagonist as a mother and has its own path, so it is relatively novel in the fanfic. The plot recommendation speed is moderate, and it will be finished at about 300 (I hope it will not stop updating!!!). Overall, it is well written and is a good choice to kill time. Finally, don't stop updating! ! ! There aren't many good articles about hp twin girls, so don't stop updating! ! !

Sylvian is a very smart and talented person, and he feels calm at all times, but after meeting Raphael, Miss Malfoy will not be so calm when it comes to matters related to her. Raphael is the iceberg queen in front of others. When facing Syl, he was surprised and didn't know how to deal with it. I really like the entangled feeling between Sylvian and Raphael In addition, the friendship between Syl and Leta and Flora is also very gratifying. Whether it is viewed as CB or CP, it has a unique flavor. Syl and everyone feel CP when they are together. And it's rare that both parties are original heroines. All in all, the author's books are quite to my liking. It would be nice if there were more books.

Very good-looking [shy] [admiration] [admiration] and I feel like Syl can eat it with anyone [shy]

It is a book that I like very much. Whether it is the style of writing, the creation of characters, or the concept, it all fits me very well. This is my first time to give a gift, and I hope the author will not be too impatient. Don't be anxious and just polish the words. I will wait for you to finish writing.

It's very beautiful, and the author's various descriptions are also very true. In short, everything is very beautiful. The relationship between the two heroines is also very good, and the straight shot is great. The two heroines are only in their second year. When can they grow up and be together? You two should get together as soon as possible, just for me.

The writing is very good, and I think the grasp of the character's personality is also very high. The delicate emotional line contains the ignorance and enthusiasm of a girl. I really like sister dogs. Raphael is as loyal and enthusiastic as a puppy. The friendship line and career line are both great. The heroine has a vivid image, she is a queen, and her companions are completely trustworthy. The heroine is sincere to the people around her, and she carefully grasps the friendship and family around her. I don't know why the rating is so low. I really recommend this article.

The author's writing style is smooth and natural, the characters are distinct, and the plot is particularly attractive. He has reshaped the original work from the perspective of a pure-blood family. The author's rich imagination, delicate description of details, three-dimensional characters, and appropriate plot arrangement are all amazing. I hope the author can keep writing, I believe this work will surely shock everyone. In addition, I hope the author can further use his imagination to enrich the description of emotional drama. Your forever loyal readers

Nice! The character setting is very attractive, and the author's writing is sophisticated. So far, I really like the plot of Sil's career, but I am also looking forward to the emotional plot of the two protagonists in the future. The tension will definitely be full, and I am looking forward to it. I hope the author can keep writing. I feel it is a rare masterpiece among HP themes on this platform.

It's the first time I've seen the dual heroines of HP, so cool, so cool. Come on, author, update. It would be great if one day he could update 10 chapters and scare me [blowing kiss][admiration][shy]

The writing is very daily, I like it very much, and it feels warm. Whether it is the writing style or everything, it makes me feel very comfortable. I watched Long Yan Dayue [Flying Kiss] and the plot is also very compact. I really look forward to seeing Draco after he goes to school [Adoration] [Adoration] And the tug and pull between the two heroines is also very delicious [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting. Come on, the author. It's the first time I've seen something like this. The author must persevere. [Sending heartfelt wishes]

The author's writing is really amazing. The writing style is the best among HP fans, and the characters are also very consistent. There are many original plots that I love to read. This book will be updated at around 9 o'clock. I hope the author will update it ten times a day.

I just read a little bit, the writing is very elegant and comfortable, and the introduction also makes me look forward to the story in the future. I hope that the little lion is really worthy of the little princess we watched grow up (laughs) What, you said I made a mistake, I'm sorry π_π, but this couple is really good, Violetta, woo woo woo And Flora, woo woo, good children, all good children, She has a disease where she thinks other people's friends are her wives.

I don't know why the rating is low ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

Good news: I found a wonderful novel [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Bad news: I am very resistant to the same genre. I always think about the characters in this book. There is no meal replacement [crying] [crying] [crying]

I think the writing is great, I haven't found OOC yet, the two protagonists are well portrayed, I hope the pace is faster, the emotional line and the main plot, I hope it will be pushed faster, the potential is great, but the rating is relatively low.

The arrogant kitten Syl and her little snake dog Rafael Hehehe, everyone in our Syl group is super awesome!

There is no other reason than that it looks good [laughing][laughing][laughing] The author is also very nice [makes a face][makes a face][makes a face]

It's beautiful. It feels a bit like reading the original novel. The heroine is so suitable for my taste🤩

The characters are well created, perfectly integrated into the hp world, and look great [send my heart]

Very beautiful, the subject matter is novel and unique, the writing is smooth, vivid and delicate [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

So far, super nice.

Very nice, keep up the good work!

How can it be so delicious when I go there😋😋😋😋 Rated 9 or above, it's worth watching.

The universe is invincible and beautiful