
I Can't Control This Supermarket, I Want to Hand It over to the State
这超市我把握不住,我要上交国家
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 536k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
52Reads
5.4Score
246Chapters
4Listens
142.9kReads · all time





After the drug incarceration is over, the protagonist's family in Time and Space Supermarket will basically be transferred and protected. However, in a country where there are no measures at all, the family is arrested and threatened. It's so funny.
Very good book, very good book. In the first few chapters, a woman with a strong dating background appears, and a subordinate, who drinks the strengthening medicine directly, and promises to hit wherever he points next time.
All characters and the author share half a brain
It's hard to describe in one word, so different from each other
I saw Chapter 9 decisively abandoning the book. It's not like it will disappear once the transaction is made. I just let a soldier trade his life for it. I can't understand it.
The start is rife with childishness. . .
No, this woman is feeling a little uncomfortable
The theme is pretty good, but I feel like I'm watching a female channel. Some parts are not as well written as female channels. I originally wanted to give it a 2⭐, but I've written so much and given it one more star. Come on, author.
If you want to write a story that is handed over to the state, then write that the state takes the lead and the protagonist cooperates in arranging all affairs. If the protagonist has special abilities, such as a cliff-like ability improvement, or skills that only the protagonist can use, then he can take the lead. Otherwise, what the protagonist needs to do in the early stage is to share what he has, and then have the think tank analyze and study it. Instead of the protagonist doing things alone and arranging various things. And this is a great opportunity for the country, but it is written as if this opportunity is not very important. It's all just superficial, that is, surrounding it for protection and randomly sending people to connect with it, but it has nothing to do with the core.
If you can't write about cooperation with the country, just write about yourself. It's okay to be more open-minded. It's very contradictory for you to write like this, and it makes your brain itch. You can read that book. I was doing business in another world and was discovered by the country. Where is the basic idea?
Too poisonous,,,
I personally suggest that you don't give it 6 stars but give it 7 stars instead.
The author has a brilliant mind, go for it! Either write a mindless and cool article, or make it more logical.
If you can't do it thoroughly as an enemy, don't write about fighting and killing, or be kind to it, otherwise you can only blame yourself for the death or injury of people around you. Don't test others' bottom line in the face of interests.
Poison poison poison poison
…………There is a perfect girl Qingmei at the beginning…………
Toxic plot
Very nice [like][like][like][like]
When working with yarn, it's better to do it yourself, and it feels like the protagonist is sand.
It's a bit poisonous, the logic is so illogical, I can't stand it even if I lose my mind.
Not to mention the book, I personally read it well. Eight or nine updates a day must be five stars.
Very well written
Good, very good, very nice [like][like][like]
It's a bit toxic, but you can read it, come on, author!