The Yandere I Made with My Own Hands Is Out of Control

The writing is really good. The male protagonist is the kind of cold and indifferent type. I personally think that this kind of male protagonist would be the best in a yandere novel. Although there is only a little bit of yandere at the moment, I can look forward to the future. Overall, the writing style of this book is smooth and the details are not bad. It is a yandere novel worth reading.

So far, I have seen monologues, and there are not many descriptions of combat power. The main plot is to return to the world of immortality. It is mainly an emotional route. There are two candidates: a saint. You don't know the saint without reading the monologue. Bai, who has been helping the protagonist. Just look at the introduction. This saint is probably the heroine. After all, it occupies three tags: yandere magic, saint, and Bai occupies none, and magic occupies none. The following language description is obviously said by the saint. Although I have not seen these languages ​​so far, but to be honest, I just looked at these dozen pictures. From the reader's perspective, the dialogue's feelings are obviously greater than those of the saint. If it is labeled as a single heroine, this kind of dual-emotion route will easily become a poisonous point, but it has not turned into a poisonous point so far. Bai's current relationship with the protagonist should be a gratitude for the life-saving grace, a glimmer of light in a dark life, and love at first sight. The saint's feelings for the protagonist are just for fun. I am curious. After all, they have only appeared a few times. The protagonist's feelings for the two of them should be destined to have no more feelings for the saint. So I'm very curious about the follow-up development: how to promote relationships? [Thinking] To be honest, Judging from Bai's current performance, if the heroine is a saint, if Bai is not given a better arrangement, he should be sent to the blade [punch out] As for why I keep saying that the heroine is a saint, the heroine is not a saint, why specifically give her three labels, Bai has no one label, to be honest, the probability of Bai being the heroine is really low. Whose profile label and introduction are for the second female lead, in fact, it would be better to add Shura Field to the label [Sending Hearts]

Regarding the description of the protagonist, I personally think it is a good writing style that is rarely seen in Tomato. The image of the protagonist is vivid and the whole has a strong three-dimensional sense. In particular, the emotional line is particularly delicate, but it does not make people feel abrupt, and sometimes it even makes people smile. All in all, it is a good book, and it is a rare good book. It can be seen that the author really cares. For those who use ratings as the standard for reading books, I can only say that this kind of behavior will really miss many good books, and even a good responsible author.

It's a good book, very novel, and the suspense is well set up. It kept me interested without skipping a beat. But who is the heroine? Many readers should have guessed by default when they see the new chapter. But the author said that it is difficult to guess. If it is not Bai and the male protagonist, the emotional drama will not end well. I have not been partial to any female character from the beginning, but in the latest chapter, I can no longer be partial. The author must be careful not to make the White Party unhappy. And the author, come on, I'm optimistic about you [love] [love]

After reading the first few chapters, I felt it was a very good book. The protagonist has a calm personality and is smart in doing things. There are also a lot of foreshadowings in the front. The heroine is also well portrayed and has emotional communication. It is still worth looking forward to. The world view is grand.

Please keep working hard, thank you very much

The plot is really smooth, the narrative rhythm is good, and the suspense is enough. Now that we have reached more than 90 chapters, I am quite puzzled by the world view and why Bai Zhi has such a crush on the male protagonist, but I don't find it boring. Come on author🤓🤓 No, bro, why is it still 7:00? This book is definitely more than that.

The subject matter is novel, is modern times the prosperous era in the article? Travel to the fairy doge and then come to the weird magical world of the future The most attractive thing right now, apart from the setting, is the two doge heroines who have monologues. The character's personality is also okay. According to the author, the two female protagonists who are currently monologues should be the female protagonists in the future if there is no accident? There are too few chapters at the moment, so I suggest you join in and catch up together [eating melon]

The book is very good, both the subject matter and the plot are eye-catching, but it is a pity that it is not popular.

The relationship between the male and female protagonists in the article is delicate. The female protagonist seems to be a yandere (she loves the male protagonist very much and is not interested in other people). The whole text seems to be in a dark style. There is no Virgin, and the female protagonist should be a special individual (it should be a foreshadowing). In short, after reading for more than 1000 hours, I can say that this is a rare and good novel about yandere, darkness, restraint, and no Virgin. The author will finish the book, now he is just constructing the outline [eating melon]

The plot feels a bit new, and the emotional line is very well written. The faster Tomato updates, the more posts it will have, it seems?

It's okay, I just want to see rivers of blood, and by the way, I want to see the protagonist beheaded by a yandere

Come on, wait for the next push and see if you can get some people.

As expected of Chen Mo, he is indeed very silent [laughing evilly]

I started reading this book more than a year ago, and I stopped updating it for more than half a year... I felt good in the early stage. But after I came back from the break, I don't know if it's been so long that I can't remember the plot. The rest of the book was in a fog, and I felt like I was writing whatever I thought of, but overall it's pretty good, and it's quite different from other homogeneous content [Like]

The emotions are delicate, but the main plot is not very clear, and it is more daily life, so I just watched it as a daily life. It looks good, if the author should consider having two female protagonists, this Chen Yan really makes me disgusted.

I just like the character of the male protagonist.

6:05, Does this violate the rules of heaven?

Delicate feelings, I guarantee this as a 6-year-old bookworm

Very nice! I, Laura Uchiha, would like to call you the most yandere on Rotten Tomatoes [get it]

It's a book that I really like. Alas, it's a pity that it was carried away [crying]

This is very well written. "We are in pure love!"

The writing style is really good and there are many details. If you read it carefully, you will feel quite immersed in it.

On the side of cultivating immortals, restraining the system, the mixture of magic and the closed loop of time. The emotional interaction in this book so far is very good and makes people unable to extricate themselves[explore].

No, you are actually going to stop updating. Have you entered the palace? I've been chasing you for so long and I'm so sad.

From the current point of view, there is nothing toxic about it. I haven't seen the development of the heroine's attributes yet and I'm looking forward to it. Humans and machines can only talk about how shameless they are

The reduction in combat power is a bit harsh

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very good story, only regretful [blowing kiss]

Emotions are like raging waves, rushing straight towards you.