The Dying Bai Yueguang Faked the Corpse: the Sword Fairy Turned Black and Locked Me

The needle doesn't poke! It doesn't look like it was written by a newbie, and the writing style is surprisingly good. There is nothing wrong with the content, and there is not much problem with the logic. At least it seems to be quite smooth. However, the pace feels a bit fast. It is only 100,000 words. It feels like it is almost written. It does not mean that the writing is not good. At least I feel comfortable reading it. But in this case, I feel that there is not much content to write. Click this If you continue to write the rhythm, it will be completed in about 200,000 to 300,000 words. It's not that it can't be extended, but I'm afraid you won't be able to control it. After all, the longer you write, the easier it is to have problems (of course, if you are confident in your writing power, just pretend I didn't say it). There are still 20,000 to 300,000 words left to write about the two of them recognizing each other, loving each other, and loving each other. In my opinion, this is the most perfect ending for me [shy] I forgot to mention another important point, that is, this book is one of the few that I have found here that has pretty good content in the similar tags (forget your brain), because most of them are pretty good. Of course, only now, there are also many who drive high and go low. Let's see if you can control it.

Fire Tongs Liu Ming I can never get tired of reading this type of book. It seems that this tossing and twisting love is all I want. Fast forward to the forced love part! The ending is pretty good, but the next few dozen chapters are still too watery.

The author looks like a reincarnated old man. The writing is excellent, the emotions are portrayed very delicately, and the details are well handled. I see that there are no poisonous points now. I look forward to it later. Also, please give me one more chapter. I can do anything. I can't see the next chapter. I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body. It is very uncomfortable. I have a dull feeling like I am suddenly stuck in the middle of shit [crying][crazy][crazy][crazy]

I really want to give it five stars, but objectively speaking, there is still a small disadvantage. That is the protagonist's excuse that he likes Zhu Shao. This excuse is very typical and can easily arouse readers' disgust and reduce their desire to read. If possible, I hope the author can reset that paragraph. If not, just pretend that I didn't say it. This book is fast-paced, not draggy, the plot is relatively bland (if you can accept it, I highly recommend reading it), and the writing is good. The author's writing is really good, it's so to my liking. When the author writes more and adds a few more pictures, I will give five stars [blowing kisses] for keeping his word, author, come on [get it] The author only plans to write 300,000 words, so I'll give you five stars.

Covered in the guise of becoming a hundred, it is actually Lily's female novel. If you want to read Cultivation of Immortality, you can go. This novel is a romance novel, with little fighting, and it is basically a matter of one sword and two swords. The pace of the novel is considered fast, but many details are not handled properly. This is a novel composed of a succubus protagonist, a wasteful system, and a pure heroine. You can also watch the full text of Gao Tian

It is a masterpiece that does not hide its faults. The article pays attention to the emotional line. Basically there is no knife in the whole process (it is very sweet in the later stage). The writing is very good and has a bit of a stale feeling. You can see the pull between the girls who want to speak but can't speak. It is obvious that two girls are in love. However, the TS setting is too redundant, and removing the TS setting has no impact on the plot (because it is only mentioned once in the article). Moreover, Jiang Xueyi is a normal girl in terms of psychological identity and behavior. She probably missed many pure readers. Moreover, there is a TS setting. I personally think it is a male version, but after reading the whole article, the description still feels more like a female version. But overall, it is still a rare masterpiece.

The routine is still the same, and the villain regrets it. There are eight hundred if not one thousand books in Tomato, but most of them are just boring reading for fun, and they can't help but savor it carefully. But because of its delicate emotional description, I think this book can indeed be regarded as a superior work of this type. The main plot is impressive, and there's not much to say. What interests me more is the characters. The system has deliberately weakened the drama, and there are only two or three tasks, and they don't appear frequently to cause trouble. This makes the emotions between the heroines Jiang and Zhu appear more natural, and Jiang's strong attitude towards Zhu at the beginning and his unwillingness to recognize his emotions later add to the readability of this story of chasing his wife. What attracts me the most is naturally the awkward but sincere relationship between Jiang and Zhu. Overall, I highly recommend it, but judging from the current plot trend, it can be completed in about 20 W words. If it is too long, the end will be too big.

The plot advances quickly, without any delay, and with three missions, I was fascinated by the heroine. The emotional transition is natural, and there are clear psychological descriptions that reflect the characters' emotions. Small shortcomings: Black Bird in the early stage is a rare shortcoming of this book, or the only shortcoming (I think) Black Bird's words in the early stage are too... For Xue Yi, and this book is mainly developed from Xue Yi's perspective, which is really uncomfortable for me to read. At present, it can be regarded as a masterpiece among the two heroines. I hope the author will speed up the update and look forward to ing [asking for more updates] But now, Black Bird's words are getting better, and they are no longer as annoying as before.

At present, I have seen the latest progress of more than 60 chapters. Although the author says that he is a newcomer, his delicate writing style, compact plot, description of the characters' personalities, and coherence of the storyline are enough to rank in the top three among the hundreds of dual-heroine novels I have read on Tomato. To be able to reach this position without relying on sweetness is a testament to the author's writing style, which is simply brilliant. I hope the follow-up plot can be maintained.

If you don't hide your faults, please give me 5 stars for encouragement. On a 10-point scale, I would rate it around 8 points. It is a Lily article with few poisonous points, few unnecessary words, and compact content. There are relatively many emotional descriptions, and the battle scenes are average. The plot is relatively smooth, but there are also many logical loopholes. For example, the golden elixir stage cannot fly and does not have a storage bag. There is also a super weak chicken Tiandao. There is also a female major who is a super addict and has gone from Jindanqian to the invincible state of nearly Hedao in one year. Across the middle lies the golden elixir Yuanying leaving the body and refining the void. We also need to unify the Jian Tomb Sect and change the habits of an evil cultivating sect. A low-level lily romance novel with the appearance of cultivating immortality. A few of the tomatoes were not rotten. The article at the end of Zhenger Ba Jing. Please encourage me.

It's beautiful to watch, the pace is very comfortable, the plot is compact but not crowded, the emotions are natural and there is no awkward feeling, the villain dies very simply, and the main theme is comfortable. It looks very "comfortable", which is my biggest feeling about this book. (Lao Deng! Try pretending to be a newbie again! If you keep pretending, I will give you some reminders every day (≧ω≦)/)

Personally, I feel that it is not stupid. Some of the descriptions of emotions are quite good (especially when I wish my junior sister secretly kisses the protagonist [Adoration]). It is very interesting. I hope the author will update it soon, otherwise I will have to stop.

Good job, author, keep writing and get stronger and create brilliance. Don't be like that guy Chen Dong who always finds reasons to take leave.

Finish spreading flowers This book is relatively light and enjoyable, with not many characters appearing, mainly surrounding Jiang Xueyi and Zhu Zhao. The plot in the early stages is relatively interesting, but in the later stages, it is a bit bland. Overall, it's pretty good, but it feels a little bit novel, and it's not worth the nine-point rating. Maybe it's because I read another Scabbard book that was also finished in the past two days, and I can't help but feel a little dreamy, as if there is nothing left to read for a while (┯_┯) The completion of a book is often accompanied by joy and regret. Finally, I hope the new book will be on the shelves soon (*^ω^*)[face covering][OK]

It's okay, but the conflict after Jiang's death and escape was too sudden, and the estrangement was completely unreasonable. Because the conflict between the two was only based on suspicion of Jiang, the conflict was completely insufficient to promote the development of the plot. Overall, the writing is good, but I have a poor grasp of the plot. I can look forward to the new book.

The writing is very good, the pace is fast in the first three months, and more relaxed in the latter part. Fortunately, the first three months were really short and seemed fast. The previous one is better. The author is not very good at writing about cultivating immortals, just pure and simple.

The characters are quite real, which is what attracted me in the first place. The relationship between the two is just right. There are contrasts between the two images, which are very real. The aspect of the way of heaven is okay, and the "sudden feeling of not being free" and the systematic foreshadowing are quite interesting. Senior Sister Jiang's secrets should be revealed to Zhu Zhao, otherwise there will always be a feeling of inequality. I feel that there are too many descriptions of the fight between the aristocratic families, and the chapter is not long to begin with, so it feels inappropriate. It is not necessary to read Tiantian's posts. I hope this young couple can be happy every day in another world

Come and see, come and see, Lao Deng is reincarnated. If you don't look good, you don't need money [laughing][laughing] I don't even want to act anymore, this is Lao Deng, it's so beautiful

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't overflow, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the video. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, saying that I had no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours. Your dear readers [Sending Hearts]

The writing style is very good, and the author also has a good grasp of the rhythm of the plot. The details of the breakup between the two were not good enough. The other plots flowed smoothly and had a natural feeling, which was very good. The author does not look like a novice, or that he has certain literary qualities. I highly recommend everyone to take a closer look. (I don't know how people will accept the transformation. I personally feel that pure Bai is actually better) Babies who like labels such as "Become a Hundred" and "Chasing a Wife" will really find a treasure when they read this book. Come on, author, it's really good. [Laugh]

The value for money is really good, the price is affordable, and the quality is really good. It is exactly as described by the seller. When I received it, the packaging was complete, and there was no damage in the bag. The quality is still the same. The customer service attitude is very good. They answered my questions in detail. The seller is very good. I am very satisfied with this time. Very satisfied with the purchase and will repurchase if necessary!! Good quality, great value for money, really good value for money, affordable price, really good quality, exactly as described by the seller. When received, the packaging was complete, the package was tight without any damage, the quality remains the same, and the customer service attitude is very good Good, the seller answered my questions in detail. The seller is very good. I am very satisfied with this purchase. I will repurchase if necessary!! The quality is good and value for money. It is really worth the money and the price is affordable. The quality is really good. It is exactly as described by the seller. When I received it, the packaging was complete and the packaging was strict. There is no damage, the quality is still the same, the customer service attitude is very good, he answered my questions in detail, the seller is very good, I am very satisfied with this purchase, I will repurchase if necessary!! Finally received the baby I need, the things are very good, the price is good and the price is good [love] [love] [love] My wife and kids all love it

The plot is concise while ensuring the perfect portrayal of the plot and characters. The writing style is quite good, and the first BE and then HE is too exciting, the fairy grass is launched! [Sending Hearts]

This book focuses on Yishou Lily, with a short plot, delicate emotional lines, and twists and turns in the relationship between the heroines. Although it is labeled "Crematorium", the knife is okay, and perhaps the relationship turning point and the protagonist's attitude toward the heroine in the middle and later stages are a bit awkward (it is, after all, a manifestation of the so-called "Crematorium").

The plot is smooth and non-toxic, and the author's writing is good. The pace of the book is fast and unobtrusive. I read the article smoothly to the end, and there is no boring chapter. The posts are also written in a sugary and natural way. Any misunderstandings are resolved quickly, unlike other articles that only have 180 chapters. Apart from these, the author himself writes very well, is very interesting, and is productive. It is worth reading😼

I can't say it's good or bad, but I really like it. It can be said to be the best book of the same type that suits my taste.

The plot is not procrastinating and the logic is on point. The emotional descriptions of the characters are very detailed, and the emotional conflicts of the characters are well written. The system is not like the systems in other books. It is very lax. There are no tasks, and it does not force the protagonist to do tasks. It only reminds the protagonist when necessary. Most of the time, it is chatting with the protagonist, which is a highlight of this book. Five stars presented. So hurry up and get to the education and training! [Laugh]

The plot is good and the characters are good. The only drawback is the male-to-female transformation. . . The most impressive thing is the short scene of chasing the "wife" at the crematorium and the scene of the two separation, which is exactly like the sentence "A young man's anger, but he lost his love." But I wish you are not, that is, you are recognizing your love [shy]

I don't have any words, it's just that it's very beautiful. I've seen everything I want to see. Their story has just begun, but I have to keep moving forward, looking for new books [crying] I found a good one and finished it like this. When it ended well, I still didn't feel that it could have ended like this [crying]

The pace is good, not draggy, and the writing is good. It gets more and more exciting towards the end. Cyber ​​white powder

It's really good to watch, super good to watch, especially the part about the reunion with the dead, which I've watched more than ten times. There's no very sad scene about chasing my wife in the crematorium. It's so sweet to me [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Like]