My Dying Beloved Faked Her Death: The Darkened Sword Immortal Has Me Locked Up

The needle doesn't poke! It doesn't look like it was written by a newbie, and the writing style is surprisingly good. There is nothing wrong with the content, and there is not much problem with the logic. At least it seems to be quite smooth. However, the pace feels a bit fast. It is only 100,000 words. It feels like it is almost written. It does not mean that the writing is not good. At least I feel comfortable reading it. But in this case, I feel that there is not much content to write. Click this If you continue to write the rhythm, it will be completed in about 200,000 to 300,000 words. It's not that it can't be extended, but I'm afraid you won't be able to control it. After all, the longer you write, the easier it is to have problems (of course, if you are confident in your writing power, just pretend I didn't say it). There are still 20,000 to 300,000 words left to write about the two of them recognizing each other, loving each other, and loving each other. In my opinion, this is the most perfect ending for me [shy] I forgot to mention another important point, that is, this book is one of the few that I have found here that has pretty good content in the similar tags (forget your brain), because most of them are pretty good. Of course, only now, there are also many who drive high and go low. Let's see if you can control it.

Fire Tongs Liu Ming I can never get tired of reading this type of book. It seems that this tossing and twisting love is all I want. Fast forward to the forced love part! The ending is pretty good, but the next few dozen chapters are still too watery.

The author looks like a reincarnated old man. The writing is excellent, the emotions are portrayed very delicately, and the details are well handled. I see that there are no poisonous points now. I look forward to it later. Also, please give me one more chapter. I can do anything. I can't see the next chapter. I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body. It is very uncomfortable. I have a dull feeling like I am suddenly stuck in the middle of shit [crying][crazy][crazy][crazy]

I really want to give it five stars, but objectively speaking, there is still a small disadvantage. That is the protagonist's excuse that he likes Zhu Shao. This excuse is very typical and can easily arouse readers' disgust and reduce their desire to read. If possible, I hope the author can reset that paragraph. If not, just pretend that I didn't say it. This book is fast-paced, not draggy, the plot is relatively bland (if you can accept it, I highly recommend reading it), and the writing is good. The author's writing is really good, it's so to my liking. When the author writes more and adds a few more pictures, I will give five stars [blowing kisses] for keeping his word, author, come on [get it] The author only plans to write 300,000 words, so I'll give you five stars.

Covered in the guise of becoming a hundred, it is actually Lily's female novel. If you want to read Cultivation of Immortality, you can go. This novel is a romance novel, with little fighting, and it is basically a matter of one sword and two swords. The pace of the novel is considered fast, but many details are not handled properly. This is a novel composed of a succubus protagonist, a wasteful system, and a pure heroine. You can also watch the full text of Gao Tian

It is a masterpiece that does not hide its faults. The article pays attention to the emotional line. Basically there is no knife in the whole process (it is very sweet in the later stage). The writing is very good and has a bit of a stale feeling. You can see the pull between the girls who want to speak but can't speak. It is obvious that two girls are in love. However, the TS setting is too redundant, and removing the TS setting has no impact on the plot (because it is only mentioned once in the article). Moreover, Jiang Xueyi is a normal girl in terms of psychological identity and behavior. She probably missed many pure readers. Moreover, there is a TS setting. I personally think it is a male version, but after reading the whole article, the description still feels more like a female version. But overall, it is still a rare masterpiece.

The routine is still the same, and the villain regrets it. There are eight hundred if not one thousand books in Tomato, but most of them are just boring reading for fun, and they can't help but savor it carefully. But because of its delicate emotional description, I think this book can indeed be regarded as a superior work of this type. The main plot is impressive, and there's not much to say. What interests me more is the characters. The system has deliberately weakened the drama, and there are only two or three tasks, and they don't appear frequently to cause trouble. This makes the emotions between the heroines Jiang and Zhu appear more natural, and Jiang's strong attitude towards Zhu at the beginning and his unwillingness to recognize his emotions later add to the readability of this story of chasing his wife. What attracts me the most is naturally the awkward but sincere relationship between Jiang and Zhu. Overall, I highly recommend it, but judging from the current plot trend, it can be completed in about 20 W words. If it is too long, the end will be too big.

The plot advances quickly, without any delay, and with three missions, I was fascinated by the heroine. The emotional transition is natural, and there are clear psychological descriptions that reflect the characters' emotions. Small shortcomings: Black Bird in the early stage is a rare shortcoming of this book, or the only shortcoming (I think) Black Bird's words in the early stage are too... For Xue Yi, and this book is mainly developed from Xue Yi's perspective, which is really uncomfortable for me to read. At present, it can be regarded as a masterpiece among the two heroines. I hope the author will speed up the update and look forward to ing [asking for more updates] But now, Black Bird's words are getting better, and they are no longer as annoying as before.

At present, I have seen the latest progress of more than 60 chapters. Although the author says that he is a newcomer, his delicate writing style, compact plot, description of the characters' personalities, and coherence of the storyline are enough to rank in the top three among the hundreds of dual-heroine novels I have read on Tomato. To be able to reach this position without relying on sweetness is a testament to the author's writing style, which is simply brilliant. I hope the follow-up plot can be maintained.

If you don't hide your faults, please give me 5 stars for encouragement. On a 10-point scale, I would rate it around 8 points. It is a Lily article with few poisonous points, few unnecessary words, and compact content. There are relatively many emotional descriptions, and the battle scenes are average. The plot is relatively smooth, but there are also many logical loopholes. For example, the golden elixir stage cannot fly and does not have a storage bag. There is also a super weak chicken Tiandao. There is also a female major who is a super addict and has gone from Jindanqian to the invincible state of nearly Hedao in one year. Across the middle lies the golden elixir Yuanying leaving the body and refining the void. We also need to unify the Jian Tomb Sect and change the habits of an evil cultivating sect. A low-level lily romance novel with the appearance of cultivating immortality. A few of the tomatoes were not rotten. The article at the end of Zhenger Ba Jing. Please encourage me.