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This is the real way to redeem elves. Shido's way of redemption always feels too tough, unreal and forced.

I hope book friends can give me a rating. [Sending Hearts] [Thinking] There should be no one left.

In my personal opinion, the writing style tends to be stream-of-consciousness and has a certain reading threshold. This type is either particularly appetizing or may be a bit hard to stomach. Sometimes I can read the book in one go without thinking about it. The content is piled up and it feels like the author just typed out whatever came to mind. Sometimes it can be clearly felt that there are some gaps between the paragraphs. To put it more seriously, some paragraphs are not connected to the previous content, which makes the reading feel a bit fragmented. The character creation seems to be in the style of Japanese light novels, with a kind of principled and stubborn personality that is not particularly common but not uncommon in recent years (forgive me for describing it this way, I didn't think of other very appropriate adjectives, it feels like a great teacher). Many things that can be easily solved will choose more complex actions based on their own ideas, and the help they provide is more inclined to comfort their own hearts. The preference for personal character creation style and plot content description varies from person to person. The plot is more daily oriented, with a larger proportion of psychological description, and the plot is not advanced very fast. Except for some brief fighting descriptions in the first few chapters (really?), There are almost no battle rounds. The current conflict is the tension between the protagonist's determination to go home and the accumulation of bonds. Simply put, it is the issue of belonging. If the protagonist wants to go back, he must contact the elves and accumulate strength, but it will also deepen the bond. According to my understanding, the follow-up trend is to keep contacting the elves (I'm quite curious how Wu will contact each other, whether to skip directly or make other arrangements) and then accumulate strength. He accidentally falls down several times in the middle, causing the elves to reverse. After accumulating enough bonds, he hesitates, and finally chooses to stay, or like the previously written extra story, he goes back, but the elves also follow. At present, the image and character of the male protagonist have been described very clearly. After all, a lot of ink has been spent on describing it. Judging from the current description, the male protagonist has a firm idea of ​​going back, so the description of the conflict and why he will change his mind is worth thinking about. I am looking forward to it. Having said so much, it actually doesn't matter. After all, it's just my unilateral output of opinions. I quite like this book and look forward to the follow-up.

It's okay, compared to the battle fan fiction I've read, it's pretty good. Especially the emotional description is very delicate. But the more detailed the description, the more I feel that the love Luo Li gave Yu Kamishiro is a fake with purpose. What I have seen so far is more than 4,000 pages, I hope it will be better in the future. Another thing is that the protagonist is too determined.

The protagonist Luo Li has a relatively distinctive personality, and his interaction with the characters in "The Battle" is also full of fun, adding a lot of fun to the story and allowing readers to feel a relaxed and happy atmosphere during the reading process.

Hmm... How should I put it? I think it's inexplicably good-looking. Maybe it's because I personally like this type of novel, about ordinary daily life...

It has shortcomings, but it was written by someone seriously, and that's enough.

Let's have a fun ending of "stealing the sky for eternal life, Fang Yuan returns home". For example: After calculating everything, you finally return home and find that countless years have passed, human civilization has ended, and the people and things you care about are buried in the past forever. He must have been in great pain at that time. Let me taste this pain, it must be a very wonderful taste, hehe.

I feel like it's well written, but I just can't understand it.

Very good-looking, but the disadvantage is that the male protagonist is too determined [face covering]

Come on, the author is great, but he's still not as good as Tang... Bah Kuangsanjiang

From my heart, if you can accept the fatal dose, it's still pretty good.

It's still ok for now, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist. The introduction says there is no female protagonist, but when I read the text, I feel like there is a female protagonist. I came here because there is no female protagonist. Can the author explain it? [Thinking] There are not many authors who update four or five chapters every day. Author, when will you get to the main story? The way you write it, it feels like you won't write the main plot until more than 100 chapters.

I can still understand it, and the writing is quite good. This book feels like it has to be read chapter by chapter, and it will be a bit confusing if you skip it. There are currently no OOC characters in the original work. The original plot is very good. Come on, author.

Yes, it's rare to see it from an ordinary person's perspective

The author writes with great care, from his green writing style at the beginning to his smooth writing style now. Very nb.

It's beautiful, but no one sees it, which is a pity. Mainly, there are a bunch of people who want to watch the fight, but were directly dissuaded by the previous few pictures, but I am different, I have never even watched the fight. I was just looking for a more everyday novel to read, and I thought this one was pretty good, but the language was a little out of line with ordinary novels.

There are too many psychological activities, and the plot is a bit slow [eating melon], but I still support the author.

Not bad, so I want a single female protagonist.

Very good, hope to work harder

Ahem, cough, cough, the emperor is here~ I have read it, it is indeed top quality~ reward~

Being unique and carving out your own path like me is what I want to see happen, not a bunch of book covers with a template.

It's boring every day, but it's inexplicably beautiful and makes people want to watch it [note]

Poor Sansan, I don't know when he can be released, just ask @

Not bad, but the author, your punctuation and sentence expressions are too stream of consciousness. It looks a little uncomfortable.

So far it's okay, I hope the author can keep writing

Maybe I haven't read enough of this type of book📚[face covering], but I can still read it, so keep up the good work.

I really like Date A Live but there are so few novels I can read. This novel is well written. Come on! [Praise]

Is the protagonist trying to usurp Shido's power? [What]

This plot is a bit sweet, I will continue to have sex for free until the end [shy]