Any Door Survival: Starting Sharingan

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the meager praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you finish the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Tell me the reason for the low rating. 1. The content of the first dungeon is very good. The protagonist is smart and decisive in killing people. It can be tolerated even if some words and sentences are written wrong by the author (for example, the gene repair fluid is not required in the first part, but later it is said that only the gene repair fluid is somewhat useful). 2. In the second dungeon, the protagonist helped the old man Jiu, but was rescued by a peanut at night. The next day, the protagonist himself guessed whether the old man Jiu was a master, and then the ticket was stolen. When he got it back, it said "the old man wanted to play tricks on him." When he was drinking at night, he discovered that there was something wrong with the wine the old man gave him. But! The protagonist just doesn't doubt that the old man did it, it was someone else who did it!

It has clear logic and is a novel similar to the world of reincarnation. It is recommended to read it. After reading the first 300 chapters, you can just treat it as the end. The latter part is not so good. It is very poisonous and superficial. It is not written seriously. The first part is still very interesting and innovative. It is recommended to read it.

A pretty good survival novel. There are no big disadvantages and certainly no advantages. I think the biggest poisonous point is that the protagonist's will has been modified. When he first entered the world of Any Door, the protagonist had a hidden scumbag personality. In the second world, the system assigned an indigenous woman who liked the protagonist, and the two of them unlocked the pose that night. As a result, when they made a wish on the sacred mountain, the woman made a wish that the protagonist would only love her. Since then, the protagonist's will has been distorted by the sacred mountain, and he is indifferent to all the beauties that come to his door. It's okay to write a single female protagonist, but if you write it this way, it's just a blockage.

(Superior) Orange LV7, 35 points/50 points First impression 150%: sense of substitution 4, attraction 3 Basic settings 75%: plug-in 4, setting 3 Content 125%: Writing 4, Creativity 3 Structure 75%: Rhythm 4, Main Line 3 Details 75%: Character 4, Logic 3 Balance Penalty: None Highlights: Comprehensive Poison point: Enthusiasm fades Feelings: The first two worlds are quite good, but the third world becomes more and more boring the more you look at it, and the pace is a bit slow. Since it has the Sharingan, it will be divided into the same people, so what is the use of so many original worlds? Score calculation: 1.5×7+1.25×7+0.75×21=35 Points Difficulty score calculation (test): 2.0×3+1.5×3+0.6×10+0.9×(16)+0.8×(26)=51.7 ─────────────────── 3. Corresponding scoring of difficulty points (experiment) (1) Sense of immersion: Difficulty coefficient 0.6 (2) Attractiveness: Difficulty coefficient 2.0 (3) Plug-in: Difficulty coefficient 0.8 (4) Setting: Difficulty coefficient 0.8 (5) Writing style: Difficulty coefficient 0.9 (6) Creativity: Difficulty coefficient 1.5 (7) Rhythm: Difficulty coefficient 0.8 (8) Main line: difficulty coefficient 0.8 (9) Character design: difficulty coefficient 0.9 (10) Logic: Difficulty coefficient 0.9 4. Difficulty criteria (1) Perfect😍(5 points), corresponding to difficulty value 30 (2) Excellent 😁 (4 points), corresponding to a difficulty value of 10 (3) Good 😄 (3 points), corresponding to difficulty value 3 (4) Passed 😐 (2 points), corresponding to difficulty value 1 (5) Negative review 🙁 (1 point), corresponding to difficulty value 0.5 (6) Negative review 🤬 (-1 point), corresponding to difficulty value 10

I met a sister online half a year ago I met a 32-year-old sister online half a year ago. We chatted very well and we were like a confidante in ancient times. Today she asked to meet, but I hesitated. I said you have a family and it felt uncomfortable to meet her. But she said it was okay and they were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty, with an S-shaped figure. In fact, she is not far from my city. We made an appointment to meet at a coffee shop. We did not choose to meet elsewhere. We were mainly afraid of meeting acquaintances. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for about an hour. While waiting for her, I looked at her photo and thought it was a "car rollover scene." She is much prettier than in the photo, and she is my favorite type. She also recognized me and didn't know what to say. In order to break the embarrassment, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good and made people feel warm. Her heart rate was a bit fast. After sitting in the coffee shop for a while, we went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole process was She peeled shrimps for me, picked out fish bones, and walked out of the restaurant after dinner. She held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home. I said I would take a taxi back, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got off the car, she said give me a hug. When I got home, I found that she put a note in my pocket, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content...

The Guinness record is typing 807 letters per minute, according to each Chinese characters require six letters, and approximately 134 can be typed per minute. Words, since you are not the holder, so let's go by each point It takes 100 words to calculate a person's health according to WHO standards A healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you spend about It takes two hours, another 20 minutes to go to the toilet, and 40 minutes to wash up. Rinse, exercise for one hour, and get inspired in two hours. Excluding another hour of dazed fishing, you should have nine hours to come When typing, you should type 435,780 words based on 2,000 words per chapter. There should be 217 chapters, but you only put so much content every day, why? What's going on? Honestly, is it a deduction? The production team's donkey Not even daring to rest like this, the author quickly got up to type.

Don't bring girls from the dungeon to the protagonist's home. There will be no stability here. If you don't want to spend time improving the heroine's combat power, the protagonist can just go back and have a look occasionally.

Just like Sister Dongbei Yu, the closer you get to the back, the more mellow and delicious it becomes [Adoration][Adoration]

Does anyone know if you have ever gone back to the second world? Will we see you again, Li Li? I don't like Zhang Xin'ai very much because she takes up too much space and a lot of the plot relies on her, which is not as good as Li from the second world.

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled in the World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I followed the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" Divine Body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am old, and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update!

It's not bad, but it's the kind of book that if you don't read it for a day, you won't be interested in continuing to read it. . Four stars, please encourage me.

What a fate. I have read a little bit of the other book, but there were too few chapters, so I stopped reading it. This one is generally pretty good, and is more suitable for my appetite. I have just read about a hundred chapters, and so far they are all good, but I think the score is a bit low. I generally don't read books below 8.5. Generally speaking, 8.5 Or below 8.0 Are basically fatal. A book with flaws, I can't stand it. Personally, I think this book has no problem with 8.5, And other problems are not big. As long as the update is large enough and the quality is guaranteed, the book will be properly written. Oh yes! I just forgot to mention that I found the book on the survival channel 📚, but... The truth is out of the survival channel 🚪 It's a little bit related, more like infinite flow, or if you want to go to infinite flow, it would be better, more popular 🔥 and more popular @ Someone

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are in QQ, QQ, etc., And you often use your computer keyboard, but you have lost interest in updating. Is this reasonable? Qidian Tomato QQ and others are strong because they have inherited the etiquette and skills of their ancestors. If you stop breaking the news, you will have nowhere to release the pressure and become tired instead. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will definitely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say; while Poujie cannot get royalties and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it.

It looks good, the dungeons are quite interesting, especially the second dungeon has a protagonist who is helpful but not a bad person.

The author's imagination is very rich. Each world is original. But I was too tired to watch it. Well, give it a five-star review.

The author obviously doesn't want to suppress the protagonist, and he creates all kinds of traps for the protagonist. All kinds of good people rush to give the protagonist treasures. This is good. I only saw the second world. I don't like to hunt for women or men. If the first world is a world characteristic, then this world is weird. I think it is necessary to raise it. It's dead. Do you want to see how awesome it is? The protagonist is evil, but the people in the first world are not without extraordinary abilities. Since child urine is useful, I think black dog blood and the like are also useful. I really think this ghost is quite easy to kill, and there is a kind spirit like a dog.

Not bad, but it's a pity that it was discovered too early

The soul of the forbidden alchemy in the misty world has been introduced. Because it is a forbidden technique that can change the world, it may be the weakest type of forbidden technique, but it is also a world-class forbidden technique. Other extraordinary paths may have various shortcomings, but being an extraordinary path must have its merits. The Sharingan is just like that, the protagonist's strength is not as strong as that of Gaowu World. At least many high-level martial arts world explosions are trivial. There are many true immortals in martial arts.

The second door is not over yet, but the plot is exciting!

I'm very surprised. I found another good book. Looking at it now, it's overall very good. "National Survival" is a bit interesting. Now the protagonist has passed through two worlds, and the writing is quite good. It's worth looking forward to. Come on, author. There are very few good infinite novels in the world.

It's okay now, and Li Li, if you don't get a perfect result, I will definitely give you 2 stars. Even if you live in that world for the rest of your life and die and continue to travel through the world, it will be okay.

It's quite healthy, but it feels a bit fast. I can't write much about my feelings later [Chigua]

It's okay. It's a good novel if it's not poisonous or watery.

Author, stop hiding. I saw you changed the cover. Why haven't you updated it yet?

Not bad, not bad, not bad. . .

It's quite interesting. As long as it doesn't collapse later, it will be popular.

There are no particularly big poisonous spots, there are some small flaws, but they are nothing compared to the four updates every day.

It's not a big hang-up, and you still need to follow the unlimited streaming plot, but the plot is okay. It seems to be a high-quality grain and grass seedling. I hope the author can stick to it and the results of this book will not be too bad after a few waves of Tomato streaming.

Come on, author, it's so beautiful and the rhythm is clear.