I Have a High Natural Affinity for Controlling Animals.

It looks good. The plot is not bad, but the segmentation can be better. The current section is too long and looks tiring. Some descriptions can be reduced if they are not necessary. It would be better to focus on the characters. Don't be too literal. The descriptive text is still a bit immature. Keep up the good work, the author. There is still a lot of room for improvement. Four stars encourage me [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Very well written! ! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of subject matter~ My wife's writing style is very similar to the fantasy/beast-control novels I read in junior high and high school~~ But one thing is that the paragraphs are too long and it's very troublesome to read [crying] I hope my wife can divide a paragraph into several smaller exercises (because when reading online novels, everyone's attention is not so focused, short paragraphs can make it easier for everyone to read~ Come on ma'am! ! ! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The author should write in the first person, and it reads like a diary written by himself [heartfelt]

Talent cannot change poison calculation points!

A nice book