[Alternative Douluo + Technology + Twin Martial Spirits + Killing the God King + Pushing the Lord of the Planes]
Yan Xu was hit by a comet in a spaceship and traveled to Douluo Continent. He found that the technological civilization here was too backward. Let's see how he used high technology to play with Douluo Continent. Science is a weapon to challenge the gods. What kind of peerless martial spirit? What Poseidon and Shura God? What dragon god? Anyone who encounters my science has to kneel down!
The pace is very fast (ends around 100), if you like it, push it, if you don't like it, leave it.
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Reader comments
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I took a look at your homepage. Are you writing two books at the same time? Very brave! The styles of the two books are also different, which is very talented! It's very difficult to get into the role in a short period of time. I respect you as a man.
It's quite confusing to watch! Many places are inexplicable! I haven't read the comic version, so I don't know if it's right!
If you don't know how to write about emotions, don't write about them, because a little emotion will ruin the character of a book. The front is well paved, but there is too little. The longer it would be, the more interesting it would be to watch! Sometimes the character design can go all the way to the dark side, and removing a little emotional drama will give the individual a good sense of sharpness. I took a look at your homepage. Are you writing two books at the same time? Very brave! The styles of the two books are also different, which is very talented! It's very difficult to get into the role in a short period of time. I respect you as a man.
It's quite confusing to watch! Many places are inexplicable! I haven't read the comic version, so I don't know if it's right!