Douluo Dalu: Technology Makes a True God, and I Slay the Plane Master

If you don't know how to write about emotions, don't write about them, because a little emotion will ruin the character of a book. The front is well paved, but there is too little. The longer it would be, the more interesting it would be to watch! Sometimes the character design can go all the way to the dark side, and removing a little emotional drama will give the individual a good sense of sharpness. I took a look at your homepage. Are you writing two books at the same time? Very brave! The styles of the two books are also different, which is very talented! It's very difficult to get into the role in a short period of time. I respect you as a man.

It's quite confusing to watch! Many places are inexplicable! I haven't read the comic version, so I don't know if it's right!