Traditional fantasy·Fantasy·Oriental fantasy·Imagination
My name is Ye Yu, and all the fortunes of the heavens have blessed me! Save the common people with my flesh and blood!
On the Tianyuan Continent, the gears of destiny are turning. He was once despised by his family, but he has experienced a tremendous change. This change actually led to endless mysteries, and darkness descended...
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In an ancient war, the Dark Lord, along with thirty-six demon lords, seventy-two demon kings and all the demon soldiers, were all sealed in an isolated space outside Tianyuan Continent, and the Chaos Sword was like the key. As time goes by, Ye Yu of the Ye family was once a person who was unable to practice, but he grew up step by step to become a man of his own. He thought he had seen the true appearance of the world, but reality repeatedly subverted his understanding. Now that demons are wreaking havoc, Ye Yu is actually told that he is the key figure in quelling the demons' troubles.
Reader comments
Chapters 40 and 50 are starting to ignite! ! !
Of course, it may be my own filter, but compared to the previous chapters, it is indeed an improvement. Come on! ! !
(Encouragement from myself!)
Dear readers, Little Sheep would like to say something here. Thank you very much.
When I started writing this story, I really didn't take all the ideas into consideration. Later in the writing, I found that I couldn't control the rhythm. Sometimes the progress was too fast. The first twenty or thirty chapters were basically one story per chapter. Later, I gradually got a feel for it and gradually improved the outline.
At present, the outline has the basic structure, mainly the detailed chapters.
There are not many emotional portrayals of the characters, so this is also a problem, and I will pay attention to this aspect later.
The other thing is the grasp of the rhythm. I can't say this. You'll get a feel for it as you write more.
I also hope that if you have any opinions, you can speak up and accept them with an open mind.
Chapters 40 and 50 are starting to ignite! ! ! Of course, it may be my own filter, but compared to the previous chapters, it is indeed an improvement. Come on! ! ! (Encouragement from myself!) Dear readers, Little Sheep would like to say something here. Thank you very much. When I started writing this story, I really didn't take all the ideas into consideration. Later in the writing, I found that I couldn't control the rhythm. Sometimes the progress was too fast. The first twenty or thirty chapters were basically one story per chapter. Later, I gradually got a feel for it and gradually improved the outline. At present, the outline has the basic structure, mainly the detailed chapters. There are not many emotional portrayals of the characters, so this is also a problem, and I will pay attention to this aspect later. The other thing is the grasp of the rhythm. I can't say this. You'll get a feel for it as you write more. I also hope that if you have any opinions, you can speak up and accept them with an open mind.