Fox Demon******

The writing is okay, I hope the author can learn more about scene transitions

After watching so many second creations of the fox demon little matchmaker, the plot is the most attractive to me. The main plot of an unknown love story was changed to a document of resistance against injustice. However, the story has a strong sense of substitution and the characters are well created. The story is novel and completes the world of the fox demon and the little matchmaker.

Can we find a better time for additional topics (such as the memories of certain characters, etc.) And draw a horizontal line [face covering]

I like to support

(Why five words) [smile]

I was confused when I saw it, I didn't know what I was talking about.

I've only read chapter 15. Can anyone tell me whether the protagonist turns back to a boy later on?

Come on author, you can do it

I think the subject matter is okay, but the writing is a bit green.

The king has no anger, so why is his name not recorded in later generations? Will Zhuren return in the future? Doesn't Zhuren want the human race to be revived? Why does the Dao League in later generations still have no high-end combat power? Doesn't Zhuren cultivate it? Do you want to monopolize power yourself?

A bit cruel? How long will it take for Zhuren to come back? This kind of fanfic is destined not to be long. It's a good thing that the author wanted to write very delicately, and it can be seen that he put his heart into it. But judging from the current situation, Zhu Ren is very strong, so strong that he might be crushed as soon as he comes back. Is the author planning to bring the protagonist back in the finale? Now the content is that there is always the shadow of the protagonist, and humans have been affected by the demons. Even if they can't completely put Zhuren back, they can't be like summoning Shi Hao in the Holy Ruins to cast a projection from time to time to scare the demons. I skipped through it, feeling that the dozens of chapters before the update were being updated, and people were being annoyed all the time. We couldn't keep suppressing the readers' emotions like this. Since this kind of fanfic cannot be written for too long, the author should try to make the readers happy in the limited chapters (of course it is not purely cool). A novel with eight or nine hundred chapters can have the protagonist hold back his anger for dozens of chapters. But let's not let the protagonist and readers hold this short story for so long.