Offend Uchiha? Destroy the Qunyu Pavilion with One Arrow at the Beginning

He has a handsome face and looks just like the reader. He is the king of good looks in the duel arena, Eternal Sasuke. He has super fast hands and an invincible ultimate move. Even if the opponent is a substitute, it is difficult to catch his back swing. Kizaru has fallen, the purple dog has survived, ten Sasukes, nine of them are reckless at the beginning, and there is a fire escape prize. This is the last king, Ghana's man, Eternal Sasuke.

Byd made me laugh to death. There are a bunch of people and machines in the comment area who have no reference. This Sasuke is not restored, but he is very heroic. If you like super heroic Sasuke, you can watch it.

Sasuke's flavor is quite strong, and it fits Sasuke's character very well. I think it's good to write it this way, but I think Liyue (god, immortal) should not be completely wiped out. In the beginning, it was just Ningguang's offense. This is also understandable. During the ceremony of inviting immortals, a stranger suddenly attacked with thunder elements. With the character of Ningguang, she will definitely give priority to Liyue. She is definitely not bad at heart, but her approach is too extreme. But I personally don't want the immortals and the emperor to die. I will try my best to improve the Liyue chapter. I want to see a good ending.

It is recommended to watch it without thinking. It is really fun, but the emotional line is average. For the sake of revival, the characters are forced to have emotions, but the fun is enough. The character of Sasuke in the original work is too restored. It is the ultimate feeling of fun.

Abstract. Curiosity. Strong words. If you want to see three at the same time, read this book.

The main character only has crazy criticism in the middle and later stages of the original Sasuke. In fact, Sasuke is still a good guy in his heart. He doesn't kill people very much, and he doesn't have the situation of killing everyone if he disagrees [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] But it's cool to watch, and there's nothing too bad about it. This fanfic looks very awkward and I'm not used to it. Previous fanfics would be a little softer. This kind of brutality feels good when I read it for the first time. It's not like the previous one where I was forced to work on the main line because I traveled through Teyvat. The main line of this book actually serves the protagonist. It's quite comfortable to watch. The style has not changed from beginning to end. It's very radical, but it's hard to change it in the later stages, so just keep it as it is. It's cool.

Four stars because it's really fun, and one star deducted because I came here to have fun, not to watch love games, especially because the writing of these love games is not very good, and it also affects the fun part [face-covering] Dude, I'm already feeling aggrieved, and if I'm also feeling aggrieved when reading a novel, then wouldn't I have read it in vain? [Face-covering]

The subject matter is good, although there are some minor flaws. For example, Sasuke and other female characters have a bit of an otaku vibe, but Sasuke's pretentiousness is restored well and looks very comfortable. This is called authentic~

This is the most enjoyable Genshin Impact book I have read so far. What other Genshin Impact books have Uchiha written? This one is not inked. Very much like Uchiha Sasuke's character

First of all, this book is basically written by observing myself. Secondly, this book has made subtle changes to Sasuke's character, but the changes are not very big. The author's writing style is still very good. The main problem at present is combat power. Sasuke's combat power is the top in this world view (don't ask why Those who don't play in the debate circle will not understand), it is basically a good article, mainly about the character, there is no major change, and there is no minor change, it is medium-level and not as cold as the original work. Secondly, in the future, I can tell the author about the description, and I will agree, and there is no need to follow me secretly [face covering]

Yes, Sasuke's character is very restored [Thinking] Yes, the only drag at the moment is the shortness of the author. The Liyue part is so cool, directly challenging the whole of Liyue. It is indeed different from other novels. Don't make Zhongli's son in the novel, but you make Zhongli his son [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][eat melon][eat melon]

It's rare to find a book on this kind of subject, I hope I can keep writing about it

It's so cool. When you want to praise a fanfic in detail from multiple dimensions, you can start from the plot arrangement, character creation, writing style, inheritance and innovation of the original work, etc., And use rich details and vivid expressions to show its charm: This fanfic is really a shining pearl in the world of fanfic, and it makes people fall deeply into it as soon as they read it, making it difficult to extricate themselves. Let's start with the plot. The author's imagination is astonishing, yet his logic is impeccable. At the beginning of the chapter, a highly suspenseful original plot catches the reader's attention. It seems to have no connection with the original work, but as it progresses layer by layer, it is accurately integrated into the world view of the original work like a mortise and tenon. The rhythm of the story is superbly controlled, with tense and thrilling conflict plots and soothing and warm daily moments scattered in perfect harmony, like a well-arranged symphony, sometimes passionate and surging, making people's hearts lift to their throats, sometimes melodious and mellow, allowing readers to immerse themselves in delicate emotions. Every twist and turn is unexpected and reasonable. The web of fate woven by the old and new characters is intricate but clear. Countless foreshadowings are recovered one by one at the end, bringing a sense of shock and satisfaction, just like after groping in the dark for a long time, the dawn finally breaks and the light shines brightly. In terms of character creation, the author is simply a soul painter, and his understanding and restoration of the original characters have reached the pinnacle. The personality characteristics of each character have been accurately captured. Their gestures, laughter and curses are all familiar to us, as if the original characters broke free from the pages of the book and stood vividly before our eyes. Not only that, the author cleverly uses the new plot to give the characters deeper growth and transformation. The originally single and flat supporting character has a complex inner world and twists and turns of fate in the fan fiction, becoming three-dimensional and full; the protagonist discovers his hidden potential and traits under new challenges without losing the core character of the original work. This innovative shaping while retaining the original flavor makes the characters truly "alive", and readers can clearly feel their emotions, as if they are experiencing this wonderful adventure with the characters. Speaking of writing, it is even more delicate, like a feast of words. When the author describes the scene, his brushwork is like a delicate meticulous painting. With just a few words, a vivid picture appears on the page. The fierce battle scenes, with the flashing swords and shadows, and the flowing movement descriptions make people feel as if they are on the battlefield and can hear the sonorous sound of the collision of weapons; when describing the emotions, they are as gentle as the spring breeze, gently blowing over the readers' heartstrings. The delicate psychological portrayal shows the inner entanglement, struggle, love and reluctance of the characters without reservation, making the readers empathize with them. Whether it is a grand worldview structure or a small emotional fluctuation, it can be perfectly presented in the author's writing, and his writing skills are astonishingly profound. It must be mentioned that the integration and innovation of the original work in this fanfic is exemplary. It is deeply rooted in the soil of the original work. From the setting, background to the classic plot, it pays clever tribute, allowing fans of the original work to capture those familiar elements at a glance and be filled with memories and emotions. But the author is not limited to this. He boldly opens up new branches of the story, creates brand new conflicts and emotional entanglements, and expands the original world view to a broader and deeper world. It is like carefully building a new pavilion on an ancient castle, which not only retains the ancient charm of the castle, but also adds a modern and fashionable atmosphere. The two complement each other and jointly build a new world that is both familiar and full of surprises. Whether you are a loyal fan of the original work or a new reader coming into contact with the subject for the first time, you can find your own fun and touch in this book, immerse yourself in it, and never forget to return.

A must-read for those who like Sasse, the character is very close to the original work, the setting is the peak of the Six Paths, and may be enhanced in the future, the killing is decisive, and will not be sloppy. If you are not happy, just start fighting, show me how cool it is [OK][face covering] ps: At present, only one female protagonist is on screen

I have never given a five-star review to a Genshin Impact book. My proud soul does not allow me to give that kind of crude work a position that does not belong to them. However, this book has this caliber and the author is worthy of my respect and even admiration.

Yes, Sasuke is a bit bloodthirsty, and why can't the Amaterasu setting be introduced? There is also a clear setting in the Book of Formations. Amaterasu is the temperature at the center of the sun, which is 15 million Kelvin. Many characters [and planets [sneaky laughter] [sneaky laughter]] actually vaporize as soon as Amaterasu is fired, so this setting was not introduced It's a pity, and there are too many little ghosts in the cloud [Comment area] Also, first of all, I don't play Genshin Impact, nor watch Naruto, but I still pretend that I know everything, and argue there. There are people like this in this life.

Cutting all the way from Mondstadt to Liyue, it was really very skillful. When it came to the rice wife, the soldier's head came down [face covering] [like], to the Xumiduo Torre, which couldn't explode the anus, to the Fontaine Water God, which made the water god cry in fear, and to the Nata Fire God, who had to be strangled by the neck and danced. When Tianli looked up, he saw that the sky was falling, and was directly smashed into slag by one shot of Indra's Arrow, and the Hantian Nail was cut in half with one knife. Invincible child [face covering]

It's not OOC at all. It's definitely fun to watch. However, the writing on the relationship aspect is not very good. The emotional lines with various characters are basically love at first sight. It takes a lot of pen and ink. Even the description of a character may not be as long as one chapter. It's good to write about everyone's love. Generally speaking, the beginning and ending are good. I hope that some words can be devoted to the encounter stage with the harem. Of course, there is nothing to say about the plot. It is awesome and completely fits Sasuke's character.

It feels very good [love], but it's a bit short, but it's a tomato, so it doesn't matter. It doesn't hurt to occasionally collapse the character (the character is meant to collapse!) Don't just talk about trivial things, this is a national event, right? [What][What][What]

It's good, but a lot of love lines have been forced into it. It doesn't matter if the character is from the Seven Kingdoms, other passers-by should also be drawn in. It gives me the feeling that all girls with plots must like it, just like Sasuke.

A truly refreshing article, impeccable, full marks [like][like][like] It seems that my evaluation is still too narrow[Like][Like][Like]

What makes me most satisfied is that there is no system or anything, and the writing style is also good. I have read a similar article before, and the writing style is also very good. But with a system, it feels childish. It can be said that the whole story is interesting all the time. There is no feeling of losing the main thread due to interacting with too many people.

It's not bad. Although it's a little bit toxic, it doesn't matter much. Among so many Genshin Impact fanfics, it's pretty good. It's not frustrating to read. Other Genshin Impact fanfic authors have written about frustration. The author's writing is good. You can read it.

It's cool. Compared with other books, it's really good. Finally, it's not just a licking dog, it's just this emotional line... The author needs to strengthen it [face covering]

The text is good, no doubt about it, but if you prefer the Seven Gods of Teyvat, you'd better avoid it, especially the Chef of the Seven Gods, because the author really made the Teyvat side a bit miserable.

Come on, write more coldly, and reduce the plot of the original work. Mondstadt is all original work, and Liyue is easy to kill.

It's so beautiful. Sasuke's character in the book is exactly the same as in the original book. In terms of writing books, I, Madara Uchiha, would like to call you the strongest.

Uchiha Sasuke is so cool! ! ! I just raised the corners of my mouth like crazy! ! ! I directly give good reviews, good reviews, good reviews! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration]

Sasuke's character is well written, and the fighting is fun! The author follows his own pace, don't worry about the trolls, come on, author ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

This is what I am pursuing, the real cool text, wake up, the god-like power of Uchiha [anger] [anger] [anger]