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This one is really nice. Nowadays, too many heartthrobs fall in love at first glance, but the protagonist only has a good-looking skin. After reading this book, I can really feel that there is a charismatic protagonist. Under the good-looking skin is a hot and sincere soul. When Tomato's Gudan describes a protagonist who is a superior person, he often only focuses on the struggle for power and gain, but Master He does not. He really cares about people's livelihood and becomes a local official. Serving the country and the people, rather than focusing on money and power, is our socialist successor. [Crying] I really feel that he is a modern person. I really like the foreshadowing in the first seven chapters, the peaceful and beautiful daily life is broken, and He Lin's psychological transformation from seeking death to becoming an official in the court is particularly well written. I like it so much, I will follow you forever, goddess. There are indeed problems, but what can be seen is that the author does have great potential, and I hope you will get better and better [blowing kiss]

Regarding one of the replies to the book review, because the question is quite serious, I will also put the explanation here. Thank you for your review, baby. I have a few things to say here. Because I have read The Reincarnation of Powers and I particularly like this book. It is also because this book inspired me to write about the psychology of ancient NPCs. I cannot deny this, and my writing style is not as good as Tianxie. This is the first and first work I have written, and it is among the top three. When I wrote the chapter, I didn't even have an outline. The later outline only contained 2,000 words, which was basically the same as no outline. At the beginning, there was only a chat box and a simple character plot that I discussed with my relatives and friends. Until I became an official in the court and ran around naked without an outline, it was almost the same. The first twenty chapters are very loose and scattered, and the descriptions are very problematic. At this time, I don't know how to segment and turn the chapters. After finishing this article, I will delete all the contents of the first volume and overhaul it. The rhythm of this first volume is not good at all. When I first started writing NP in the early stage, I was really limited by the impact of reading The Reincarnation of the Powerful Minister. But I started thinking about writing about Gudan when I was in the third year of high school, that is, before watching The Reincarnation of the Powerful Minister. The first scene in my mind was of a young man sitting on the mountain watching the clouds roll in and relax, drinking and drowning his sorrows. The original title of this book was Xi Ri Guanyun. When I decided to write npc, I discussed it with my relatives and friends. I said that I couldn't write it like the reincarnated powerful official, because that would neither respect the author nor the characters in my novel. When I was writing, I also tried my best to avoid being the same as the one written by The Reincarnated Power. The plot of this book is completely different from that of The Reincarnated Power. The final ending is also different, and the content I want to express is also different from The Reincarnated Power. 1. The three attackers currently on the scene are the prince, the secret guard, and the general's son. The prince and the secret guard have the same identity, but I think the characters are different. As a prince, Gong Yi was not the emperor's younger brother, but the son of the deposed prince of the previous dynasty. The title of prince was conferred by the previous emperor. He wanted to rebel from the beginning to the end, and in the end he would rebel and become the emperor. It seems that the nostalgia for flowers is not a necessary condition for the emperor to send vigilance, and it is not in line with Jie's common sense, so I will delete this article. And Jie is not trying to cater to the public because I personally like Jie Gong. This is my old feudalism () and all my future articles will basically be about Jie Gong () ① He has the arrogance of a superior person, and it is true that he is a playboy and out of tune. I really appreciate his ability to make people angry and his ability to discipline others. The psychology also goes from being attracted by sex at the beginning, to using Shou, to feeling that Shou is different from others, and then to being attracted by Shou's own homesickness and being tempted. In the later stage, there will be a plot where Shou and Shou share the hardships and resist the enemy, and the personality will change again. ②The character of the secret guard is a child of ordinary people. His father and mother died during the Wala invasion and massacre of the city. He was brought back to be a secret guard when he met a palace eunuch who was shopping on the street while wandering around. Later, he became the secret guard of the prince because of his high martial arts value. The prince also suspected that he had ulterior motives and sent him to be an undercover agent next to him. He would be afraid when his colleagues died, and the prince had trampled to death the daffodils he raised. He was afraid, jealous, and inferior to the powerful. Because he wanted to write a character who could always be by Shou's side and understand Shou's thoughts, and gradually become Shou's confidant, give Shou a place to talk, and protect Shou, so he was set as Shou's secret guard. Later, there will also be a change in the secret guard's emotions from being tempted to having a heart to heart and then to fully understanding the thoughts of feeling. ③ Shen Xiaolang, the son of the general, was not raised in the palace because his father also knew that he had great achievements. The birth of this child was not known to anyone else and was secretly raised elsewhere. Moreover, his father had no intention of entrusting him with important tasks. Therefore, his mentality was like that of a child in the early stages of the attack. In the later stage, he became a disciple of Shu Xingzhi, then took the imperial examination and became an official, and came into contact with his father's former friends, and came into contact with military power. Baby, if you want to continue to see if the characters are the same, you can look back. Each of them has a unique personality. 2. It is true that the writing style is young. This has only improved after more than 30 chapters. I will work hard to improve my writing level. After I finished writing some paragraphs, I would feel very retarded when I read them. The problem is extremely obvious in the first 46,000 words, because these are all based on It's an outline of about 2,000 words, and it gets messy and illogical as I write it. Baby, I guess the big picture you mentioned starts with the second volume, because this is where I have a record of the changes in the main outline and the conflicts between the characters, and the second volume is more than two months apart from the time I wrote the first volume. 3. Thank you very much for your long review, which pointed out all my problems. I am aware of these and am working hard to correct them. There are already three charming design inspiration books, one for the apocalypse, one for future science fiction, one for martial arts and one for the Republic of China. When I write these articles, I will write a detailed outline before starting the article, and I will also write a good biography of the characters. Thank you very much for your long comment that pointed out my problem. I will correct it, but I did not use the characters and plot, and the plot and characters are also different. I also named them based on each person's background story. Many people have written about Prince Dian's inferiority complex and the secret guard Nianxia General. During the period of writing this article, I did not read other BL novels because I was afraid that it would affect my ideas or accidentally bring out some of the same words when writing. This book is more like a novel with a touch of male porn. In the later stage, the reputation of the protagonist will become higher and higher, and he will have disciples, allies, admirers and admirers. It's not all love that points to him. This article was initially rejected seven or eight times in Jinjiang, and each time it took more than a week to apply again, so I haven't written the main text for more than two months. In these two months, I also figured out the main plot and character twists, and also learned a lot about novel writing techniques, so the rest will be smoother. (Because it is my own article, I rated it five stars)

It's very beautiful. To be honest, I rarely comment now, but I really like it. I like Shou's character very much. A heartthrob should not be limited to simple appearance (of course I also watch based on appearance... [Face covering]) I will always be a fan of this kind of wanton and unrestrained young man, and the author also writes it very well (I don't have a good mouth, so I can't say anything nice... Just come on💪💪💪💪💪)

This book is different from many heartthrob books I have read in the past. The protagonist relies on his own step-by-step planning and scheming to make money. The protagonist's transition from nostalgia for the past life and wishing for death to living a good life and seeking people's livelihood is natural. What amazed me the most was that from everything he said, did, and thought, I could see his inner core of stability and gentleness. This kind of tenderness and compassion is not ignorance and kindness, but choosing to exercise one's own kindness even after knowing the darkness of society. "Already aware of the vastness of the universe, I still pity the green grass and trees" is the best reflection of him. When dealing with other people, we also treat them with empathy and a measured approach and retreat. When the author describes the emotional line, the protagonist is really communicating with them as an independent personality, not a "spiritual giant baby". The love line and the career line intersect with each other and complement each other, which makes people want to stop. I think the reason why many people like the protagonist is because he is a very good person. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] Teacher, I will pester you forever. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Winter is coming, the government is in a turbulent situation, and the world is full of mourners. There will be a "hard winter" that will stir up the storm. He Lin came to this world, and returning home was out of reach. Everywhere you look you see people mourning and dying of hunger. He thought he might as well make a big gamble, risk everything he had, and jump into this situation without hesitation. Turn him upside down. The He Lin described by the author is like the bright moon and the clear breeze. He is gentle yet firm. He is also a child who just wants to go home, and a young man with great ambitions. His appearance is the embellishment of his soul, and his soul shines in the dark night. Hello, He Lin. Nice to meet you. I also wish you peace, joy and success in everything. I hope the author will not give up on the article, keep updating it, and persist in finishing it. (┌ω)┌✧Thank you. I wish the author great fortune, health and longevity. It's beautiful, I love watching it, and I want to watch it again!

The content is substantial, the characters are described very delicately, and the content is very logical. This is the second best-looking book I have found after "The Reincarnation of the Powerful Minister". It is about the corruption under the Mi Li Dynasty. Under the power are the blood and bones of the people, and money sucks the blood and flesh of the people. The building will collapse. It is really written, not just "power" but no "strategy". I really recommend it to readers of the book. Be sure not to give up reading DaDa. I will always follow DaDa's books. The writing is really good. I like He Lin so much! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

It really seems that the protagonist has a very grand world view. He does not shout that everyone is equal, but just like a Bodhisattva, he worries and weeps for the people. I really love this writing style. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Shy] [Shy] At first glance, the author is very educated.

It's so good, I read all the chapters in one go. I can see the author's progress! The character creation is three-dimensional and full. Lord Xiaohe is just, kind and yet smart. The other characters are also very distinct. The plot is tense and attractive to watch. Hope it will be updated every day! [Sending Hearts]

It's so cool, so cool, so cool. From the time when the male protagonist wants to die and wants to return to a happy modern life to being influenced by the little people in the dark society, he takes the initiative to join the game. His mind is online the whole time, and his thoughts are clear. It's so cool. It's a great Machiavellian story. It's not a mindless heartthrob. The more I read it, the more I feel like I'm falling in love with the male protagonist. I'm sorry, I want to take care of him. I regret it [Love] [Love]

Good book. There is no nonsense in this book. Although there is a lot of foreshadowing and eloquent narration in the front, the plot is gradually arranged to be reasonable. The author has made great progress. The characters are flesh and blood, and there is a bit of a knife, but it is okay. It is just a little missing. I want to see more, so please give it a try.

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It's so beautiful. I feel like while I'm reading, they seem to exist in a certain period of time. Whether it's the protagonist or the supporting role, everyone has a soul, and their ambitions, no matter how big or small, are still shining faintly under the wheels of troubled times.

It's so beautiful, the characters are distinct, Xiao He's courageous and decisive character really pokes me, and I love the redemption-oriented storyline. Especially the mutual pull between Xiao He and the prince (forgot his name), I felt so happy watching it.

Nice! Like it very much! The author depicts the image of He Lin in detail, as if the young man with green bamboos, fresh clothes and angry horses is right in front of him. It is a rare masterpiece with gorgeous diction and clear thinking. I hope the author can keep writing, and I'm looking forward to what happens next. [Sending Hearts]

I have written this book up to chapter 144, and I rarely write long reviews, so I hope you will read more. So far, I have written about the protagonist's mental journey, words and deeds, and the writing is very good. It makes people immersed in reading this novel. The career line is unconventional and smooth sailing, and the protagonist is not immortal. The four sentences of Hengqu are used very well in the book. The young man was very excited. I have read some novels with the same theme, but this one is rare in comparison. Chen Hensheng and You Zhu's feelings for the protagonist came naturally. It was not a superficial love at first sight. Their personalities were well developed. Some plots caught the readers' hearts, and their moods went up and down as the plot progressed. Up to Chapter 144, the plot is attractive enough, and the sentences quoted in the article are arranged well. It can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into writing this book. Above the court are layers of mud and dirt, and below the court are the rotten flesh and bones of the people. Young and energetic people appear out of the blue and are attractive. This is what Chinese people like in their bones. There are also some foreshadowings in the book, and I look forward to how the author will make things right. However, after more than a hundred chapters, there are no strong memory points. It took almost a day to read it. In retrospect, there are actually no profound events. The writing skills of the characters are acceptable, but the plot still needs polishing. At this point, please take your time with some superficial insights into this book.

Woohoo, this will definitely be a good book. It has a feeling that it doesn't belong to Tomato. The author is really good, and I like the character of the protagonist very much. The character descriptions of each character are really very distinct. The characters are described in just a few strokes, and the characters can be made three-dimensional through the plot. In my opinion, it is a rare treasure in the Tomato Girl blog. Then I want to ask, does allin mean you want them all? [Sending Hearts]

"Establish a mind for the heaven and earth, establish a destiny for the living people, carry forward the unique teachings of the past saints, and create peace for all generations." Although the fog ahead stretches thousands of miles, each of them is moving step by step towards their own future.

I highly recommend this book. It's very good-looking and different from the books I've seen on Tomato before. It makes me feel like I'm reading an official history (a bit exaggerated [laughing]), or a history of the growth of a famous official, with flesh and blood, affection and meaning. If the relationship between the characters is more complicated (not just a heartthrob attribute), I think it will be more than just a novel.

The author is very good at writing, the characters are very three-dimensional and real, and the plot arrangement is also very fascinating. I like it very much. The writing style is also very good and antique. I love it so much. Come on, this book is definitely a potential stock! ! ! ! !

After reading it for so long, I can see that the author is really writing about history, about power, about human nature, and about the sorrow of the times. He is not just writing about random ideas and stuffing in what he wants to write. I am an emotional person. I originally clicked on the title of the book because it was a light-hearted article, but the more I read it, the heavier my mood became. Fushun's death gave He Lin the motivation to live, and he has been out of control since then. Chen Hensheng, Shen Xiaolang, You Zhu, Xu Minchang, He Jinshui, He Yinshui, He Qingmo, Wei Yi, Wei Xiao, Lin Shuiyun, Lu Huanmou, Qi Yuanshen, Liu Bai, Zhao Fushun, Batur, Li Lingyun and many, many others I remember clearly, because they are not just a single name, but a very three-dimensional person portrayed by the author. I don't know what to say. Everyone in this book is complicated, and He Lin is also complicated, but his complexity is different from others. There are 500 years between them, a barrier of two eras. He Lin is indeed a heartthrob, but not only in love, but also in friendship and family. Among them, love is the most complicated. Chen Hensheng went from being frivolous at the beginning to becoming true love after getting along. He experienced life and death in the process. Just when I thought he had changed and became close friends with He Lin, reality hit me. It has always been a calculation since the first meeting, as if He Lin was the only one wishful thinking. After all, they are people from two eras. Even if their goals are similar, their views are different. It is impossible for Chen Hensheng to follow the idealism of the protagonist to complete his great cause. His path is filled by countless innocent or innocent lives. Maybe he has true feelings for the protagonist, but only for the protagonist. He has also changed. He knows the importance of life, but he will still be forced or take the initiative to kill people to complete his plan. I feel that the protagonist is really lonely, coming to a turbulent era alone. No one has seen his era, and no one can fully understand his ideals. Everyone praises his kindness and innocence, but there are always people who take advantage of his kindness and make him jump into the fire pit. People he puts his trust in will also fail him, but he has no time to be sad and painful. Bad things happen one after another. His moral sense is too high. Sometimes I am afraid that he will have a mental breakdown. If the author hadn't marked he, I would have been afraid that he would commit suicide immediately after everything he had done [crying]

It's so good. This is the best novel I've ever read on Tomato! Those who write negative reviews don't like to read it. Can you please go away and let you read it? But you have to believe in yourself. Anyway, the writing is so beautiful, it's not good enough\(//∇//)\! ! ! ! Five stars is not enough, I really want to give ten stars [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It looks good, the writing is good, it doesn't drag on, and the characters are well drawn. Don't ask me why I'm just commenting now. The reason is that I only saved four chapters and finished them when I was excited [punch out][punch out][punch out]. The author is so great, can't he post more chapters every day [grievance][grievance][cry][cry][cry]

Super invincible and beautiful! ! The setting is so novel. The red dot between He's eyebrows when he appears makes me feel the physical beauty of a young man in bright clothes and an angry horse. The theme is well chosen! The feelings of family and country are the background of the suffering of the people, and the author's writing style is also good [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Beautiful, super beautiful! ! ! After reading it in one go, I feel that Xiao He is a lost traveler who has strayed into this world. But as the time he stays here goes by, his connection with this world is gradually increasing, but he is still a little confused in his heart. If he really can't go back, he still hopes that he can truly accept this world one day in the future.

The word "jue", except for some places that don't make sense, is well written and the characters are flesh and blood. It is a good article and worth reading carefully. There are some things in it that really touched me. Everyone in the protagonist group in the book has no choice but to do it. Everyone has to do it. The protagonist, a modern idealist in the feudal era, is cannibalizing soberly and painfully. He tries hard to adapt to the cannibal society without being assimilated, but he is still forced to come to his hometown 500 years ago. I hope that if he can't go back in the end, he can find his hometown here, a tragic character.

I can't write anything good in Angry Me. The main character He Lin is a young man in bright clothes and angry horses. He is a person who can truly be said to be a father-in-law in troubled times. He is a person who believes that fate is greater than the sky. He has a brain and can guess the whole conspiracy without too many clues. Especially after Chapter 68, two pieces of salt paper are released. If you want to read a Machiavellian novel, you must read this book. Although it is still being serialized, the author's writing is very delicate and the characters have distinct personalities. I hope it will not be too cruel in the later period. Highly recommend! ! !

Looks good, looks good. . . 😋😋The characters are very rich. Everyone has flesh and blood, their own experiences, unspeakable sufferings, and different ideals. Basically, there is no absolute "bad". Some people are forced to bend for power, some abandon their true intentions for the family business, and some dragon slayers eventually become evil dragons. If we have different positions and different pursuits, we have to go to war with each other. And the main character is really well portrayed. . . Even the soaring wings of modern people's thoughts are still shackles, but in this feudal wave, Mr. Xiaohe still lived a path worthy of himself. And the image is complex and not a single label. Confident, passionate, and occasionally childish. Prudence, shrewdness, compassion, self-blame... Many contradictory words constitute him, just like a living person who will appear in your life. Finally, there are other characters in the book, even small supporting characters, who have their own stories and difficulties. People like Qiu Jiuqian, Shen Zheng, Xu Minchang, and Yu Mian are as if they really existed in history, and their images are unforgettable to everyone😭 The author's emotional lines are also very well written. . Delicate and gentle, there is a sense of peace of mind flowing from the water. (Of course, everyone's emotional expression is different) Mr. Xiao He should also be loved and devoted by everyone, the common people. (Thinking of the love between fish and water...😭) All in all, this book is perfect and very nice to read. It would be against the laws of nature to not be popular. .

It's really good to read, but it's a little too little. Ahhhhh, it's really well written.

Really nice. . . Xiaohe's character design becomes more and more interesting as it gets better. The author's writing skills, shaping, emotional lines, and main plot are all up to par. ^_ ̫ _ ̥`, I hope the teacher can keep writing, I will always support him: D

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