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It's not bad, there are more than 300 chapters, it's a good way to kill time, it's positioned as a food bar, the protagonist always helps his original friend Z unconditionally, and many plots are about helping friends to advance. Xiaodu Bar mainly feels that those people are useless.

Not bad, not bad, there is a lot of foreshadowing, the world is quite big, the training system is complete, there are many paths, and the protagonist is currently in his own league. The writing is strong and good at inserting narration to supplement the plot and world view setting. Not many people read it because the writing pace is slow.

The story is quite exciting, but some irrelevant supporting characters should be written less. For example, there is no need to write about the Zhao family. Joining the government in more than a hundred chapters and interacting with the government too much! It's boring, I'm trying to persuade you to quit!

Very well written. The author will update soon. . . 5 Star review sent. . . The most annoying thing now is the kind of plot where you provoke a very strong enemy from the very beginning and then continue to fight back. . The author writes step by step, neither too hastily nor too slowly. . Pretty good

The style is closer to the ancient mortal flow, not a cool novel, "pressing the realm" and "many opportunities have nothing to do with the protagonist" The protagonist is a bit of a dispensable character, but he behaves in a methodical manner and knows how to advance and retreat. Risky things in the early stages are avoided but there are some gains. The supporting characters are well described and have quite a personality. What kept me reading was that the author was very good at writing the main plot and was very good at threading the thread. If many plots were placed in other people's novels, they would either become background panels or provide opportunities for the protagonists, but in this novel they can only be used as the driving force of the plot... In the end, they work in an unexpected way (or they don't work at all). Overall, it's a good book if you can bear to read it. If you want to read it and enjoy it, 2 stars would be too much.

I am very optimistic about the unforced hatred and strange grudges. It is much better than many fantasy novels. It is affirmed by experienced readers.

The advantage of this book is that many of the supporting characters are more delicately portrayed, but the Tomato platform is suitable for fast-paced and refreshing articles. Too many supporting characters are described, which makes the pace too slow and a bit frustrating in the early stage, so it is not suitable for publishing on Tomato, but for me, this book can be rated above 9.5

It's very to my liking. He is obviously an experienced author. Whether it is plot design, personal shaping, or the growth of the protagonist, there are traces to follow. It is good that the protagonist does not have to be involved in events that involve a huge contrast in power. I think it is very reasonable. Thoughtful and meaningful

Come on, the author, the requirements are not high, the logic is online, and the plot is not too strong. It is too difficult to find a good book on Tomato. There are so many words. I give you five stars. I haven't finished Chapter 50 yet. A water demon with intelligence and speech appears in the village. The protagonist has just started practicing martial arts, and the combat power system has collapsed. I'll give it 2 stars.

I have read three hundred chapters. The author's writing is good, the increase in combat power is gradual, and there are constant foreshadowings, but there are few fights and intrigues between characters. The description of the fight is also relatively immature, but the writing style is refreshing and the viewing experience is not tired. A masterpiece worth reading

I read more than a hundred chapters in one go, and when the author asked for comments at the end of a chapter, I would like to say a few words first. Very good Gaowu, I don't know if there will be any immortality in the future. The author's writing style is very solid, the overall rhythm is quite stable, and the protagonist is steady and steady. I personally like this style very much. I feel that the current rating of 7.5 For this book is a bit low. It should be at least an 8.5, And there is hope for a 9. Come on, author!

It looks good. The protagonist has been upgrading step by step. Although the surrounding environment is very messy, it will not affect the protagonist. It's not that I don't like the protagonist who always participates in big events. I just like the protagonist's farming feeling of leisurely upgrading and not being interrupted by external emergencies. He will not encounter too many enemies.

A very special book, I am willing to give it 10 stars! The writing style is sophisticated, the logic is rigorous, and the transitions are natural. Quote from the book: "Can you see that these red eaves and green tiles are independent of the wilderness?" Enjoy it together.

This novel is not bad, and interesting. It is much more interesting than Xiaobai's invincible novel. Please update it soon.

I've read more than 200 chapters, and overall I think it's a mixed bag of good and bad. The main plot is good, the setting is novel, and the protagonist has a rich personality. But there are also shortcomings: there are many branch lines, and a lot of content that has no great effect is written (that is, the word count is low). I hope things will change in the future, and I'm also looking forward to the content of Heavenly Realm.

Slow, practical and immersive! The advantages and disadvantages are all mentioned! To elaborate, it doesn't have the feeling of rebellion in the House of Commons. It really looks like an ordinary person. It is a normal novel! If you like fast food and can't calm down, you will definitely not be able to read this book! Remind you, don't be too fast, don't be too slow, it's that feeling of finishing something without even realizing it, read this book! Oh, and another very important thing is that the protagonist grows up and gains wisdom every time he suffers. It is a very ordinary and normal novel that can be read!

The title of this book is a bit interesting. I clicked on it when I saw the title of the book. Youzhu The description is very good, but when I saw the latest chapter, the main character's faceplate is a pure faceplate, and his talent is really high. The secret technique of stone and mud transforms organic and inorganic. There is no shortage of raw materials. The master was accidentally captured with one move. It is really uncomfortable. Let's see how it is written below. I don't know why, but the rating is a bit low, and the number of people urging updates is also small. There are only 73, maybe it was just updated, and I just happened to see the latest chapter.

The writing is smooth, and the ups and downs of the plot are not a standard refreshing novel. It is a little refreshing in the ordinary. It's just that the author may have a slightly poor grasp of the progress of switching plots! A lot of it is talking nonsense. In other words, we should bury the trap again, but the rhythm does have problems that need to be dealt with. The author can make some adjustments in the future.

As mentioned in the author's introduction, this book is a relatively slow-burning type. The protagonist will not become invincible in one step. The character descriptions in the book are relatively clear, and the daily life storyline of each character is also well written. I read a paragraph where the protagonist had to eat two girls, which made some readers unhappy. I personally feel that I would be like this if I put myself in someone else's shoes and couldn't resist. Temptation, combined with the current environment, it seems natural to do such a behavior. I don't know how you feel, and as someone who has read novels for many years, this book is quite good, and this seems to be the author's first work, so I think everyone should give more encouragement and tolerance. I hope this book will become more and more exciting!

This book is indeed fine chaff, nothing to say. It's the kind of movie where I would say "This plot is well written" while watching it. In fact, it is especially obvious in the early stage. I feel that the author has really professional writing skills. The characters are interesting and the plot is well constructed. It is unfolding the world view and it unfolds very naturally. It is not like feeding you some setting book and asking you to read and memorize it. Now it's tied. My evaluation still hasn't changed, the rhythm didn't collapse in the later stages, it's still exciting. The author's writing ability is actually at a very good level even in the field of traditional writing. (Although Internet articles are indeed a market that pays great attention to "memes", the writing style is almost unimportant. As long as your memes are interesting, not poisonous, and updated frequently, it will almost meet all the requirements of Huo at the work level, but because of this, I feel that the author's writing is really fine grain! Rare!)

The rhythm of the plot is not very fast at the beginning, but the writing style feels okay. The protagonist's own strength is steadily advancing, and his power is also building up little by little. Then the social environment is also pointed out from the depiction of the village and the aristocratic family in the current relatively decadent and dark world. Overall, I think it is very good. The protagonist's current flower crocodiles and blood locusts were both obtained by chance. I personally feel that there are too many coincidences. Maybe they can be given to the protagonist in another way? Although luck is also part of strength. The above is purely my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it. There need to be more slow-paced novels, otherwise you won't be able to read enough. I update ten times a day and I like you, young man.

The first thirty chapters were a bit slow, but it started to get better around chapter sixty. Now it is getting better, and the appeal of the work has increased. I hope the author can improve himself, but his writing style still needs to be improved. This five-star book review is dedicated to encourage the author! The author has his own rhythm, and it's quite comfortable to watch, but the volume is still a bit small. After reading it, I feel that it's not as good as it seems. I'm going to follow up with more updates! ! !

I didn't see the rating at first. Why is it so low? It's okay. Just like those ancient martial arts novels, the people in it are not very smart.

Personally, I think it's pretty good, with a slow pace. I don't like cheating and upgrading. A slow-paced book like Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is more suitable for me. There aren't any big bad points in the book. I personally think it's pretty good. Apart from plug-ins and one or two adventures, the protagonist basically follows a step-by-step approach and grows up slowly. There is no deviant approach. This book is more bland and the logic is basically self-consistent. Some scenes have a lot of foreshadowing, and many supporting characters or scenes are written. Many times it is for the purpose of foreshadowing or explaining the background. After reading the whole book, you can clearly understand the general situation of the entire country.

The level of this book must be five stars. The logic is basically reasonable. Golden Finger is not particularly powerful, but it can recover from injuries as quickly as possible. The overall pace is neither urgent nor slow, and it looks like a very comfortable book.

The writing is quite good, the plot is smooth, and there is nothing poisonous about it. It's the usual routine of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, but the pretense is not serious and it doesn't look embarrassing. High quality grain After watching it for a long time, it seems a bit bland, and the routine of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is becoming more and more obvious. A few years ago, it was still popular to raise a daughter, but I am not interested in this aspect. However, the author's writing is also very good, and it is not a poisonous point. It's just that these plots are very cliched and I don't like them either (personal preference) Then, changing the small map to the large map is a bit fragmented and difficult to write. Pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger is still too routine. The chapter about changing the map is less interesting to read than before. The protagonist's ability is also manifested in front of others, similar to belief in incense and so on. Do good deeds, accumulate merit, and travel around to gain progress. Use this to develop some side stories and advance the plot. The setting is okay, but I don't like it (personally) After reading it for a long time, I felt a little bored because of the clichés and some of the settings I didn't like.

I have read more than 800 chapters, and to be honest the quality is very good. The advantage is that there is a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, which makes it attractive to keep watching. The switching of perspectives is very smooth, and each character is basically explained. The setting poem of the character looks very awesome, and it is a cool story that beats the general routine. The shortcomings are that the plot progresses a little slowly, the protagonist's strength improves too quickly, and it takes a few years of practice to dwarf others' thousands of years of cultivation. If the strength is not enough, it can only be improved by a few days of enlightenment. Unifying the country depends on brainwashing people, and the combat power slightly collapses in the later stage. It has both advantages and disadvantages. If you like anti-routine and anti-joyful writing, you can try it.

It seems that I have finished reading the first big chapter, so I will briefly talk about it. 1. The author has good writing skills. Although he is not amazing, he is still above the standard. 2. So far, there are no logical flaws, and the worldview remains consistent, far ahead of its peers. 3. I particularly appreciate the author's ability to bury and wrap up threads. The blending of branch plots and main plots is very natural, and it feels good to vaguely reveal the true face of the whole world.

One hundred chapters and a price The writing is very good, the pace is well controlled, the protagonist is not given too much trouble, and the world view is unfolded step by step. In Tomato, where the protagonist is often a demon cultivator, it is indeed not easy to have a normal person as the protagonist. Overall, it's a good book. I can only say that whether it's good or not has little to do with the rating on the Tomato Book... [Awkward laugh] I'll catch up to 617 in one go and then comment on the price. The author's writing skills are very stable, and there are no surprises in the setting of the plot. If I have to say a shortcoming, it is that the plot itself is relatively bland, sometimes it needs to be watered down, and it becomes a bit boring after reading for a long time. Overall, it's not a masterpiece, but it's still a good book.

Personally, I like slow-paced books, but I don't like fast-paced formulas. It's too serious and boring. I'd like to recommend another slow-paced book to everyone. The system assigns me that if I live a long life, I will eventually be invincible. The name is terrible, but I have an IQ and the pace is also very slow. I also hope that book friends can recommend it to me. Thank you very much.