The Boyfriend I Picked up Is Fu Jiang [Chuoshu]

Six hundred and sixty-six, watching the little girl turn into a little man with a knife in her hand, and then take root and sprout into a little girl, it is refreshing and reassuring to watch. Repairing my front teeth, da da da da da.，，，，，，，，，，， Oh my God, it's been eight thousand years. I finally came across a book that made me crazy again hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so... Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie... TND completely hit my XP hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! ! ! I can't help but fall in love hahahahahahaha! ! ! ! ! ! The people danced wildly with joy. . . . Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie Jie. . . . ,,,. . The author begs for updates🙏🙏Please🙏🙏🙏🙏If you don't die, you will die for updates🙏🙏🙏If you accidentally destroy the saved manuscript, it will be very bad😨😨If you accidentally update 9999 chapters, it will be a lot of life🤗🤗Please update. . . . [Let's try something more normal👀: Both kids are so cute, the setting is so sweet, the emotional line and the plot direction are all good. At this time, some people will praise the author, why are you so good at writing bullshit? It's so sweet, especially the part where Mianmian takes the initiative, Yun Shu, you kid feels so good, it's simply the ultimate bullshit! Kua Kua [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] The two of them have a good look, and they are good at confronting Mr. And Mrs. Lu. Mianmian Baby has a strong human-machine feel, but is quite calm and rational, wandering in the gray area between black and white. I really like this setting! ! If others touch your own interests and bottom line, it is absolutely not allowed. It is certain that flaws will be repaid, ah ah ah! ! Mianmian Zaizai Mama loves you so much! ! ☁️I feel like a male ghost. I can't kill him, I can't get rid of him, but he is still extremely shameless. It's really fun to watch the two of them act and guess each other! ! I like this kind of people with both strong IQs online. By the way, why are you always the kind of scholar who randomly searches for books? When I was in a book shortage, I would always vomit in the middle of the meal after searching carefully, and I was suspected of being abused😳]

Very nice article Tomie's settings are also particularly thoughtful When I was reading the Ersensei manga, I was thinking about what would happen if Tomie really fell in love with someone. The teacher writes really well Very novel subject matter and very interesting plot. I really like it. Cloud is like a bad kitten, and Mian is like a stable little sheep (personal feeling) All in all, it's very beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Oh my god, my cp kissed me on 2025.2.12 Leave a souvenir Really beautiful Yun Shu's lust is Chi Mian!

What can I say about this book? It is the best one I have read so far that combines Tomie from Junji Ito's works with the Ten Deadly Sins. It is also the coldest protagonist I have encountered so far, but it is not offensive. It can be said that the author has brought the protagonist to life, and there is an indescribable sense of perfection from every angle the protagonist attacks. This is a novel that I fell in love with after reading one chapter, and the relationship between Mianmian and Mouyun is really amazing! Full of ambiguity But both of them are also very sober I can really understand that two smart monsters and madmen are testing and fighting each other. I'm really in love. I'm looking forward to seeing what a certain cloud will do after she fully possesses the emotion called 'love'. The same goes for Mianmian, because Mianmian deserves to be loved, and his life should not be like that. I can even understand it as pseudo-'salvation'

Nice! ! ! One of the protagonists in the book, Fu Jiang, has a very interesting personality, and the other one (coldness + emotional cognitive impairment + mysophobia). These settings are not just a label but also pave the way for the protagonist's childhood experience. People are a bit idle but not weak, and they will take revenge if they have any grudges. The plot is both logical and humorous. Great support from the author, I like it.

It is a very tense article. At first, I felt awkward and uncomfortable using such a dramatic adjective as Tomie for the protagonist, but after reading two articles, I will deeply understand the violent beauty of this setting. The hearty death makes people's blood surge. There is no entanglement, no distinction between you and me. There are rich feelings, only evil and fighting. In short, it is exciting!

It's beautiful, I love watching it, too many updates! ! ! To be honest, I haven't seen much of Tomie's setting, but I still know a bit about Tomie! I think this book is very novel. Of course, it just treats Yun as an independent individual with Fujiang's setting, based on Fujiang's creation! But it really poked me! I really like the setting of Mian. I feel like he is an INTP and is just lazy, not stupid! If you offend him, you will be punished! I feel so good watching it! Especially their rivalry! ! What a feeling! ! (Forgive me for writing a long review for the first time) Generally speaking, I like the double strength, control, and double crazy criticism without thinking! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's really super good-looking, and I really like the character of the protagonist. This is one of the best novels I've ever read. The writing is so good. I really admire the author's imagination. The character of the protagonist really poked me. The last book that made me wait for the update every night was the author's last book. When I saw a new book, I couldn't wait to catch up. The previous one was also super good-looking. Although this one has only been updated with more than 20 chapters, there is a feeling that I can't wait to finish it in one go. I really admire the author's writing style. It attracts me every time. I look forward to the big update every day. As soon as I see the big update, I immediately follow it because the follow-up is very attractive to me. Every time I read the follow-up, I can admire it. You can imagine how good this book is. I'm looking forward to the subsequent development of the story. Come on, I think this book will definitely be a hit. I will add more reviews when this book is finished. Finally, I wish you a better self in the new year [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The characters are very original. I don't have much knowledge, this is the first time I read about Fujiang! Once you see it, you can't stop. Chi Mian's various descriptions are very detailed. I love this kind of person so much! Particularly attractive. As for the plot, it starts with the seven deadly sins. It expresses the dark side of human nature in a very realistic and natural way, and connects the upper and lower parts very well (well, ignore the absurdity itself). The constantly mentioned "chaotic world" has a strong visual contrast with the real prosperity described in the table. Therefore, the background itself is very good at downplaying the falsehood, and it makes it fascinating to read. Emotional line. It was written in the previous article that monsters don't understand love, so when the emotions are moved later (almost), every move of the protagonist makes love real, and on the other hand, it makes love even greater! (Ahem, abstract.) Personally, I think there should be some foreshadowing, but I've only read chapter seventy so far. I'll write about it after I finish it! Suddenly I felt a sense of powerlessness that I could only make weak comments but could not make a big fuss. (Actually, I want to say something but don't know what to say, and what to say but don't know what follows)

I really like this setting. I watched Yunshu, a Leziren who didn't care about anything at first, gradually care about Chi Mian and slowly fall in love with him (from the beginning, he just wanted to have fun when he was not affected by his constitution, but later his emotions would be affected by him, and he would duplicity and do some childish behaviors to attract the other person's attention. According to the current progress bar). The feeling of this book is also very touching to me. It is the kind of person who is emotionally stable and does not panic when things change. He dares to retaliate in kind without being overly emotional and uses others as his own sharp edge to achieve his own goals. Very handsome character, I love it. Regarding the weekly cycle of this book, the author has a detailed introduction in the middle, which is very easy to understand. When I saw this, I felt like I was suddenly enlightened. Regarding Fu Jiang's constitution, the author also has interspersed introductions in the article. Overall it's quite logical. So far, the book has been updated to chapter thirty-three, and I am looking forward to the subsequent progress. Great work, update [adoration][adoration][adoration] is not enough to watch [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

Writing ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Character ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Plot ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Logic⭐️⭐️⭐️ Novelty⭐️⭐️⭐️ Excellent: The writing style is excellent, there are almost no language errors, and the description is not awkward. It is very comfortable. There are almost no mistakes in subject, predicate and object, and the Chinese language foundation is very good. Except that sometimes "land's gain" still cannot be used correctly, there is basically no problem. The characters of the two protagonists also match well, and I was quite impressed after watching it. There is no chance that they will be confused with other secretaries. The plot is fairly coherent and the pace is okay. Disadvantages: 1. The logic is not strict. Some plots appear to promote the development of the plot, and the logic supporting them is not reasonable. For example, in the lust chapter, Chi encountered Yun Shu in the basement. Since Yun was restricted and could not affect Chi, he could completely ignore him and wait for Yun to come back, instead of going against the character and acting stiffly. And places like Affective Disorder. 2. The plot lacks tension. For example, in the Wenqing chapter, Yun gave Chi two choices: cut his hair or kill someone. I thought this would be a very tense plot. Cutting the hair would reveal the appearance, making it basically impossible to remain a transparent person. Killing a person with my own hands, breaking through my own bottom line (maybe not yet reached the bottom line), it was time to show my face, but it created such a conflict point of psychological game trade-offs. I thought there would be a very tense inner monologue, but it ended in a dull way. There are no refreshing and unexpected plots in the subsequent plot. End: A well-written, logical, and philosophical work. Ignoring some weird logic, the look and feel is still very good.

Beautiful and inspiring! Each chapter is very long and enjoyable! The descriptions of each character are very vivid [Adore] I like Mian Bao, and I also like Yunshu [Sending Hearts] They are a real match, I feel that Yunshu needs such a person to appear [Explore] I would like to give it a good review, I want more people to read this book, it is really good to read [Adore] (Actually, I am a little worried, will the author enter a dark room if he writes so boldly?) Hehe, when this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan [Cool]

I have read a novel about Fu Jiang on a certain river before. After reading it, I have been unable to find a similar novel. Now I finally found it! ! Invincible is good-looking, the plot is smooth and not draggy, and the very good writing makes my brain spin👍🏻Invincible is refreshing but a bit short. I really look forward to Yun Shu seeing Mianmian's face. Support the male ghost 1 to rule the world. Again, support the male ghost 1 to rule the world! ! ! ! Oh my god, I finally saw my face! ! ! I was so excited that I scratched my butt💪🏻💪🏻

Maya, she is really beautiful! I like the character of the protagonist very much. I felt like my brain was itch after reading the whole story (I think I'm going to have a brain). Mianmian, you are a miserable, smart, cute, beautiful cat who is afraid of trouble and loves to climb trees, Little Cake! The system is silly and cute! It's so bad and mean, so cute! "I'm a sad person and don't like trouble, but that doesn't mean that I have no emotions, and it doesn't mean that I'm a soft persimmon that everyone can kick." "If I were a simple and kind-hearted good boy, then I wouldn't be alive now." "I'm not a good person, but I'm not a pure evil person either." "I will retaliate, but I didn't intend to kill him. The stairs are not high, the ground is smooth... I think I have been very merciful."

Super pretty! Super recommended! Originally, I wanted to read the table of contents when there were only about twenty chapters, but I accidentally clicked in and read it! The characters are distinct, the plot is not cliche at all, the protagonist has a very personal personality, and the writing is also very good! So far I haven't seen any surprises! Really highly recommended!

Immortal product, the combination of the Seven Deadly Sins and Fu Jiang's physique is particularly novel. Shu Zai is a happy person, and he never knows whether the Shu Zai who appears at this moment is the same as just now. Mianmian was indifferent and mournful. When she was a child, Mianmian made people feel distressed. Mianmian and Trouble Benchansuzai, who were afraid of trouble, went from not accepting anyone's touch at the beginning to now becoming accustomed to each other's presence. The two people developed indescribable feelings in the pull. Two people who don't understand feelings slowly fall into each other without knowing it. It's really weird. At the same time, there is also an impressive supporting role - Zhong Ming. For him, I can only say that he is an extremely righteous person. Even if he knows about reincarnation and knows that the original intention is a scam, he still insists on the justice in his heart. There is also a system that is so stupid that it is afraid that your own cabbage will be eaten. It is super cute. Finally, I would like to express my deepest gratitude to the author. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] It's you who brought such vivid Shu Zai and Mian Mian to reality.

Very nice! The protagonist's personality is relatively light at first, but his emotions become more and more vivid later on. It can be said that he is slowly adapting to the new world. The plot written by the author is also relatively natural. I can see a little bit of the feeling of the fishing protagonist. The whole plot is also very interesting and smooth. I'm super looking forward to the next chapter! ! ! Write quickly 😭 Let's give it a low score. The score is too high. Got targeted several times. We can only give a low score because of the teacher's book. If you give a 1⭐️, you will be said to be a malicious low score, so a 2⭐️ is just right. Come on, teacher, your book is really beautiful, but in order to let more people see it, you still need to lower the score. Remember to mention it to the readers in the article. Teacher, your normal essay score must be 9.8. But it will require you to cut out more details. 😭

The subject matter of this book is really the first one I've seen on Tomato. It's really good-looking. The only drawback is the writing style, which is a little immature, but it's still great! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Happy ending, spread the flowers, thank you for your hard work, boss It was not easy along the way, and I was worried that the book would be sanctioned, but at least I got through it and ended it smoothly ~ Although some of the supporting characters were not very comfortable to watch, the setting of the young couple was so fun, and nothing else mattered, 9999🎉

，～～～～ Author, I advise you to update 100,000 chapters a day, it's not enough to read. But you should also pay attention to your body. When you rest, don't be idle at the same time [Send Heart]

1. The author's writing style is very good and worth learning from. Especially the description of the characters' moods and changes in the environment is simply brilliant! 2. I have read a lot of Tomie-type articles. This article shows Tomie's bad nature very well. This is the bad and arrogant Tomie in my mind. 3. This is the first time I have encountered this kind of protagonist. He is cool but not boring. He is just right, cold and indifferent but reasonable. 4. The emotional tug-of-war between Chi Mian and Yun Shu is very well written, with an undercurrent. What Yun Shu did was consistent with his character, and Chi Mian did the same. The progress of the relationship is reasonable and not brainless. 5. I look forward to the author's improvement of Zhong Ming's character, and I am very curious about how the author writes it! [Learned]

Super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I really think this book is really going to be super popular! ! ! ! ! The plot is really attractive to me, very exciting, and the plot is neat and orderly. Sometimes there are some foreshadowings, but he will tell you what the foreshadowing is at the end. It is really good. This book is the best book I have ever read in Tomato. I sincerely recommend this book. It is super good-looking. If it is not good-looking, it means there is something wrong with the system here. Anyway, I think this book is super good-looking, invincible, world-beating, and invincible. Good luck to the author! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens, so I'll give you five stars and a long review to follow. A walking emotional catalytic body, Tomie Kawakami's 1x constitution is unable to perceive any emotions normally, and he is free from the whole world. If you say this, you will think that this book is extremely interesting. Everyone loves Tomie, but Tomie will not fall in love with anyone. The male protagonist Yiyunshu has the same physique. His feelings towards us Mianmian slowly change from interest to possession, but later it will turn into love. The early stage of love is possession. When each Yunshu started to compete for Mianmian, the sexual tension was boiling over (because Yunshu had Fu Jiang's physique, so each Yunshu would think that they were genuine and the others were fakes). I was literally knocked to death. The author's depiction of details is not jerky at all, especially the latest chapter's description of Mianmian's family background, which has a strong sense of immersion. It makes the reader really in that scene. I was directly brought into the past when my grandfather beat my grandmother. I saw it with my own eyes. The next day I would also tell my grandma if you don't want to leave, she also told me that she can't leave and I am here. The author's description of this scene is like a knife from many years ago, hitting my heart. It is very vivid and vivid. It gives people the feeling that I can't think of anything else if I sympathize for the first time. This is how the depiction of details is vivid and immersive. This makes everyone in the author's works very real. The interaction between the two male protagonists made me feel the concrete possessiveness. The protagonist of the Seven Deadly Sins incident made me feel the reality of human nature. This is the charm of this book. There is no inexplicable female competition and male competition (because Fujiang's physique is like this, this cannot be competed), there is no system that pops up inexplicably, the supporting characters all have their own shining points, the protagonist is vivid and full of sexual tension, and the author's writing is not green. This is a double male protagonist that is difficult to encounter at this time. This book is very worth reading.

Hey, my writing skills are very good, and the real characters are also very fresh to me. I should say that this is the first time I have seen this kind of subject matter. It looks good. Mianmian's character really seems to have been quite stable. There is always a sense of calmness like a living person slightly dead. Of course, this indifferent character is also formed due to the misery of his childhood and not being favored. On the one hand, he feels that his character has a serious and funny character. On the other hand, he feels very sorry for what he has experienced. He can't feel it. Emotions, I don't understand those heartbreaking emotions. Fortunately, I met the extreme preference of Yun Shu, a monster who is obviously burdened with the seven deadly sins. Mianmian is a person who avoids all emotions and is afraid of trouble, but he was moved by Yun Shu's countless shameless and partial. What impressed me the most was the chapter about lust. I was so moved by Yun Shu's love that I cried. Yun Shu's love is really good. A person who is so afraid of pain has no hesitation in the sea of ​​fire, and he splits crazily and forms a human cocoon to protect his lover. Yun Shu has a rich constitution and seven kinds of human evil. This is how a person who is called a monster by others also learns to love. Once a monster has love, it is eternal. He said that he cannot He doesn't care if Mianmian loves him or not, as long as he is by his side. He doesn't need Mianmian to have too many emotions because Mianmian will feel sorry for everyone who dies. He really can't be too involved in the drama. All the Yunshu are the same person, but they really feel sorry for her. Mianmian said that he is not a monster but the leading actor of this world. The two-way redemption of the illness is really super interesting. The chapter about greed left a deep impression on me. Qian is a character that makes people love and hate him at the same time. He once had a life of being bullied. As he said, no one can save him, he can only save himself. Everyone only sees his greedy desire. Everyone puts their love on themselves, but no one cares about his past. At the moment of death, she said that he did not regret what he did because no one could save him. In the end, it was his former best friend and later rival Jiang Yang who came to see him off at the grave. If it hadn't been for these things, maybe the two of them would have really come together. It was an honor to see the if line that belonged to the two of them. This time, Qi'an was saved. All in all, it's really good-looking. Every character is flesh and blood, whether it's the villain, the protagonists, the cute little system, or our messenger Zhong Ming. Everyone is full of color. I don't think Yun Shu is bad, he just magnifies the evil of human nature. He is actually the most chic and real person alive. Five-star praise! ! ! He is the person described in the book, but he is not just the person described in the book. He seems to be more like a living being with self-awareness, rather than a cold and silent text. He is a real being, not a program written by someone without any sense of self. "Should I choose eternal life or a hundred years?" "I choose Yunshu." ——My lover does not need to be a good person in a universal sense, it is enough for him to be a good person to me. ——You are my original sin and my most willing lover. ——We are both sick, so we are made for each other. This world is inherently turbid, and sin and love sing together. I am guilty, but my love, I love you forever. Chi Mian: When you have no ability to protect yourself, cold-bloodedness is the best way for the weak to survive. I understand your way of survival, so I don't pity any of you. As if through a layer of mist, I could vaguely experience emotions that I had never been able to experience before. Yun said: "You can always rely on me and give me whatever orders you want." "And I will fulfill all your requests." "I said I would help you. So, use me to achieve your ultimate goal. This is what I give you. You can use me as a bargaining chip at will." "Monster's love is the purest and most eternal." "I don't need you to repay me with anything, and I don't need you to contribute anything. As long as you stand within my reach, as long as you stay by my side, that's enough." "No trouble, you just need to bring yourself, I will take care of the rest." I'm here, and there won't be anyone around you who might hurt you. "I won't let you die. No one can let you die when you don't want to." "I'm convinced that I'm real about myself, and as long as you're real about it, there's nothing that's unacceptable." "I am still me, and I know that everything I do is what I want to do, but the final outcome of things will be the same. But so what, at least all the choices I make are based on my own wishes." "Don't pity us, don't feel sad..." "Being able to die for you is our unique romance..." It doesn't matter, after I die, there will still be countless me who love you. As long as I know that you are not unintentional towards me, then I will be willing to devote my life to you forever. Doing something that goes against his nature to save the person he likes is never a criticism of him, but an appreciation for him. "Humans may be obsessed with taking, but monsters will not. I may long for your love, but this longing has nothing to do with you, only with me."

First of all, it looks good! Nice! Nice! (Say important things three times) (* ⁰̷̴͈꒨⁰̷̴͈)=͟͟͞͞➳❤ Secondly, this setting is very new and interesting to me. I like it very much (*￣3￣)╭♡ And then there are so few chapters (/_＼) I was getting better at it, swish - scroll down and there is a button, do you think it's uncomfortable or not? Is it uncomfortable or not? Woo woo woo (っ╥╯╰╥c) Finally, falling in love with serialized writing is my destiny! ! ! (✘_✘) I tied several books at the same time, and I really want to be broken (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) I hate serialized books, and blackening them directly turns them into clear stories. Why? Why? Why? Why can someone be favored by a finished novel, but I can't love it? I obviously like you so much about this book? Why don't you finish it? O(´^｀)o (づ￣ ³￣)づ Come on, please don't let me cheat! ! ! I also have a sense of absurdity. When I tied this book, it was still a bit cold, and I remember the ratings were not as high as they are now. Then it felt like the book became popular in the blink of an eye. But it's good to be on fire, which proves that this book is really good! ! ! Hahaha, then I can be considered an old fan?

The writing is very good and the plot is also very good. It is a novel plot that I have never seen before. At least so far, I don't know how the plot will develop or what the ending will be between the two of them. Is it he? Or be?

Fine chaff, fine chaff, super good-looking, super good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, very imaginative, some places seem to be he, but they also contain be elements. People who watch it have complex feelings, but it is really good-looking, from all directions, southeast, northeast, Southwest, northwest, up and down, left and right, they all look good. I particularly like it. It magnifies a certain aspect of human nature. In short, the subject matter is also very novel, and I don't know when a sad point will come. The key is that this sad point is not really sad, but it still looks good. Uncomfortable, a feeling that is unspeakable. In short, in the original words: the listener is sad and the listener sheds tears. If you don't understand the system at first, why don't you distinguish each cloud statement? After you understand it later, you can only control yourself not to distinguish, so This advice is not only for Chi Mian, but also for readers. If you deliberately distinguish it, you will be sad. If you don't distinguish it, it will be a sweet book (except for Chi Mian's childhood). It is good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking, super invincible, and must-read. You have to read it, you must read it. For most people, I think it would be a real pity not to read it. Author I love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you Love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you Love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you love you You love you love you love you love you love you ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ (I want to emphasize that I am not a pervert, but the author you wrote is so beautiful, I can't help it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️)

OMG! ! ! How could there be such a touching book! ! A kind of mournful indifference and Fu Jiang's physique of extreme pleasure. Such a strong possessiveness will kill you! () It's a very good book. I want to laugh when I think of Yun Shu being so jealous of himself. Brother He Gan was also slapped in the face ^_^ If nothing else, it's this rating that shows the strength. Of course, of course, the writing is super beautiful, so emm... Indescribably amazing. Looking forward to the next round! Our baby Chi Mian is also very distressed :( As for the characters, I really look forward to them becoming more and more three-dimensional! In short, it's not a loss to invest in shares, teachers! ! ! ! ! It's really touching! ! ! It's really not enough! ! ! !

This book is really good. I was really happy reading it from beginning to end. But at the same time, I was a little regretful that I couldn't read the rest of the story between Mianmian and Yun Shu. I wish the young couple to stay together forever, three boxes a day! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The emotional line of this book is very well written. I really like this ambiguous pull. It's very touching! ! [Send heart] The shortcoming is that there are too many repetitive expressions and language descriptions, such as "why", "damn" and some descriptions in the eyes. The author probably wants to highlight their madness, but it is really boring after watching too much [laughs] Overall, it is very good. I give it 5 stars [love] In fact, the emotional line I mentioned is very well written. . It just refers to the pull between them when they were confronting each other. Maybe I didn't look carefully. ? I always feel that their relationship line makes me feel confused. I don't know how to describe it [crazy] and then repeat the description of this problem. It really affects the perception. I can memorize it myself. "The eyes are obscure", "the eyes are ghostly", "the head is on the shoulder", "kissing soothingly"... The process of their flirting is also the same. First Yun says a sentence first, then Chi sends an ellipsis, and then the system screams and goes crazy. I feel that the only part that is well written is the part about the villa and the early stage. When I read more than 80 chapters, I even thought about abandoning the book [laughs] This is also a big shortcoming of the author. The last one is the Seven Deadly Sins, which is similar to a copy, but I feel that the first few people are very stupid and not very exciting. The final greed is slightly better. I hope to see the author's progress next time [Love]

Holy shit, this book is so beautiful. I originally just wanted to read it as a mindless little redemption story. After all, I only read the first half of the introduction, and then when I clicked on it, I went,,, the author's writing style is really good. I feel that he can express everything the author wants to express [Like] [Like] [Like] It's also a short chapter, otherwise it would scare me to death just reading it [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] Also, Master Master is faster and faster [Adoration]