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I Want to Read a Star Dome Railway Fanfic! ! ! !
Written with thought
I Have Recently Become Obsessed with Star Iron, What Can You Guys Do?
I would like to read a book similar to "Star Orbit: Have You Ever Heard the Hymn of Abundance".
What's Going on with Bengtie Lately? Nine Out of Ten Fanfics Have Been Scrapped, and One Is Unfinished.
I want to read a book like "Star Iron: Only after my death did Liu Ying understand love (Flowing Firefly)". Ah Qing is better😭😭😭
ACG Light Novel/two-Dimensional Fanaticism
I want to read a book similar to "Why the World Will End Again (Vol.01-Vol.02)". Brother's adorable original ACG light novel! Don't use hot second creations (such as Naruto Pirates flying all over the sky) and write more light novels, Kanniang, Bengsan, Shaoqian,
Is There Any More Curious Bengtiewen?
Are There Any Novels That Travel Back to the Stone Age?
Recycle the Broken Iron and Unpopular Gods to Do It, Don't Be Abstract and Evil, Thank You😊
Food, Food, Food, Books About Food
I want to read a book similar to "Checking in from Food to All Worlds".
Give a Little Star God/fate Shock to Another World
I want to read a book similar to "Slaying the Gods: Hunting the Gods in the Name of Pioneering".
Is There Any Good Star Iron Fic? There Is a Shortage of Books, Please Recommend.
I want to read a book similar to "Yuan Beng Tie: Transformed into a Star Core Spirit, whose online name is Zuo Wangdao".












































How should I put it? It turns out that a serious protagonist is like this. The protagonists I usually see are either a little crazy or a little silly, like a fake person. The protagonist of this book is very serious, too serious. He is obviously so good-looking, but there are not many comments in the comment area, mainly because there are not many jokes. This book is overall very good, and the story line is also good. I hope the author can give the protagonist some jokes, otherwise it looks too serious.
The main shortcomings of this book are that the first chapter of The Stone Age is very long, and it is slow to pick up. The writing is pretty good, and the story is well written. In the future, the score will be at least 8:8. This is an ordinary book. It's not particularly enjoyable, and the writing isn't particularly good, but the setting is okay and the writing is normal. The main problem is that he is slow to get started. I don't know how long it will take him to reach 8:08, because many people don't like an article to be so long. But it doesn't matter to me, as long as the writing is decent, I only pursue three things when reading a book, plot, excitement, and imagination. And I only ask for one thing from a book. For me, the novel setting is in the imagination. I am still looking forward to this book. I hope it won't be a eunuch. Otherwise, the author, just wait, I want to eat foxes [laughing]
First couplet: The fairy boat cannot protect Ting Yun, and the dream cannot save Liu Ying. Second line: The ship cannot protect Ji Zi, and the paradise cannot save Ellie. Zhonglian: Sumeru cannot protect the tree king, and Fontaine cannot save the water god. Hengpi: I have accomplished everything, but I have lost everything! [Smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]
Isn't the first world over yet? It's a bit too long. I haven't watched the anime Stone Age.
Yes, the volume is large and the details are rich. The Stone Age chapter is a bit long. This kind of work has a main world background and the protagonist develops and strengthens in the sub-world. It is still very good. It is not a cool novel, but a daily adventure novel. However, the span of the world's combat power is too large at the beginning, which is a bit uncomfortable. I haven't seen the Food Hunter chapter yet. The hunter's combat power has collapsed too seriously. There are all kinds of strange creatures and various abilities. Without cheating, it feels more dangerous than the Iron Breaking World. I hope the author can continue to write many interesting world adventure stories
It's great. Unless you really like the anime, the first world is usually too long. There is no extraordinary power and no love and affection, so there is nothing interesting about it. The remaining few hours I have left to write are okay. What is a company when the protagonist develops? The protagonist can defeat only the Amber King. Being threatened again and again, damn me. Without the protagonist's time-travel door, what's the use even if you grab it? Without the protagonist's authority, can you travel through time? Travel through an egg.
It looks good, but I feel that the plot advances too slowly and too many words are spent in a single world [face covering]
The content so far is very good. However, the dozen or so pictures at the end of Stone Age are a bit hard to understand, but the problem is not too big. There is some controversy about food on the space station. Because of the existence of synthesis machines, it stands to reason that there will not be too unpalatable food, especially for rich women. It feels a bit far-fetched to have a good impression of food. Maybe I didn't look carefully, but it can be said to be harmless. Overall, it is relatively good. It is just one book a day, which is a bit dangerous. Readers may keep the book at any time, and then the author stops updating. After all, there are too few updates. Please give me more updates.
The first and second worlds are both very good, but the third world begins to become fantasy. "Fantasy" means that you can roughly predict what will happen next from the beginning. In this case, it is usually when the imagination is exhausted and the game begins to become a routine. Although I don't really like the routine, I still want to wait and see if there will be any changes in the future!
The writing is good, but overall it is relatively slow-moving. There are still relatively few plots in Iron Break. According to the author, this is to help the protagonist have the ability to face difficulties in the future. In addition, the plot of the comic is relatively long, and it is quite interesting for people like me who have not watched the corresponding anime.
The author has already recommended it, but there are still no updates. There are no problems so far, but I only watched one season of Stone Age. Don't know much However, the short video petrification device I played before seems to need to be recharged. It seems like the battery ran out during the finale.
I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing Star" "Empty", "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most powerful thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me the "Peerless Magical Power" of "Unparalleled in the World", and then I went on to "Emperor's Supreme". On the way, not long after I trained the "Immortal" divine body, the "Chaos Sword God" and I had a good relationship, and gave me the "Twelve Zodiac Guardian God" as my protector, accompanying me in the "Nine Heavens of Proudness". I'm there Under "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used "Tian Zhu Tu" to defeat the world's best master "Against the Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was broken. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" era~~~ Alas! I am old, and now it is your young people's world, but You are a young man, you need to update!
In the main world, things like the Black Tower that are helpful to the protagonist or companions can go to another world. It's okay, but some people I just met will be taken to another world immediately if they have no conditions.
I think the pace is still a bit slow. I personally hope it is a little faster, or the author updates it more and speeds it up in disguise [laughter]
The whole day is good, but the previous Stone Era is too long. Although it is for the development of the protagonist, it can still be cut in half. Do not write too long about a single world of Zhutianliu.
Another World is a bit long Is there a female protagonist?
The setting of this book is pretty good
Very well written, the best Bengtie and Zhutianwen so far
It's a very interesting novel, but the title is not that attractive, but the plot is also very well written, and the author, Shi Ji Yuan, needs to fill in some holes.
Let's make a bold guess, can we use this petrochemical device to cure Liu Ying's injury syndrome?
Very nice, good luck to the author
Interesting and interesting to watch
I think it's great
A book with extremely high potential, a rare combination of Bengtie + Wanjieliu, and the author's update speed is not slow. It is worth reading!
Want to watch, love to watch, want to watch more, not enough →_→
Well, it looks pretty good. In summary, it's like a slow-paced infinite stream, with an average of more than 50 to 60 pictures per world, which is acceptable to me. Author, please update!
It's a good book, a travel story about all the worlds. It seems that the author doesn't know how to write emotional lines. The pace doesn't need to be too fast. Quality is very important.
It's very interesting. The author must keep it up.
Author, I've given you a gift, come on! Don't interrupt or unfinished updates.
I'm sorry, I can only say that the plot is very exciting, but it lacks some details and it goes too smoothly. It feels like reading a diary, but I still like it very much. Come on for more! !