Soul Penetration**********

The writing is good, a bit like Water Margin, but the plot design is too poor. The most fatal thing about Water Margin fics is the process of conquering a large number of heroes. If the writing is not exciting, I can't stand it. You start with a long chapter about conquering heroes, and you don't do anything about developing your own power and sorting out interpersonal relationships. It's a bit troublesome to read the table of contents. Although you are very careful with the titles of each chapter, this has become a hindrance to you. The introduction setting allows you to burn incense to summon the martial souls of Yang's ancestors to merge with yourself, and gain all abilities. You can get spiritual incense points by conquering heroes. However, if you recruit Lin Chong for a hundred, and Zhu Gui for a hundred, this setting is too bad! Moreover, a system mutation was forcibly introduced later, and you can spend 1500 to customize any Yang's martial spirit. This is not going to take off! ! ! As a result, you customized it for the female general you conquered? ! ! ! The lower part controls the upper part? ! Don't you strengthen yourself? ! I really don't understand this paragraph! ! ! It's hard to comment. I personally really can't stand it. Goodbye!

It looks good, you can't let me be the only one fooled, right?