My Little Pony: Creator of Order

This book is definitely one of the high-quality My Little Pony fanfics. Although there is not much description of the protagonist group, the original settings added by the author himself are the finishing touch. For now, it can be confirmed that the identity of the protagonist is the "tyrant". Secondly, what happened and why her former subordinates are still alive today, and where did the "Redemption Organization" come from? These foreshadowings that have not yet been revealed can be said to be very exciting. But one thing to say, the plot actually seemed a little confusing to me. There is just no sense of connecting the previous and the following, and the scene transitions very abruptly. However, for me, the impact of watching it is not very great, but I still hope that it can be improved and some foreshadowing can be done. By the way, there is one more thing to complain about. Why does the protagonist have so many poisonous traits? ? I thought there was only one before, but you told me it was a group! ! ? The key is that the personality charm that the protagonist has shown so far has not reached the point where it can be felt at any time, so I am very worried about whether the plot will be extended in the future and the protagonist's memory will be restored. There will be a great sense of separation. Summary: There are few chapters, the future is promising, the setting is interesting, and it would be better if the characters are strengthened. I hope I won't abandon the article (Amen🚪) When there are more chapters in the future, I will consider whether to give it a five-star rating.

Reminds me of a poem in Hollow Knight In the distant wilderness, they are full of awe and regret when you mention your name No one can tame our wild souls, and you accepted the challenge Under the paleest gaze, you teach, we change, and our instincts are redeemed You have given bugs and beasts a world they never dreamed of You have given us our most cherished dreams, one after another Unfortunately, our desires have no end, and you find it too late What does it cost to tame our wild souls? You gave it your all and even more was taken from you But the desire is never extinguished, the dream remains, the power fades Disasters quietly arise during this period, forcing everyone to withdraw their strong and arrogant demands and instead degrade us into beasts or skins. Our souls are finally swallowed up by the light from above From your corpse, the voice of accusation still rings: from the vessel that accepted our pain, our failures, our dreams, that contained us all... In this pain, we finally discovered the undeniable truth Because no one can contain this thing except pure emptiness. This book... Is super beautiful! I looked up "Zhiji" and "Jinling" and I was shocked! It's the first time I've seen someone put so much thought into naming. Gardenia - refers to gardenia, white and fragrant, symbolizing pure, eternal love and joy Ji - the original meaning is that the rain and snow have stopped and the sky has cleared up, and it is extended to mean a clear and open-minded state of mind. For example, the idiom "light wind and moon" is a metaphor for noble character (there is a foreshadowing of rain in the novel) Hibiscus - refers to the hibiscus flower, which blooms in the morning and falls in the evening. The flowering period is short but gorgeous. It was called "Shunhua" in ancient times, symbolizing tenacity, momentary beauty and cherishing time. (In Eastern culture, hibiscus also represents gentleness and tolerance. Hibiscus Wenwen is indeed such a pony) Bell - the original meaning is a metal bell with a clear and crisp sound, often associated with agility, joy, warning or Zen (such as "wind chimes" and "Brahma bells") "Hibiscus Bell" symbolizes extension The collision of ephemerality and eternity: the perishability of hibiscus contrasts with the aftertaste of the bell, implying the philosophy of "cherishing the present". Soft yet strong: Hibiscus is cold-resistant and has a clear ringing sound, which can be described as a character that is soft on the outside but strong on the inside. The author is great, the author is great, did I check it correctly (*'▽'*)♪

The best My Little Pony fanfic ever! Among the novels I read, the writing is pretty good, the characters are pretty good, and the plot is very smoothly connected. Regarding the system, there is a little bit of a gap, as if a purpose is forcibly added to the heroine. Although the sense of existence is weak, I think it is best to remove the system setting. According to the description in the second volume of the article, I think it will be the same with or without this system, and it will be better without it.

Immortal product, masterpiece! The plot becomes better and better as it goes on, and the story is vivid, interesting and delicate. I want to say that both Shuangshuang and Wenwen are cowards in relationships, Shuangshuang is emotionally slow, and Wenwen doesn't dare to take that step. But this does not affect the relationship between them. All in all, whether it is friendship or love, they are both good. No matter what happens to them, as long as they are still together, there is nothing they can't accomplish. I look forward to the continuation of their story, and I also hope that this book, Shuang Shuang and Wen Wen, will be known and liked by more people. Finally, I hope that all the ponies in the story will have a happy ending without any regrets.ヾ(´∀｀.ヾ)[Already planted][Add one to the bookshelf][Please update] Come on, author! ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶❤

The sad past of the powerful pony, the helplessness of the ruler, the separation of life and death from the beloved pony before he officially confessed his love, the powerful but powerless to control life and death. In terms of plot development, it is very ordinary. It just sets up a big suspense and then reveals it all at once. However, such a simple plot development made me very comfortable to watch. The whole story is told very smoothly. The foreshadowing is long but necessary, because the foreshadowing makes the rhythm of the whole story smooth and even, which is very comfortable to watch. It also makes the whole story complete and smooth. I originally thought it was a cool article, but you Kuku made me cry ｡°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡

This is a great book. As one of the few little Maria fanfics, I really like the way this book is written and the content. I think the author wrote it very carefully. I stayed up two nights to read it. To me, this is a book worth recommending. I am the kind of person who likes to read word by word, so I attach great importance to the content and text (of course there are occasional typos, which is understandable. After all, no one is a sage, how can one be without mistakes?) This book is really great. I haven't finished it yet, but I have to take the college entrance examination. After I finish the college entrance examination, I will finish this book and just watch My Little Pony. This is also a cartoon that I liked to watch in my childhood. The content is also very educational. In short, I like this book very much! Love My Little Pony too! Why do I always have tears in my eyes... [I'm about to cry] Love is hard to calm down, feelings are hard to understand, I can't stand it anymore, it's so sad [Crying] When the full stop comes to the end, when my vision blurs, when I click on a novel, I know that sadness is doomed. The whole text is mostly simple. If we talk about the advantages, there are enough blank spaces, which is very suitable for association, but not many people can accept this kind of too much blank space (but I prefer it). From the beginning, the ending is already doomed, "After you left, my thoughts have always been..." For Zhi Jishuang For Shuangshuang, she really suffered a lot of sorrow, and I feel that the blank space at the end was not very good. It would be better if there were more emotional descriptions of Zhiji Shuangshuang at the end. Although it is a memoir, if there are more descriptions, I think the emotions can be described very well at the end of the work. 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I suddenly felt a little sad when I finished the text. I felt that it was not very mixed with the original drama, but mixed with my own history. First of all, I looked at the title of the riddle horse. At first, I thought it was the weird horse that guides the direction of M6. But most of them pointed to the fact that the protagonist himself is a mystery. There are not many riddles for others to dig out. Photos were emphasized many times in the plot, pointing out that the good times in the photo frame could not be returned. I thought there would be a villain confrontation plot, but there was no plot. Speaking of which, the protagonist did not do anything bad to the empire in the original empire (I saw all of them in the subsequent flashbacks). In the end, he made the "optimal solution" with patience, but was always described as a villain. Finally, I read the final part of the text, where I still had fun with M6 after officially abdicating my role. I didn't quite understand that I felt like I had no beginning or end when I couldn't return the knife I buried at the moment I took the photo. In the end, I followed my own heart. Xiao Wen's soul turned into a bird and passed away after a short life. The protagonist was alone in the end (although he was also accompanied by M6). Later, most of them talk about their own original protagonist experiences, and the emotional lines are good. It's always worth seeing

To be honest, this book is the best-looking one I have ever read among My Little Maria books. The protagonist's demeanor, personality, and language are all exquisite. It would be better if some of the main plots could be described in more detail. I hope the author will continue to work hard, the quantity must not be less, and the quality must be high [laughs]

It's really beautiful! The character of the protagonist really impressed me, and the author's writing style is also very beautiful and heartwarming [Sending my heart to you] The text is sweet at first and then bitter. Xiaowen's love for Shuangshuang really made me cry to death [almost crying] : "Silent love, unmodified love, low-key love, original love." The extra is also very good, very gentle... All in all, it's super pretty! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

It is a very good pony fanfic that feels very real and has no pretentious emotions. It is another pony's sad and happy history written without escaping or excessively changing the main line. Although the story is heartbreaking, it confronts the lifespan theory, which is one of the most difficult topics for many pony fans. After reading it, I personally felt that being good and strong is not a reason to act recklessly. Real greatness is the open-mindedness to see through everything and the willingness to let nature take its course. When I saw the end, I also wanted to cry, but it was as if Wenwen appeared in front of me, or maybe I was too into Ah Shuang's perspective and mentality, so I could only hold back. The tears were more like rain that should not exist, and Wenwen deserves to be with the good sunshine rather than the rain. Human nature is complicated and selfish. This background will never disappear no matter what. Once Zhiji Shuangshuang is put away, there will be no regrets after seeing it through. There may be more partings in future stories, but at least we will not dwell on the past and it is time to move forward.

To be honest, this book is already considered a masterpiece except for having a few chapters. Although it seems to have a poor rating, I looked through the comment section and found that they were basically all 5 stars, and the lowest one I only saw was 4 stars.

The writing is acceptable, the plot is addictive, and spoilers are involved. It's so sweet, and the ending is considered to be OE and BE. Wen Wen dies from the very beginning of the article. The early and middle stages pave the way for Shuang Shuang's memoirs, and the later stages are all memoirs. I feel that a lot of the foreshadowing in the early stages was brushed aside in the later stages. It could be written in more depth, and it might be more complete. It's really interesting to read the whole article. The sadness, the lifespan theory, the tram problem, the cowardice of the nobles, the citizens' forgetfulness of Wen Wen, etc. All contributed to Shuangshuang's darkening in the future. I really felt sorry for her. I thought Wenwen would be resurrected and have a hee in the future. I cried so loudly when I saw Shuangshuang finally chose to accept the lifespan theory.

The heroine's character really struck a chord with me! And the life experience is also very attractive. The most important thing is that when you get along with the protagonist group, it feels super comfortable to watch [sending heart] [blowing kiss]

It's pretty good to watch. I might not be able to react during the transition, but otherwise it's fine.

It is a good My Little Pony fanfic. The early stage is a foreshadowing of the middle and late stages. The middle stage tells the story of the two princesses Celestia and Luna, 1000 years before they appeared. The later stage is very exciting. It is a relatively sunny, positive and cheerful storyline. You can read it with confidence. The book It has not rewritten the original plot, nor does it interfere with the affairs between M6. The overall feeling of listening to the book is very good. If you listen deeply, you will have a feeling of being there. Personally, it is a bit exaggerated, so don't pay attention [I learned it]. If you are a latecomer, if you like this kind of subject, you can eat it with confidence. The book review is my personal experience and may be slightly different from the content. I highly recommend this book.

My heart is filled with resonance. Those stories about friendship, love and dreams reminded me of my past imagination, and took me back to the time when I fantasized about growing food for myself. Orz! Author, hungry, rice

It's very interesting. The author's writing is very detailed and contains a lot of foreshadowing. It doesn't revolve around M6, and it also has its own set of story lines and characters. The protagonist's actions all have reasons and factors. The timeline and overall framework are also divided into volumes, which is very clear. The protagonist's CP is an original character with unique characteristics. The CP is easy to beat and has both knives and candy. The only drawback is that the foreshadowing at the beginning is very long and the ending at the back is short, which makes it a bit rushed, but it still deserves five stars. In fact, I really want to see the first-person side stories of other characters, such as Wenwen, members of SO, and Linda, but it's a pity that it's finished.

It is as tasteless as boiled water, but it tastes like jade dew when you are thirsty. After reading the whole book, I feel that my heart and head are empty. I am looking forward to the sweet love of CP but it is not there. It seems that plainness is the real thing. My personal taste is different. The stamina is not great. The author's writing is okay (there is obvious foreshadowing and foreshadowing, and there are The climax, the world framework is complete, I haven't watched many animated movies about My Little Pony, and I don't know much about some of the settings, but I think the author's writing is quite good, but it's not cool enough. I may respect the rules), there are no pitfalls, and it can be read with your brain (emphasis added). I give the author a thumbs up and look forward to the next work.

Oh my God... Before I clicked on it, I was thinking about what a 9.1 Rated fanfic would be like. It's really beautiful. The warm emotional line between Zhi Ji Shuang Shuang and Jin Ling is like the ultimate pull between friends and unfulfilled lovers. I really like it... Some of the holes dug earlier have also been filled in, and the writing is also very delicate [sending my heart] I finished it on the first day I started watching it. It's a kind of luck. I was able to watch it all right away✌️ In the early stage, I had the feeling that the warmth between friends is a knife with longevity theory. I really like it [almost crying]

Not bad, please update soon! Come on more! However, you can consider changing the cover (just my opinion), it may be more eye-catching [Sending Hearts]

It's beautiful, no doubt about it, the overall structure is great, the foreshadowing is very eye-catching, and everything will be explained at the end. I thought the author would write about the plot of the My Little Pony movie~ But I won't write it, after all, it is a parallel world [Thinking][Thinking]

The writing is great, and the main character is well portrayed. I haven't watched My Little Pony, but I can still understand it. Come on [thinking] To be honest with the author, I think the part before the memories is really more in line with my taste, but the later parts of the memories are really too much😮‍💨, which makes me tired [rolls my eyes], but I will continue reading (this is my personal feeling)

It's a very good book, I finished it as soon as I finished reading it, and then I finished it. The protagonist is really okay, everyone has different decisions, I respect her, there is nothing good to say, and there is nothing to say, so let's leave it at that, I will not read other novels in the near future.

I have finished reading the main text. It is a good fan work. There are no obvious loopholes in the logic, and the rhythm of the writing is also comfortable. The first half is more casual. Personally, I like the part that starts with the memories, where the story between the protagonist and Xiao Wen comes to light. The setting is very interesting. Personally, I feel that the ending is a bit rushed, but it does tell all the foreshadowing and things that need to be said. It is considered the end of the story rather than the author cutting it off, which is within a reasonable range. Some people in paragraph comments should not be so possessive of the author's articles. Reasonable communication is OK. What's the point of holding a gun and a stick as if you want to vent?

Although the writing style is a bit immature, it can be seen that he has his own unique perspective on life. The overhead background is well designed, filling the previously buried pits, enriching the characters and extending another story line, so that the plot will not be trapped in the original framework and appear monotonous. Although some details are not handled well, it is enough to see.

So far, I have read two good My Little Pony fanfics, and this one is one of them.

I'll go, it's so beautiful, I mean it's super good-looking. I haven't read the original work very much, but the stories are pretty good and there's nothing OOC about it. It's a big warm family. It feels super warm and beautiful.

A great story about friendship and love in the book. Great writing on the progress of dreams and farewell to death! It's a bit emotional that the protagonist has changed in the face of the departure of his closest friends, the children raised by Organization S, and the departure of some horses who initially struggled for their ideals. Even because time has changed, Wu Ma still remembers them and feels sad. There is a lot I want to say and I may not be able to say it, but I really like this book! ! ! It was really fun to read it all in one go!

This book, on the surface, seems to be a story about the protagonist traveling through Equestria, but what I see is an attitude towards encounters and separations in life, an attitude of not forcing things, which really gave me a different perspective on separation in the world. It is just an attitude of letting go without giving up. I really feel deeply, because there are too many separations in reality, and many novels uphold the idea of ​​never letting go of a happy reunion. And this book leads to a different kind of reunion, reunion after separation, and the reconciliation between the protagonist and himself. Oh, forget it, I don't know what to say anymore. Anyway, it's good to read, especially the second and third volumes. This book feels like I mainly read the first volume of the second and third volumes. It's almost as good as the top 100 books.

The overall story is good, but the writing style is a bit immature. The most important thing is that I haven't finished it yet. I think this kind of be that one is dead and the other is alive is already a level that I can accept. But this kind of situation where one person lives, the other person dies and then reincarnates, and meets another living person, but because the life he reincarnated into is very small, he only lived for a short period of time and then left his side again. Who are you really going to cry to death. I really hope Shuang Wen can be happily together forever. This is the biggest reason why I didn't finish reading the rest. I really don't feel like I want to be knifed to death. Moreover, most of the books I read have emotional lines, and they are all about he. Seeing this really makes me cry. In short, in Xiao Ma's novels, I really like the identity of the protagonist. Overall, it's not bad. See you soon.