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It's quite good-looking. The world view is well designed, but there are a lot of foreshadowings. I don't know how the author will make up for it in the future. In particular, Song Ming's views on the world are not very clear. It may also be because there are not enough chapters. I hope the author will update it soon!

The overall idea is relatively smooth and not too toxic. In the early stage, the protagonist goes crazy a bit quickly. The subject matter is quite fresh. Please continue to update it.

The author sells himself and boasts ~

It's okay, the idea is quite novel, but there seems to be a lot of foreshadowing

"Wind? Why do you like the wind?" "To be precise, I like the wind blowing on me, making me feel like I'm still alive." Come on, author! ! ! ! Faster and faster! ! ! !

The plot is quite interesting. The setting is also interesting. But I feel like this should be a more refreshing novel. But I feel that the writing in this aspect is not that brilliant, and I could write more details. Secondly, I feel that the pace of the plot is a little fast. Although it was enjoyable to watch, the amount of information was large and the process was too short, leaving a weak impression. I feel like sometimes a little life plot can be added to push the main line. If I write more details and improve the plot connection and content, I feel it will not be lower than 9.7.

Written by nb, the ideas are clear [like]

The logic is online, the characters are full-bodied, and I hope there will be no female protagonist and no CP. It should be good if it is written like this. The subject matter is also very novel. It seems that the author has dug a lot of holes, but I am a little afraid that the author will not be able to bury it all later [face covering] So far it seems to be very good!

Not crazy enough, the author keeps working hard

It's good so far, I hope it doesn't end badly or get cut in half or something [face covering]

It's okay. It's pretty good. The ideas are novel and the world view is grand. But the writing is not good. I can see that the author wants to write a lot and has great ideas. But after all, it is a tomato. There are not so many free ones. As long as there are no poisonous points and the logic is clear, it is a good book.

The ideas are smooth and not toxic to me. It is a rare good book. The writing style is okay and the world view is quite vast. Let's see how the author writes later.

Good book, is the author original? It is similar to a book I read before. The author should not be too slow and will update more [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The characters are very vivid and updated very quickly. There are more ambushes than there are now, but some have been revealed. Overall, this is a very good book with promising future prospects. (The author is very short)

It's so embarrassing, it's so embarrassing. The plot is good, but there are some parts that are confusing. For example, when the personality is introduced at the beginning, the setting is not that easy to understand and it's easy for people to give up. I almost gave up the book because of that paragraph. Look at the duration

Recommended, the character quality is very good

Fire Tongs Liu Ming, very good-looking, the setting is very novel It's good to read. Come on, author, this book will definitely be a hit.

Looks good! ! ! Author update [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] Come on! ! !

Although it is a newbie's article, it is still very good. The update speed is okay, so I recommend it (｡•ᴗ-)_

It has a certain logic and is also very crazy. The characters are relatively full-bodied. I recommend [like]

There are a lot of foreshadowings. I am still relatively immature when it comes to rendering, but my growth has been obvious since the first mini-boss. Come on! Good-looking and good-looking [laughs]

Good looking, good luck to the author

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [shy][shy][shy]

Now that I'm watching it, I just want to ask if there's a female lead?

Not bad, not many people saw it

Come on, author, it's very interesting.

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The plot is particularly to my liking [eating melon]

This book is okay, the writing style is okay but needs to be improved.

Although I only watched a little bit, it should be pretty good.