Above the Immortal Forbidden City

The story has twists and turns, but it is also reasonable. The plot is slow and in-depth without being abrupt. The author's writing techniques are sophisticated and interlocking. The characters are described in detail, their personalities are outstanding, and they have a strong sense of picture! It's a rare good book, highly recommended!

The plot of this book is vivid and the story is wonderful. The protagonist's love for life and persistence in career are worth reading.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a realistic novel about mortals cultivating immortality. The little characters rise step by step and change their fate against the will of heaven. It's a very solid plot. I like it very much. Please give it a boost from the author and update more. Two updates a day are not enough [laughing]

The plot of the story is pretty good and very attractive. I have been reading fantasy novels for many years, but I lose interest in ordinary novels that have no new ideas after reading it for a few times. This book is good. It is not easy for the author to create. I give you a thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up.

It is well written, cleverly conceived, compactly structured, and the main characters' personalities are vividly created.

Good! Good! Write slowly and carefully. As a reader, I am optimistic about the author.

Good content, affectionate protagonist

It's so beautiful, it's a refreshing article about cultivating immortals. I read all the newer ones in one go.

I have read through hundreds of classics, but this is the only one written by Pharaoh Dao. The details are particularly detailed, and the characters' expressions and movements are solidly depicted and vivid on the page. It is really a must-read for staying up late to read the sacred book. Fellow Taoists, you can stay and have a look, and experience the world of cultivating immortals with the author. I would like to thank all fellow Taoists for the author!

This book is one of the best novels of this type. The author has clever ideas and the story has climaxes one after another. The author's literary background is also very deep. Thumbs up for the author's hard work! [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Gao Wuwen added a little bit of Xiuxian, but it's a pity that I wanted to watch Xiuxian

Great book, thank you very much. I haven't seen such a good-looking book in many years. It's very breathtaking. Well done.

Emotional and logical, step-by-step, close to the heartstrings, a good book

At present, the main line is clear, and the branch lines are gradually surrounding the main line. It is worth reading.

Good, in line with the appetite, the author's writing is excellent

I have read too many books. I can keep reading this book.

For growth-oriented mortals, this article is a must-read for cultivating immortals!

In fact, I accidentally clicked in to read it. At first I was reading it, but then I got out of control and started listening to it. I couldn't stop reading it more and more. It was so good! It must be a five-star review, and then continue reading [Love]

Fascinating. It is a rare good book. Worth reading.

The story has ups and downs and the plot is novel and interesting. It is worth reading!

This book should not be rated 8.4. The author's writing style and plot development should be at least 9.

It's beautiful, I like it very much, I read more than twenty chapters in one go

The plot of this book so far is relatively simple, with scenes of ordinary people in the market and shadows of immortal warriors. The author's characterization is relatively comprehensive and engaging. The first part is very creative, but the second part of the plot is not as exciting as the previous part. It's a bit like other novels about cultivating immortals. They all follow the same rules of conquering the immortal world. The inertia of thinking still doesn't break away from the routines of many current novels.

There is not much nonsense, the texture is clear, the structure is compact, and the concept is clever. It is a good book!

It's so interesting, the interlocking stories are surprising and wonderful. I like it again and again.

The book is really good to read. It was told so eloquently that there was no sense of disobedience. I read dozens of chapters in one go and gave it a five-star thumbs up!

The writing is good and the plot is fascinating

This book is okay, not obtrusive, and flows smoothly. There are too few good novels about cultivating immortals nowadays.

Overall, the writing is pretty good and you can read it. Deduction of one star, I mentioned the reason in the discussion of Chapter 224

The writing is very good, the more I read it, the more I love it!