National Fate Arena: China Reigns Supreme in Both Letters and Arms

The subject matter is good, but there is too much nonsense.

The world view is too long. It's over 20 chapters. I know you want to describe the world view, but you can't have more than 20 pictures. Most of them are world views. It's okay to point out the world view and put it at the end of one or several pictures. Or it's good to add extra chapters, but if you put them all in chapters, it will really make people lose patience. The most important thing is to describe more battle scenes or branch plots, or dig pits, bury pits, etc. I don't think there is anything wrong with the main plot. But starting with the betting battle, most of the battles from the beginning to the end are covered in one stroke, and the battle scenes are not that exciting. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and it is too long, but if it is well written, this is also a very good book. I'm just here to give you some advice, oh, don't spray it if you don't like it. All I can say is, come on 🍉 🍉

The author is a mature and experienced author. There were many twists and turns when writing about Han Xin's competition, and the performances of the supporting actors were all complete, which shows that the writing is skillful. It's just that it's a new world with a lot of settings, so there are a lot of settings discussed in the early stages, so it's not that good-looking. I also read that these settings must be written because these settings are not common and can be omitted. The setting was written with so much effort, and the author is a skilled worker. This work is worth looking forward to, but I saw it too early, with too few words, and I feel that the world view has not been fully constructed yet.

There are a lot of things like world view settings, almost all of them in the first 20 chapters, and quite a few in the later chapters. Now I am basically looking at the feeling of settings. But relatively speaking, this book will have fewer loopholes in the national sports arena. It's really good... I can't finish a small incident in several chapters, and I feel like I'm about to finish it.

I personally like this kind of national sports theme. I have read a lot and still like this style. I just discovered today that I have read another article by the author before. Unfortunately, it has not been updated. I don't know if there will be a follow-up in the future.

Because this book is about a new faction in the War of National Destiny, it has more settings and explanations, which makes it seem bloated and nonsense, but I really enjoyed reading it [scrolls][scrolls][scrolls][scrolls] Waiting for the title of god 🍉 🍉 🍉

I just hope that countries will not hold each other back. In the face of natural disasters, humans should work together and just have small fights. After all, it can be regarded as a competition like a sports meeting, but it should not really escalate into a war to destroy the country 🤦 There are too many settings. When I read Chapter 40, they were all settings, and the plot was all mosquito legs.

The writing is okay, the creativity is much better than Time Traveling, and the explanations are more reasonable. However, there are too many settings in the text, and the start is not exciting enough. However, the writing is okay, the creativity is good enough, and you can still read it.

The world view and background are very complete. It is the most reasonable article on the national destiny that I have ever read.

I think the writing is very interesting, and some small details are well handled. It writes about the brilliance of our culture.