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The writing style and setting are both good, but most of them are about the relationship between various forces. It doesn't look like a description of a story, but a narrative version of a mind map. The power of Red Mansion is inherently complex. If you really want to write about it, although there are many things you can write about, it would be a bit boring to read.

The writing is okay and the writing style is pretty good.

The writing is good, the writing style is quite good, but some details (not the writing style, but the logic like a child bending down to get into the sedan) need to be polished.

It's well written. The author won't run away, right?

The narrative is smooth, and the group portraits are well written, but the affairs in the mansion are a bit delayed. Those who have read The Red Mansion may find it a bit verbose, but the author's writing is good. I hope to see more interactions between the protagonists.

It is better than any Red Mansions I have ever seen. It has good writing style and the characters are flesh and blood. It is worth reading.

It's too short and it's very uncomfortable for Kavin-1⭐️

The process can be a little faster.

It's beautiful, and The Red Mansion is well written. Sister Lin has appeared for a long time

The narrative is smooth and the characters are not deformed, but the main plot is a bit slow. I hope to maintain the rhythm and get in touch with Jin Chai as soon as possible [Sending Hearts]