Fantasy: Starting from Becoming a Family Spirit Beast

Very nice. The most important thing about a family that cultivates immortality is the family, if it depends entirely on the protagonist to guide them. That would not be the Cultivation Family Wen, but the Long Ao Tian Wen. Although the protagonist only appears in 30% of the scenes, the description of the group portraits has a sense of development. The development of the family is due to the regrets and dedication of the forerunners, the sacrifices of devotees, the efforts of ordinary people, and the rise of geniuses. The content is comprehensive and not cumbersome.

Obviously, it can be seen that the author is a novice, and he should still be full-time (if the author sees it, he can reply to it, right?), The writing style is a bit immature, and some poisonous points are common to novices, but I have read too many books and the resistance to toxicity is strong. Normally, this book can only be rated as three stars, because The author is a novice, so four stars, but the author has one advantage: he will reply in time. It is already August. When I commented on the chapter he wrote in 24 years, the author also responded on the same day, and basically made changes after giving suggestions. This is really valuable, so I will give it five stars. I forgot to mention one thing. I don't know if the author's setting is unique or incomplete. It's a bit uncomfortable for someone like me who is used to conventional settings for cultivating immortals. I picked it up again and read it again. I have to say that there is a rule in Tomato that is very useful. Most of the things with a score of more than 9 are shit. Some excellent works usually have a score of 7 to 8 or more. This is like this for me. The more I read, the more I like it. It suits my taste.

Advantages: Family group portrait, the business has now reached a stage of modest success. The time span between chapters is not large, and it can be seen that the author wants to cook Xiaoxian like Xuanjian. The protagonist has arrived at the existence of regional nuclear weapons. In the early stage, the family focused on entrepreneurship and farming management. The progress control is okay, the writing style has improved significantly, and the overall flow is smooth. It is suitable for readers who like the slow pace of the family. Shortcomings: The family encounters too few world-class or fundamental-breaking major events, and the sense of urgency is insufficient. It may be that the protagonist's advanced sleep time is short, and someone is keeping track of everything. Except for the first and second patriarchs, the three generations of the family do not give people a strong sense of mission and epicness, and they feel a bit like a small country enclosing territory for self-pleasure. I can't say it's not good to write like this, everyone's taste is different. The next step is probably to write about the family's pioneering stage. Having more clan members will test your writing skills. Come on, author! !

I've been a troll for a long time, but your writing is not bad and your writing is not white. It's quite interesting, I think I can keep watching it. The reviews of the book are not very good. I want to encourage you. I think it is good. At least I haven't seen any major poisonous points so far.

I read it in one sitting. It was so enjoyable. It's good-looking. It's a very traditional article about cultivating immortals. It's also very reasonable to advance in cultivation. I'm looking forward to the follow-up content. It's a very interesting family story, I'm looking forward to the rest of the story

The author's writing style is very good, and the description of the characters is very vivid. It is not a brainless system invincible flow, and the logic is very good. However, the description of the protagonist is indeed a bit lacking. Overall, this book is really eye-catching. I recommend it. Good book, good book

It's really not bad. As long as the author doesn't make the setting too outrageous, fills the holes he dug, and makes it smooth and organized, it deserves 8.5 Points or more.

It's good to read, but I haven't seen the latest chapter yet. There are some typos in the book, but they don't have much impact. Also, I saw a paragraph that said he carried a long sword at the top, and said at the bottom that he used a knife when fighting, but the flaws are not concealed. I also hope that the author can explain the realm clearly, and the generational relationship in the family is not very clear. There is no clear division, such as Qing generation, Yu generation, etc., But this problem is not big. I also hope that the author will continue to update, come on [please update]

The author writes in great detail. It is not Long Aotianliu. It basically starts from scratch. From a mortal to a cultivator, it is all based on the efforts of the family members. It is not easy along the way. In addition, the author has something to do personally, especially after the big sword is used later, it is even more difficult to survive. I hope the author will use less people. Then I think this novel should be able to be written to more than 3,000 chapters. I feel that there should be a big world behind it, such as the big world of refining the void and above after becoming a god. It depends on how the author writes it. Also, I would like to recommend it to readers who like to read reviews before reading novels. I believe that those who like family stories have read another book called "Protecting the Clan". I have also finished reading these two books. To sum up, both books are very good. For me, that one may be more idealistic (I also like the ancestor who has a strong sense of security, haha), and this one may be closer to reality. Summary, author, come on, keep updating

It's okay, I've been raising it for almost a few months, and I've gone from 20 chapters to over 100 chapters now. But when I read the comments, [Inquiry] said that you haven't built the foundation for the protagonist in the past 200 chapters. [Thinking] I'll give you four stars first [laughing] I'll see if I can give you five stars after I see how it goes later. [Please review]

I have watched it off and on for a long time. The author's world view is quite good. The content occasionally has some minor flaws, but it is a bit low at 7:00, so I specially give a five-star review to support it. It is not a blind pursuit of promotion and monster fighting, but a very real family cultivation. The camera is mostly focused on the family members, and the protagonists do not account for much. Especially the small family under its management is a unique angle in Tomato Ancestor's novel. There are so many characters that I can't remember them all, but they basically have distinct personalities. I hope you won't miss the eunuch, and I will definitely watch the ending.

To be honest. During your Qi training period, you have achieved the ninth level of transcending tribulation. To be honest, if the foundation-building power came, would it be a punch? Break. World. When the golden elixir comes, will it move mountains and seas? Destroyed forever.

The most appetizing group portrait novel I can find so far [Sending Hearts] The protagonist does have few appearances but the plot progress is very good✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧Currently, for me, the protagonist is more like a measure of the development of this family₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

I suggest the author speed up the pace a bit. The pace is too slow and it doesn't look good. A big world view makes it look good. The pace is too slow. The Qi training period is 500,000 words. I don't know how many words will be needed later. I don't know how many words it will take to finish.

For group portraits, the system is not the main thing. Very tender and tearful [crying]

The plot is smooth and full of development. The pig's feet are not out of line with the family's strength. It's just right. I give it a thumbs up. It's still very exciting to watch slowly. The plot is smooth and slow-moving, and it's also a bit exciting.

Personally, I think it can be considered a good book. On Tomato, I basically read cool articles. I can still read the front part of this type, but basically can't read the back part. I didn't feel that way with this book. Maybe I prefer bland ones, but I highly recommend it.

I've read more than a hundred chapters so far and it's okay

Not bad, not bad. It's a treasure book, but there are too few of it. I need to keep it up.

This book is good and worth reading

The ratings have just come out, so I'll give the author a higher score. I'm currently looking forward to the follow-up plot.

Ignoring the writing, plot, and characterization, it is considered excellent, and the occasional minor flaws are not covered up. In particular, the double-flowered red stick of Zhao Feiyun's family is scrawled offline but not abrupt, making people aware of the cruel world of cultivation at all times.

The score of this book is too low. According to the quality of Tomato's work, it should be at least 8~9.2 Points. There are few poisonous points, the plot is reasonable, and the most important thing is that the author is active. [Note] The low score may be due to the fact that too few people have read this book, which is affected by the book reviews that were one or two stars lower. I feel that with fewer comments from book friends, the pleasure of reading has been reduced by half.

This is one of the best family novels I have read. The author is a novice. As a novice, it is very good to write such a novel. For those readers who are tired of family routines, you can take a look at this one. The plot and plot are quite novel and very good. Come on, author! (The author is very active and cute, please support me, readers)

I have read a lot of books, but this one doesn't have too many negative points so far. It's a good read. It's still very good at the initial stage, but it's not so good for those who like to watch the main character. Currently, there are only a few protagonists. This book mainly writes about the overall development of the family, and the character descriptions are also pretty good. All in all, Tomato is a treasure book for me.

Mortal martial arts training and fighting are comparable to those in the Golden Elixir stage. There are too many AI descriptors such as volcanic eruptions, meteorites, lightning, etc. Nothing else is a problem. It seems too smooth. Not many people died in the family story, but people from other families died. Personally, I don't think it looks as good as building the world's first immortal race from dead wood. It's okay to start cultivating immortals later on

Personally, I think it's pretty good, but the appearance rate of Snakes is too low, the number of shots taken is even lower, and the pace is too slow, the updates are not fast, and it's not enjoyable to watch, but there's still nothing wrong with the plot.

Highly recommended and highly recommended, a very nice book about family cultivation of immortality.

It's so beautiful, I just like watching the slow pace, it fits my fantasy of the world of cultivating immortals.

Tomato is a very good group portrait article. The author spent a lot of time describing each person in the family, and the characters are all very good. In terms of plot, I have read few family portraits, so I dare not call it a classic. However, the plot is still a bit different from the traditional fantasy plot, which is quite interesting. I feel like the author of the timeline has very good control, and I give it a five-star rating.