Iruma-San Was Possessed: Don't Touch My Brother!

The plot is well written, with knives, sugar, and ups and downs (I feel like the author is holding back a lot). The protagonist is handsome, strong, gentle, and a little crazy (so cool!). The development logic is also very reasonable. It does not seem to be purely based on the plot, but it can reflect the protagonist's IQ and EQ without overpowering the plot. In fact, it is the Iruma fan fiction plot that I expected. But to be honest, some of the plots are a bit too abrupt, mainly because the feeling of demonization happened suddenly without foreshadowing [thinking] about the protagonist's life story in advance. The life story of the protagonist could be hidden and told slowly. Although it is easier for readers to understand it directly to tell it, the perception is not that good. Although it may be foreshadowing or something, I feel that the psychological transformation of the protagonist is a bit fast [shocked] and could be more foreshadowed (this way it would be more satisfying [admiration])

I found this book in the recommended book, so cheers, cheers, cheers! ! ! ! ! [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart][Send a heart] Let me share my feelings and opinions here. This book is still very new, and the general plot has not been changed significantly yet. First of all, the protagonist's level is too high, but his early strength does not match the high level. Secondly, the protagonist is very ambiguous with everyone, and suddenly gets on the scale in the middle, but there is an explanation later - it is taking advantage. The protagonist is not very healthy mentally. He puts his younger brother first and will give everything for him. But even though there is an explanation, I still find it a bit far-fetched. Because the protagonist's charm was too high, both the teacher group and the protagonist group were either passively or actively charmed by him (yes, I call it charm). If there is no good explanation in the following text (such as what happened between them and life-and-death friendship, etc.), It will appear very abrupt, very collapse, and very OOC. However, since the detailed experience of the protagonist's first visit to the demon world has not been released, nor has the identity and bloodline of the demon in the protagonist's soul been explained (such as charm, etc.), It is still very interesting to watch at the moment.

Really nice to look at! Because Iruma has very few fandoms, I am really excited to have such high-quality food released all of a sudden. Moreover, this cp is very extensive, and it is especially friendly for an omnivore like me.

Oh my god, this is the first time I have seen a fanfic about Iruma-san who is possessed by demons. The author really writes it very well. I really like reading it. The feeling of Yunfei is really my xp. I am really looking forward to the following plots. I hope the author will make more updates (๑•ᴗ•๑)♡

The author's writing is beautiful. You are my favorite among all the Iruma fanfics [shy][shy]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! There are so few books of this type [crying] [crying] This is the only one I can find [adoration] [adoration]

6.5 Points is really not worthy of this book.

I would like to ask if there is anyone who can choose the protagonist cp? [Exploration]

Shamelessly give yourself a five-star, yeah (σ≧∀≦)σ

👍Nice, it's very good!

It's beautiful, very beautiful, but author, are you too slow to update?

It looks good, I love reading it, and I still want to read it. Please keep writing, author. Come on, I believe in you. ٩(๑^O^๑)۶

The best one is my first fanfic now, it's very good, but you support the author, please update the author more

It's super good-looking, and the main character and everyone else are great❛˓◞˂̵✧

It looks a little confusing from the front, but it's really easy to fight, and there's foam from the beginning [laughs]

I like it, it's very good, and the characters are not OOC. Support, support, come on, come on [please update]

The plot settings are very good, but the writing is a bit lacking. I believe the writing will get better and better👍

It's really well written [laughs]

Definitely don't mess up! The author is big [crying]

Although it is delicious, the author loves to stop updating it too much

One more, I'm afraid the author will be too proud

One star is left to prevent you from being proud

Can the author update 100 chapters at once and scare me to death? (づ￣3￣)づ

The author writes very well, don't give up on the book! I will always support the author! ! !

It's very well written, please keep it up (^･ｪ･^)

Super super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! The character of the protagonist in this article is really good

It's so beautiful, it would be better if the author could update it a little faster! ( ╹▽╹ )

It's very delicious, but I can't remember some of the plot. I think it's the most delicious fanfic I've seen in Tomato, but the update is a bit slow. I had been waiting for it when it was updated in January, and now I suddenly remembered it and found it. I hope it can be updated more. I feel that sometimes the writing style is more direct, but sometimes the true feelings are revealed. The protagonist is very gentle [laughs] and the author also writes more delicately about everyone's emotional lines.

I highly recommend everyone to go see it, it's so beautiful!

Nice! The plot is very interesting and the suspense is high!