How I Reincarnated as a Sand Monster

It has a good connection with the original work. Just don't bring the original work's smell of Japan being a dog into this novel. That would be too embarrassing.

It is indeed very good-looking, and has the feel of the original work. It is almost as if the main character is in the original work. It is very good-looking, with the delicacy of female videos, but without the sense of humiliation and torture that often occurs when watching female videos. I recommend Wall Crack, it is the best-looking among the slime fics I have ever read!

This is the first time I have read a fan novel by the King of Meng (still serialized (இωஇ)). I really like the big book, and I also really like the group favorite national treasure Pest!! ♡(◉Θ◉)♡As a loyal fan of Moe King's novels from the beginning to almost the end, it's so difficult to find a fan novel that I like! [Palm face] When I read this novel, my heart flew into DaDa's mind and said, I love you to death!! Big!!! (♡∀♡) Please continue to add updates, otherwise... I will cry!! (っ╥╯╰╥C) The last sentence, I love you so much (˘ ³˘)♡

It's very good, the rhythm is very good, and there is no poisonous point. It is the best slime fanfic I have ever seen. It feels very original. The author also works very hard in updating, the protagonist is very cute 😘 Chapter 16 looks very exciting, I highly recommend 👍

I admire everyone who has perseverance, and I believe you can recover as soon as I did. Remember, don't think about nihilism. There are many things in life that are meaningful. Don't be confused, even if you don't think about yourself or your family, there are still many readers like me who are looking forward to your recovery and your updates. So, please promise me that you will never leave this world. Well... If you have something unhappy, you can write a side story and say it. At least I will respond to you, and you don't have to worry about someone scolding you. I will scold you back. ——Xiupu who cares about you

Oh my god, I thought if I read the Chinese translation again, how could the author write so smoothly 🤦. I hope the following content will be more interesting. You have successfully aroused my interest in reading 😳😳😳

The description of the characters is very detailed, and the details are appropriate without making people feel too verbose. The description of the protagonist's heart is also very immersive, which is much better than ordinary novice novels. The shortcomings are actually quite serious 🤔 The word order of the article is not smooth, the change of perspective is not clear enough, and some related words and punctuation marks are used improperly. It will feel awkward when reading, so you need to read it carefully. But after all, the daily update volume is very large, and it is almost catching up with daily updates. It can be considered as a good thing, and I support it with 4 stars.

It's good to read. It really feels like I'm reading the original Slime novel. The writing is also very good. It's the best quality among the Slime fanfics I've ever seen. It also has an author who updates quickly and has a lot of content. I just hope it doesn't stop updating and doesn't get blocked. All in all, it's very interesting and there's nothing bad about it overall.

It's quite good. There are very few good cute novels on Tomato. However, there are some problems with the character development of the protagonist. He is too cowardly and has low self-esteem, and he is always rejected. It is very easy for me to get into the protagonist's mood when reading novels. I feel very depressed when I read it. I would like to make the protagonist more confident and cheerful.

I have read almost a thousand books, and this one is getting better and better as I read it. It can no longer be said to be simply good-looking. The inner drama of the protagonist's character is very well written, and the emotions are described delicately. The butterfly effect can also be clearly seen in the small changes in the plot. There is no Riddler in the book. The look and feel is very good. The transition between Rimuru and Rimuru's first acquaintance, becoming brothers, and then having desires is very good. The writing is a bit yellowish, and it doesn't look disgusting. Not only in terms of fan fiction. This book also ranks high on the whole Tomato list for its emotional descriptions. I rarely write book reviews and I don't know how to praise them. I also feel that the score of 8.0 Is too low.