Yitian: the Son-In-Law of the Ancient Tomb, Learn [Nine Yin] at the Beginning

Temporarily 4 stars, I have an idea [thinking], the yin pole generates yang, embrace yin to return yang. First learn the nine yin, extreme yin generates yang, and yin generates each other. Studying the Nine Yangs, the fusion of Yin and Yang [thinking] [thinking] (dog head saves life [shy])

When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you wait for the second update, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is taken more seriously. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound, and the dead numbers are collected. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debate was deafening, and his tolerant attitude was deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, the bookworm memories have a place for you, even if In a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark Traces. Updating your heart may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them All come from insufficient updates.

The writing is really good, the plot is reasonable and full of surprises. The author should continue to work hard and create more wonderful things.

It's perfect, but I still like the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. Maybe the protagonist can use the Xuanming Divine Palm as a blueprint to recreate Ebisu's Xuanbing Longxiang?

Everything else is OK, but the seniority is written wrong. Zhang Sanfeng is Yang Guo's junior, and he has the grace to teach, not his peers or elders. Yang Guo's son is also the same generation as Zhang Sanfeng. Yang Guo's son calls Zhang Sanfeng brother. Yang Guo's grandson is the seniority of Zhang Sanfeng's son. In this timeline, Yang Guo's son must be in his 80s or 90s. Even if Yang Guo's son is 70 years old, he is still the seniority of his elder brother and younger brother. Yang Guo's grandson is of the same generation as Yu Lianzhou, and the heroine in yellow shirt is of the same generation as Zhang Wuji. There was some poison in the back, especially when he was a robber and robbed Zhuwu Lianzhuang Village, and he swore on Guo Jing,

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The content is new, I have my own ideas, it's quite interesting...

The writing is quite good, ruthless and never sloppy.

Good martial arts book

This is not bad, nice looking

The story is relatively reasonable, not obtrusive, and there are currently more than 40 chapters that are non-toxic.

Very beautiful, much better than those with harems

Happy grudges, very good

Personally I think it's okay, keep up the good work

Oh oh oh oh oh oh I remembered

It looks good to drive away, let's check it out later

Good, good, good, good, good

I think the writing is pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

I just watched it for more than two hours and it was pretty good.

It's super beautiful. This book is highly readable. The content is exciting, the text is contagious, and the details are moving. It is completely consistent with the description. It is worth reading and collecting.

Good, novel content

The setting is pretty good, looks good

The setting is good, you can check it out

Well written, keep up the good work [Like]

The rhythm is tight and the plot is novel

Not bad, good writing

It's very beautiful and well written.

I just want to know about the one that uses Xuanbing Longxiang

This ending is good, and I can write a book following this ending.

Okay, okay, okay, okay, okay, okay, okay,