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⛄Advantages: There are only a few good-looking fan stories, the theme of the Dark Lord in the parallel world is very novel, and the writing style is very comfortable and smooth. Tom's feelings for his friends are the doting and indulgence of children. In this way, other people think that Tom is very good, and they can't help but fall in love with Tom who looks very mature and stable and seems to be aloof. Such a heartthrob novel looks very refreshing. The little Barty who appears later is also very cute, and his age has changed from age to age. ⛄Disadvantages: There are too few adjectives. When I first read it, I saw words like "warm", "gooey" and "furry", which I thought were novel and made me feel warm and comfortable. However, when I saw the newly updated chapters, I still described Harry and the others like this, which made me feel tired. I turned over and over and it seemed that these were the only words. It kept creating the impression that Tom was an adult and looked at these children as if they were puppies. It was too plain and boring. And he always described Harry as having a slimy voice, looking weird, and not good-looking. It was said earlier that Tom is the Dark Lord of another world. Although he is not as vicious and unpopular as the Dark Lord of this world, he is still very cold and serious when encountering some serious situations. However, when you look at the end, you only see Tom's gentleness, and he is even more indulgent towards Barty. It's not that the Dark Lord cannot be gentle, but he is too gentle and does not show any ruthlessness at all. I can't stand it. The further you go, the more you look like a child.

It's really worth watching, gentle and interesting feeling A peer of the Dark Lord who understands emotions and a good student during school. He doesn't need to deliberately please anyone. He plays the role of a Hogwarts heartthrob/succubus.

It's good, I've read all four big books, and Xiaolong, is that how money is used, you wasteful thing [laughing and crying]

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It's so good to watch, I'll eat it😋 in Shura Field. Tom's character is like a gentle Capibara🤓, but he also has a side that belongs to the Dark Lord👍. In contrast, I'll eat it😋. The author is so sure, I want to eat🥺

Love to watch. Love to watch. (๑•.•๑) Why hasn't the author updated it yet? >O<Come on! Eating melons and watching movies is the first place. In fact, the plot is very interesting. What does Xiao Lu do with all the money? Damn, please write a few more, these corrections are not enough. 1. After reading this article, it is like opening a secret door to a new magical world. Every detail is exquisitely crafted. Sir, your writing style has simply given the original work a dreamy and charming new veil, which makes people deeply involved and unable to extricate themselves! 2. I have to say that your skill in writing fan fiction is as profound as the millennium foundation of Hogwarts. The characters are vivid on the page, the plot is full of twists and turns, and the familiar faces are placed in the new story, but there is no sense of violation, but a different kind of charm. He is truly a master of word magic! 3. From the weaving of magical spells to the delicate elaboration of character emotions, your fan fiction is full of ingenuity. It's like waving a magic wand, easily grasping the essence of the original work, and boldly innovating. As a reader, I am completely impressed. I hope your creative journey will be prosperous and the magic will never end.

This is really beautiful and cannot be described in words. No one in Slytherin dislikes Tom because he is poor. I feel that it is quite tolerant and very beautiful. If it does not appear, it would be too much isolation and bullying.

Luo Luo's book is also so good this time, and I won't talk about the writing style and content anymore. It's so awesome that I won't praise it anymore. And this time it's mainly a very novel point, that is, the same person in parallel time and space, but it just includes Luo Luo. He likes to add a little bit of ridicule to, um, the protagonists he wrote. Of course, I also like it very much. It's very interesting, and it's very close. Really, Luo Luo feels that every time Every book is written about a real person, so I think he is the god who writes HP fanfiction. I have read four of his books, and every one of them is very good. However, two of his books were discontinued, but Luoluo himself did not want to discontinue them, but they were banned. Then there is another book that is completed. It is really good-looking, with a lot of meat, but not pure meat, and he is also very clever. It's amazing. And this time the fanfic has added a complaining part that I like very much. Really every time when I see the protagonists complaining about Luoluo, my God, it is like really speaking out my inner voice, and it is almost very sweet. Including the few books I read by Luoluo, almost all of them are very sweet. And the only one I remember in a book has a sad part is Little Buddy, and then the ending of that book, um, the protagonist went to a place to open a small shop, and then there was a sequel. I was really moved by the side story about the male protagonist and Seid from another school at that time. There was also a book in which Tom in the diary was killed by the protagonist in the book. Although the protagonist in that book was really calm and charming at the time, I still cried a little for that Tom. At that time, the side story Tom was himself, and then he wrote a sentence in the diary, which is, oh, I am just a boy or something. It is really amazing, Zundu is so beautiful. Laughing, I got off topic again, but it's okay, let's continue with this article. So far, there is nothing cruel about this article, including the fact that our protagonist still has an above-average IQ (there is no male protagonist with a low IQ in Luoluo's book, okay). The current main line is very sweet, and then it is the kind of a big friend with a group of children, which is, well, very sweet and warm, but some people have those "evil thoughts". I won't say more, and then we won't say more, so come on, Luoluo! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Very pretty. The protagonist and Tom in the original work are actually two completely different people. The relationship between the protagonist and the original Voldemort is that of a sibling from another world, and their personalities are completely different. The protagonist is a very gentle person, who is easily soft-hearted towards people he knows well and indifferent to people he doesn't know, and most of the time he approaches others with the mentality of an old father. Voldemort is not like that at all, and although they are both very charismatic characters, they are two very different people. So if you want to see Riddle in the original book reborn into Harry's era, I can only say that this is not the book you want to read. The protagonist of this book is more like a brand new character with the memory of Riddle, and his charming point is completely different from the original Riddle.

I really, really like it. It's a pity that the previous book was blocked and I can't find it on my bookshelf. I especially liked the interaction between the previous one and Sri Lanka's teacher. I remember I blocked it before it was finished. It was so sad.

Buying stocks? Why not just write them all with if lines [thinking] [laughing]

It's nice [sending my heart] Although sometimes Tom really feels like a married woman [full] [full] [full] Yes, yes

It's super, super, super, super, super, super beautiful. Oh my God, it's so beautiful to see the little girl wandering around in the world.

Tommy is a fragrant, soft, sweet and glutinous little cake. It is as cute as honey gummy candy. It is very beautiful. Now I am very much looking forward to who will take the lead first, quack quack, but the big room must be Little Barty. I read a book review before and came across a review that said Tommy was a bit childish. I didn't feel it at the time. Now that I look back and think about it carefully, there is one thing. It is indeed a bit childish. I vaguely remember that when I first clicked on this book, I wanted to see Tommy have a big fight at Hogwarts.

Well, the protagonist's personality is quite good, and the viewing experience is quite comfortable. The current CP tendency is Draco x Tom. I hope that the author can improve the characters of several people who get together with the protagonist in the future. I feel that although I have written a lot, the characters still have no real sense. Come on.

It's very interesting. The analysis from the love brain perspective is very unique and clearly relevant.

If Tom hadn't been with Draco, I would have been so miserable that I couldn't sleep! The two of them really have a sense of CP [crazy][crazy]

Okay, okay, sweet, sweet, this Tom won my heart

I followed the first two books, and the teacher's writing is as good as ever🥺Can you not buy stocks? I think it's good to be ambiguous without cp. I feel that no one is worthy of Tom.

Come on Luoluo! ! ! Love every copy of Luoluo! ! ! (I hope I won't be banned)

Originally, this book had been discontinued, and I had only read a few chapters. I thought I had given up on reading it, so I just thought of putting it on the bookshelf to collect dust. In fact, it is a very good article. The author just revived Per, so I came back. [You taste it carefully][You taste it carefully][Hold it]

Really, this protagonist is a heartthrob, and he and Xiaolong really have a good relationship. It's really true, I think it's so delicious, it's just amazing. This article is definitely one of the better-looking ones in Tomato. I feel it's not laggy or laggy, and it's not with Snape. I feel like the teacher-student relationship is really intolerable.

Ah, it's so beautiful. I've been following it from the book "The Dark Lord Became My Best Friend" until now. Luoluo must keep writing! I especially like to read the HP written by Luo Luo, but it is a pity that I have to write one book after another. Will the book "Hogwarts Has a Male Model" be continued?

Ahhhh, why doesn't the author continue to update? I like this book so much

Very nice, Tom is a very standard business man. "If I am attached to the world that belongs to me, then why don't I make this world mine too?" Building a career in this love-filled world is still fun. There is also Honey Gummy, which is a really good dog and very cute. Corn and Chocolate are also good snakes. In short, they are both cute. Also, Luo Luo, you haven't updated for 20 days. When will you update again?

It's so beautiful, but it's a pity that the author's first three books have been blocked, so I can't read them.

The protagonist is a heartthrob and super good-looking. There are parents and generations. The protagonist is a heartthrob. Two male protagonists, super good-looking.

It's really good-looking, but I'm a little confused about this pure love game. I thought it included specificity? Of course, a good book is a good book. The content is very interesting and interesting. There are two parallel worlds, not to mention that each world develops in a different direction. Don't get too entangled in the character's personality. Generally speaking, the characters will not deviate too much (if you care, you can choose not to read it). This is probably because the book is so good-looking that I can ignore other small flaws. It is quite rare in terms of 🍅...

Very good. So far, I think Tom is good with everyone. I like Xiaoduo because he talks less and is smart.

My friends say that I look like a yandere, because I am usually sad. And then I look a lot like a yandere. I also have a pair of vampire teeth. And I also like to imprison others. Now I'm going to imprison you. ˋ_ˊ