Freshmen Who Are 18 Years Late

I didn't consider everyone's reading experience before. I want to say I'm very sorry to you. If there are still any questions, please help point them out. Now most of them have been deleted. Remember not to be tied to reality

Thumbs up for sister Jiajia. Her previous writing style has always been a bit compositional and stiff. Now there are fewer and fewer unnecessary modifiers. Now it is close to a qualified novel. Of course, it is the first time that sister has written to this level and it is already very good [Love]

This book by the author expresses his homesickness. (Ah... No) The biggest problem with this whole book (self-perception) is that it is too classic. Other than that, there are minor problems. Yes, but not limited to, the characters' emotions are too single, just like you input only one command into a robot. Conflicts of any kind come all too often, and in this case I mean stories. And the description and excess like a text. But the author has been practicing hard in the back. In addition, although the front part is relatively poor, it is not bad if the newcomer can do it without annoying the audience. Looking forward to your next book [Like] Of course I'm not asking you to give up! You should play with this book and summarize your experiences. (The above is purely my personal opinion [crying])

A very innovative book, worth reading. This is the first time the author has written. Please forgive me for any shortcomings.

It looks great, but updates are a bit slow. There are a lot of rhetorical techniques in it, but there are too few people to rate it. Come on!

There is a sense of immediateness when reading a composition, and I can suddenly feel the mood of the Chinese teacher when he evaluates my composition. It's very good, the paragraphs are relatively long, the descriptions are very delicate, and the psychological changes of the characters are also described well. It would be good as an essay, but it's a pity that as a novel, the plot is not as compact.

It's a great work. It makes people laugh constantly when it's sweet. I like the interaction of each character. Unfortunately, the plot behind it is a bit subtle, and Lin Yuxuan's character has also changed. The plot of the male and female protagonists driven by this character has many weird places, but fortunately, the overall work is wonderful after watching it [crying] [crying] [crying] The lovely Mu Mu is fortunately happy.

I prefer reading this type of book. Although your descriptions are too frequent, I still have the patience to read them. I will give them five stars to support them and try to be as concise as possible.

I've finished reading it, it's good to read, and it's a running account, but the best thing is that the author actually managed to come up with so many details.

The writing is good, but the author's writing is rather serious. It would be better if it was pleasant

A very good book about changing marriage, highly recommend it!

Give me a feeling of explaining how to fall in love.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks so good. I love watching it. I watch it every day.

In the beginning, human beings are inherently good, and if they are not updated, they will not be heroes [laughing].

It's a relief to have less heart. Personally, I think the words are too official (too many words, too solemn).

The author's writing style is very good, but some details still need to be improved, but overall it is still good.

Just this kind of daily sweet article! ! ! Love watching! ! ! Nice! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's very interesting to watch, and the plot relationships are well handled. Overall, it's quite exciting.

I've read so many articles about changing marriages, and I personally think they're pretty good. Feel free to comment.

Although I feel that the plot is a bit flawed, the overall story is very interesting. It was written very quickly for the first time. Good luck, author. (Personally, I hope it doesn't end badly)

It's very nice, but some descriptions need to be revised. Come on, author.

It looks good, the plot is very attractive, the details can be slightly modified You can add a little surprise appropriately. If it's too smooth, it won't be interesting. It's already good to be able to write a book like this for the first time. Keep working hard. Come on @ President Jia Jiajia. I'm sorry that I can't get the gift.

Very nice. The ending is perfect. After the second novel became a girl, my world was completely messed up. That one was also very interesting. Let's publish another one. [Like][Like][Like]

Nice looking hehehehe

Good-looking, good-looking, very nice [Like][Like][Like]

What a novel track [laughing]

The sawing is in good condition and the details are in place.

Personally I think it looks good

Where did the protagonist's father go? ? ? ? ?