"Time Travel + Pure Hundred + Different World + Magic"
The author couldn't stand it any longer.
Not to mention that he had not finished the serial novel at hand, but he was reincarnated into this novel and became a passerby named Monaer.
In order to avoid the possible bad ending of the original work, Monal could only secretly work hard to change the development she wrote.
Protect the feelings of the heroines in the original work? Or try to save the entire world you write?
It sounds so tiring, obviously I just don't want to face a bad ending!
Reader comments
Wait, where are you updating? Didn't I warn you to update more often? Why don't you still listen to me? Why don't you read and listen to my updates every day? Do you know how uncomfortable it is for me to stare at the table of contents every day and wait for the new chapter? Why not update? Is it because something else is more important than me? Do you dislike me for urging you to update? Or do you think it's worse if I urge you? Am I bad at prompting? Do you think my reminder is verbose and annoying? I've obviously tried my best not to rush you to update. I've been waiting for you to update. Why do you leave me alone every day? Why are you alienating me? Are other things too closely related to you? Why do you only see other things and not my reminder? What other things are better than what I urge you to do? I poke like you, meow, poke like you, meow
It's not that I have any fantasies about girls, after all, I'm not a lily person. But what should be said is that girls' posts are indeed a bit sweet. I'm not a lily lover, but if I have to say it, it is indeed a bit sweet. I'm not saying that I like cp, but it's really sweet, but I'm not a Lily person. I really don't like CP. I don't like these things. It's a good thing for girls to be independent, but after all, when I see the interaction between girls, I feel itchy in my heart. It's like a primitive impulse. It's like watching the reunion of old friends who haven't seen each other for many years or the beginning of a new relationship in movies and TV dramas. It inspires the most simple side of people to be good and beautiful.
Give it five points, the narrative pace is very good. The heroine has been looking for opportunities for the two "heroines" in her book, but she didn't find Lan Mao's feelings. But judging from the characters of these two people, I guess the heroine would have to hit the blue hair knife to realize it. I highly recommend everyone to read it (please send the author some candy in case of emergency)
Eh! I have an idea, why not let Lan Mao sacrifice to the sky to fight against the bad ending, and then send the heroine back to reality, and write the story of Monal and Luoli Aishe over and over again in regret and nostalgia.
Ten or even nine points good-looking
so...
What is that drink that tastes, smells, looks, and drinks like orange juice but isn't called orange juice? ? ?
Hey, I have a plan☝️🤓
How about calling it "boiled juice"? 😋
Ending Chapter 271
May peace
Let me talk about the conclusion first: it is a masterpiece that has no flaws but good qualities. It has a slow pace, a delicate writing style, and its own way of grasping and promoting relationships. It is not suitable for quick reading, and there will be a lot less thoughts.
Let's talk about something else next. Time is a good thing, even just one day can come up with many other ideas.
So far, this book mainly revolves around two pairs of CPs (Moluo and Fado) to develop the story and lay out the world view. Although the narrative and setting are from a pseudo-limited perspective, Mo's "author" attribute as the protagonist is not mentioned too much (you can also speculate that it is a big setting in the later period, but there is not much foreshadowing), and more of the plot is focused on the relationship between Mo Luo and Fado.
As I read later, Moluo's plot is less elaborate, but it advances faster. Fado has more resources, but progress is apparently slow.
In the new thinking, this is a unique narrative style, which can be said to be the idea of "plot serves the character" rather than "character serves the plot".
I want to show vivid characters, and the driven worldview structure dominates the advancement of the plot, instead of setting up the background first and letting the characters wander in their destiny. To put it simply, I want to tell characters > I want to tell stories.
(Original characters) may be familiar to some of you. But as an emotionally oriented Lily, it is a major advantage. In other words, in the first two school years, there was a strong emotional main line (the end of the second school year is an important node). In the third school year, how to balance the "plot line" that was not obvious in the early stage is a challenge worth watching. (The so-called shortcomings are also here. The main line advances slowly, and the glimpsed world background is also relatively ordinary, but this is an inevitable result of the writing method and the purpose of writing)
If you already have a good impression of Qingshui Lily, many of the descriptions in this article will be moving. The two major impression points, trees and boats, bring me the most feelings.
I hope you can continue to watch them move forward.
Best wishes again.
It's beautiful. You can tell that the heroine is an idiot. I'm sure the heroine will definitely be the one at the bottom [laughs]
After reading it for so long, I finally had to write a few comments. I have always felt that just a few words of praise for a good book are a bit cheap, haha.
The pace of the whole book is very slow. The clear timeline is of great help in understanding the development of the story throughout the book. Things happen coherently, and it can be said to be excellent as the main body of the narrative. Different from some template stories that are narrated based on emotions, the emotions in this book are an extension of the story. In short, when things develop to the right point, emotions will sprout naturally.
If stories are compared to skin and emotions are compared to blood, then characters are undoubtedly the heart of this body. As the foundation of the characters in the book, character design is like the driving force that drives the characters in the book to do all kinds of things. For me, the characters in this book are undoubtedly good. Whether it is the former author Miss Monar who has a purpose and strives for it, who is messy but tough and sometimes a little stupid, or the present-day Monal, or Lolly Asher who has a sad past but shows a lighter side for her friends, who dares to love, dares to hate, and hates aristocrats; The characters of the four characters are extremely rich. They are no longer words, but living people. From morning to night every day, I am thinking about what they are doing. There is no doubt that I love them and everything around them deeply.
In the past two school years, I gradually understood part of their past and analyzed their characters without permission (only my personal opinion). These two school years have been like a dream, with fulfilling campus life (magic exam), delicate dormitory emotions, and the love between girls is really enviable. Even though it has passed, I am still recalling the stories that happened in the past two school years. I am still very moved when I think about it carefully. Excellent description is like a warm hug, it is there, quietly accompanying you, hugging you at the right time, the warmth wrapped in it is fascinating.
Now that the third year of school has not yet begun, I write a book review as a mark. In the past two school years, I have met four classmates who have very different personalities but are lovable. But my knowledge of them is still superficial. I hope that in the third year, I can get to know you better.
Regarding the worldview: Neither big nor small, one world is enough. After three school years in the kingdom, and as an adventurer, the future will not be too peaceful. There are still many interesting things that have not been shown. I hope the author can show you what you are thinking and write out all the weird things. A good story is like an old photo album, with a sense of time that has been dusted for a long time. I hope it will never be finished.
That's it, who doesn't love a relaxing and bright adventure in another world? Haha, this book must be a sweet article. The author is willing to describe them and write such a perfect story. If it ends with be, I will feel sad for them for at least a month. I am very much looking forward to the next story, and let this world slowly unfold as I push it.
Random Thoughts: As the protagonist, I really like Monal's character so much. The author must treat them well (😭).
Ps: The protagonist is Monal, and the two pairs of CPs are Mo Luo and Dofa.
Summary (as of Chapter 247)
Recommended people: Lily CP, daily party
Not suitable for: fast-paced, cool writers
Speed-passed, this is a daily novel about the super wingman of the Western Fantasy Academy of Magic. The highlight is that the "author" of the book ends up as a super wingman, bringing together the CP of the original protagonist and changing some tragedies. The protagonist has his own emotional line, but more than 80% of the plot of the whole book is related to the pair of CPs who are matching each other.
To be honest, this "author" setting is really useless.
The setting in the original text is vague, so after time travel, it is actually a setting for "readers who have read the book and have some impression of the plot", and did not use the intelligence advantage in exchange for actual improvement in combat power. Except for the very very late one, the protagonist seems to have received mysterious treatment because of his identity, but if he doesn't show it, he doesn't. Therefore, the protagonist is a homeless girl - no money, no strength, no background.
Guess I will later say that the protagonist is actually not the real "author"
It's really good-looking. Although there are two couples in it, I still prefer the relationship between Blue Hair and Purple Hair [shy]. It's really rare for two tsunderes to fall in love. The other pair, Fa and Duo, feels too classic [face covering]
I feel like the progress is too slow [face covering], but I can understand it, the two tsunderes can still keep fighting for at least a year [laughing and crying]
It looks good, but when can the protagonist give out candy?
It's very well written. I really think it's very good. I couldn't distinguish many names at first, but gradually I remembered them. It's really well written.
It's just that some of the content didn't meet my personal preferences. The protagonist's power was too weak and I felt deeply powerless. The part about celebrating the engagement made me feel so dull and breathless. The feeling of being powerless and unable to change was so uncomfortable.
The back is so sweet! I cried so much!
I always feel like it's too late. Why is this book so cold? It's the least read I've ever seen, which is inconsistent with historical results.
The interactions are cute, and 400 chapters are probably enough.
You see, this almost-marriage plot is undoubtedly shocking. The protagonist group has no positive performance here, which is extremely frustrating. On the other hand, the protagonist, the author, is really useless. She needs to do something to protect her daughter. And the pace is really, really slow.
It's a very interesting novel. I haven't finished it after reading it all afternoon. I'll save it for later and read it slowly. But for now, the relationship line is clear. It just depends on when the blue-haired and purple-haired idiots will become [laughing]
So who is cp? I just read a dozen chapters and I don't understand.
Not bad, come on, author
Children, I really like Duoduo [adoration][adoration]
It looks good. Fast forward to the heroine handing out sweets.
It's nice to watch, but I feel like there's really no need to use so many curse words [laughing and crying]. Too many "blocking words" are a bit annoying. [Eat melon]
Good-looking. Love to watch. Like to watch.
Monal is so cute 🥰
Beautiful, I like it very much
A very good book
It's nice to read, but the author doesn't seem to update it much? 2.3 Only one update
It looks good, good luck to the author!
Nice! Especially the scene where the little slave girl says goodbye to the protagonist group. I live to see such a heartwarming story!
The writing is very beautiful. I really like this kind of warm little daily life. Good luck to the author.
It feels good, but why is no one there?
Thank you for your story
It's very interesting. Good luck to the author! [Blowing kiss]
Wait, where are you updating? Didn't I warn you to update more often? Why don't you still listen to me? Why don't you read and listen to my updates every day? Do you know how uncomfortable it is for me to stare at the table of contents every day and wait for the new chapter? Why not update? Is it because something else is more important than me? Do you dislike me for urging you to update? Or do you think it's worse if I urge you? Am I bad at prompting? Do you think my reminder is verbose and annoying? I've obviously tried my best not to rush you to update. I've been waiting for you to update. Why do you leave me alone every day? Why are you alienating me? Are other things too closely related to you? Why do you only see other things and not my reminder? What other things are better than what I urge you to do? I poke like you, meow, poke like you, meow
It's not that I have any fantasies about girls, after all, I'm not a lily person. But what should be said is that girls' posts are indeed a bit sweet. I'm not a lily lover, but if I have to say it, it is indeed a bit sweet. I'm not saying that I like cp, but it's really sweet, but I'm not a Lily person. I really don't like CP. I don't like these things. It's a good thing for girls to be independent, but after all, when I see the interaction between girls, I feel itchy in my heart. It's like a primitive impulse. It's like watching the reunion of old friends who haven't seen each other for many years or the beginning of a new relationship in movies and TV dramas. It inspires the most simple side of people to be good and beautiful.
Give it five points, the narrative pace is very good. The heroine has been looking for opportunities for the two "heroines" in her book, but she didn't find Lan Mao's feelings. But judging from the characters of these two people, I guess the heroine would have to hit the blue hair knife to realize it. I highly recommend everyone to read it (please send the author some candy in case of emergency) Eh! I have an idea, why not let Lan Mao sacrifice to the sky to fight against the bad ending, and then send the heroine back to reality, and write the story of Monal and Luoli Aishe over and over again in regret and nostalgia.
Ten or even nine points good-looking so... What is that drink that tastes, smells, looks, and drinks like orange juice but isn't called orange juice? ? ? Hey, I have a plan☝️🤓 How about calling it "boiled juice"? 😋
Ending Chapter 271 May peace Let me talk about the conclusion first: it is a masterpiece that has no flaws but good qualities. It has a slow pace, a delicate writing style, and its own way of grasping and promoting relationships. It is not suitable for quick reading, and there will be a lot less thoughts. Let's talk about something else next. Time is a good thing, even just one day can come up with many other ideas. So far, this book mainly revolves around two pairs of CPs (Moluo and Fado) to develop the story and lay out the world view. Although the narrative and setting are from a pseudo-limited perspective, Mo's "author" attribute as the protagonist is not mentioned too much (you can also speculate that it is a big setting in the later period, but there is not much foreshadowing), and more of the plot is focused on the relationship between Mo Luo and Fado. As I read later, Moluo's plot is less elaborate, but it advances faster. Fado has more resources, but progress is apparently slow. In the new thinking, this is a unique narrative style, which can be said to be the idea of "plot serves the character" rather than "character serves the plot". I want to show vivid characters, and the driven worldview structure dominates the advancement of the plot, instead of setting up the background first and letting the characters wander in their destiny. To put it simply, I want to tell characters > I want to tell stories. (Original characters) may be familiar to some of you. But as an emotionally oriented Lily, it is a major advantage. In other words, in the first two school years, there was a strong emotional main line (the end of the second school year is an important node). In the third school year, how to balance the "plot line" that was not obvious in the early stage is a challenge worth watching. (The so-called shortcomings are also here. The main line advances slowly, and the glimpsed world background is also relatively ordinary, but this is an inevitable result of the writing method and the purpose of writing) If you already have a good impression of Qingshui Lily, many of the descriptions in this article will be moving. The two major impression points, trees and boats, bring me the most feelings. I hope you can continue to watch them move forward. Best wishes again.
It's beautiful. You can tell that the heroine is an idiot. I'm sure the heroine will definitely be the one at the bottom [laughs]
After reading it for so long, I finally had to write a few comments. I have always felt that just a few words of praise for a good book are a bit cheap, haha. The pace of the whole book is very slow. The clear timeline is of great help in understanding the development of the story throughout the book. Things happen coherently, and it can be said to be excellent as the main body of the narrative. Different from some template stories that are narrated based on emotions, the emotions in this book are an extension of the story. In short, when things develop to the right point, emotions will sprout naturally. If stories are compared to skin and emotions are compared to blood, then characters are undoubtedly the heart of this body. As the foundation of the characters in the book, character design is like the driving force that drives the characters in the book to do all kinds of things. For me, the characters in this book are undoubtedly good. Whether it is the former author Miss Monar who has a purpose and strives for it, who is messy but tough and sometimes a little stupid, or the present-day Monal, or Lolly Asher who has a sad past but shows a lighter side for her friends, who dares to love, dares to hate, and hates aristocrats; The characters of the four characters are extremely rich. They are no longer words, but living people. From morning to night every day, I am thinking about what they are doing. There is no doubt that I love them and everything around them deeply. In the past two school years, I gradually understood part of their past and analyzed their characters without permission (only my personal opinion). These two school years have been like a dream, with fulfilling campus life (magic exam), delicate dormitory emotions, and the love between girls is really enviable. Even though it has passed, I am still recalling the stories that happened in the past two school years. I am still very moved when I think about it carefully. Excellent description is like a warm hug, it is there, quietly accompanying you, hugging you at the right time, the warmth wrapped in it is fascinating. Now that the third year of school has not yet begun, I write a book review as a mark. In the past two school years, I have met four classmates who have very different personalities but are lovable. But my knowledge of them is still superficial. I hope that in the third year, I can get to know you better. Regarding the worldview: Neither big nor small, one world is enough. After three school years in the kingdom, and as an adventurer, the future will not be too peaceful. There are still many interesting things that have not been shown. I hope the author can show you what you are thinking and write out all the weird things. A good story is like an old photo album, with a sense of time that has been dusted for a long time. I hope it will never be finished. That's it, who doesn't love a relaxing and bright adventure in another world? Haha, this book must be a sweet article. The author is willing to describe them and write such a perfect story. If it ends with be, I will feel sad for them for at least a month. I am very much looking forward to the next story, and let this world slowly unfold as I push it. Random Thoughts: As the protagonist, I really like Monal's character so much. The author must treat them well (😭). Ps: The protagonist is Monal, and the two pairs of CPs are Mo Luo and Dofa.
Summary (as of Chapter 247) Recommended people: Lily CP, daily party Not suitable for: fast-paced, cool writers Speed-passed, this is a daily novel about the super wingman of the Western Fantasy Academy of Magic. The highlight is that the "author" of the book ends up as a super wingman, bringing together the CP of the original protagonist and changing some tragedies. The protagonist has his own emotional line, but more than 80% of the plot of the whole book is related to the pair of CPs who are matching each other. To be honest, this "author" setting is really useless. The setting in the original text is vague, so after time travel, it is actually a setting for "readers who have read the book and have some impression of the plot", and did not use the intelligence advantage in exchange for actual improvement in combat power. Except for the very very late one, the protagonist seems to have received mysterious treatment because of his identity, but if he doesn't show it, he doesn't. Therefore, the protagonist is a homeless girl - no money, no strength, no background. Guess I will later say that the protagonist is actually not the real "author"
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It's really good-looking. Although there are two couples in it, I still prefer the relationship between Blue Hair and Purple Hair [shy]. It's really rare for two tsunderes to fall in love. The other pair, Fa and Duo, feels too classic [face covering] I feel like the progress is too slow [face covering], but I can understand it, the two tsunderes can still keep fighting for at least a year [laughing and crying]
It looks good, but when can the protagonist give out candy?
It's very well written. I really think it's very good. I couldn't distinguish many names at first, but gradually I remembered them. It's really well written. It's just that some of the content didn't meet my personal preferences. The protagonist's power was too weak and I felt deeply powerless. The part about celebrating the engagement made me feel so dull and breathless. The feeling of being powerless and unable to change was so uncomfortable. The back is so sweet! I cried so much!
I always feel like it's too late. Why is this book so cold? It's the least read I've ever seen, which is inconsistent with historical results. The interactions are cute, and 400 chapters are probably enough. You see, this almost-marriage plot is undoubtedly shocking. The protagonist group has no positive performance here, which is extremely frustrating. On the other hand, the protagonist, the author, is really useless. She needs to do something to protect her daughter. And the pace is really, really slow.
It's a very interesting novel. I haven't finished it after reading it all afternoon. I'll save it for later and read it slowly. But for now, the relationship line is clear. It just depends on when the blue-haired and purple-haired idiots will become [laughing]
So who is cp? I just read a dozen chapters and I don't understand.
Not bad, come on, author
Children, I really like Duoduo [adoration][adoration]
It looks good. Fast forward to the heroine handing out sweets.
It's nice to watch, but I feel like there's really no need to use so many curse words [laughing and crying]. Too many "blocking words" are a bit annoying. [Eat melon]
Good-looking. Love to watch. Like to watch.
Monal is so cute 🥰
Beautiful, I like it very much
A very good book
It's nice to read, but the author doesn't seem to update it much? 2.3 Only one update It looks good, good luck to the author!
Nice! Especially the scene where the little slave girl says goodbye to the protagonist group. I live to see such a heartwarming story!
The writing is very beautiful. I really like this kind of warm little daily life. Good luck to the author.
It feels good, but why is no one there?
Thank you for your story
It's very interesting. Good luck to the author! [Blowing kiss]
Nice! Stop it, meow!