[Gao Wu], [Yun Yang Girlfriend], [Empress], [Single Heroine], [Pure Love]
My name is Su Bai. I suffer from entropy-loss syndrome and my life has entered a countdown.
After purchasing gaming equipment online, I fell in love with a treasure game - "Yun Yang God-level Girlfriend".
The reality was unsatisfactory, so I spent money like crazy to help her successfully build a foundation in one day.
Miraculously, I actually got feedback from Yunyang's girlfriend.
At this moment, I seemed to realize something extraordinary.
It seems to be more than just a virtual game!
...
My name is Jiang Zhiyu. I have a weak spiritual root and am despised by my parents. Even my own brother dares to do violence to me.
The sect's thieves bullied me, and in a rage, blood spattered five steps forward.
I was chased by my sect and was seriously injured, so I hid in the extremely dangerous Rakshasa ancient land.
Before the oil ran out and the lamp died, Senior Su Bai, dressed in cloud-patterned white clothes, came to my aid.
Senior Su Bai taught me alchemy, talismans, weapon forging, formations, replaced spiritual roots to help me build the foundation, and formed the elixir to go straight to the Nascent Soul...
In the end, he became the first emperor-level expert in the Huangxuan Continent to crush the void.
Suddenly looking back, the senior was nowhere to be found.
I cut through the long river of time with my sword, just to find that most familiar figure.
Become a Taoist couple and enjoy the fireworks in the world together! ! !
It looks pretty good for now, but...
Mr. Cui Hao's peak work feels a bit inconsistent, but from this part you can see that the author's writing style is very good, mainly tomatoes, so there is no requirement for anything, but the conception and logic of the plot can be strengthened, which will definitely be better
It looks pretty good for now, but... Mr. Cui Hao's peak work feels a bit inconsistent, but from this part you can see that the author's writing style is very good, mainly tomatoes, so there is no requirement for anything, but the conception and logic of the plot can be strengthened, which will definitely be better
Well, it feels pretty good.
Good luck, come on, come on
It's beautiful. Good luck to the author.
Don't poke it, it's pretty good-looking