Earth Wrong: Starting from the Astralia Familia

It's okay. It's a very novel setting. Justice Jace and the Lady Justice group. I liked Astraea when I watched the show. The dark faction really deserves to die. Fortunately, they are all dead. The way of speaking in this book may not conform to the format of conventional reading novels, but those who have read the original novel will find that the author's expression is indeed very restored. It can be seen that the author has carefully studied it, which is greatly praised. As for the female protagonist, it is estimated that there are multiple female protagonists. Most of these heroic adventures have multiple female protagonists. If it is a single female protagonist, it is best to choose the god Astraea because of her divinity. The other thing is to wait until the writer's level rises later or to post pictures of the characters in the comment area. Old fans haven't watched it for a long time, and most of them can't match the number anymore. Then, is it too fast to let Jace play the high-end game at the beginning? When I saw it, I thought it would be when Jace was about LV3, but when he was only LV1, he rushed up and beat the boss with the cry of friendship and justice. It felt too fast and the experience points were wasted. You must know that there is no such thing as skipping levels. If the experience value is exceeded, it will not be accumulated to the next level. These high-end games are too wasteful for LV1. The experience value is too much in the early stage. In the later stage, Chaos must be the permanent NPC to gain great achievements. Please support me. You can be idealistic later on, but don't cheat too hard. The Digital World system can be borrowed, or you can apply it like the starting talent. After all, it's all wrong. I still hope to learn more about the characteristics of the world's power system. Now that the plot has changed so much, most of the later ones are probably original. I hope there will be no need to interrupt updates.

It's good-looking, and over 40 chapters arouse the reader's emotions, temporarily turning him into a paladin. I think it's good in this regard. Moreover, the characters, plot, language, and settings are all okay. No poison has been found yet, and it is edible. [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] The legendary durable king.

The setting is good, and the writing is very close to the original work. There are too few fans of Dicuo. The original work is very good, the content is well set and in-depth, and the description of the behavior and psychology of the characters in the environment is very emotional. I just hope that the character dialogue will be more obvious and more daily, the story of the small scenes can be fully expressed, and the scene transitions will be more natural.

I don't seem to understand some of what those characters said?

I won't read it, the author. This is my first time reading a book about digital and land errors. The writing is really good.

To be honest, the setting is very attractive, but the author still has a lot of room for improvement in writing. I suggest you polish it more before publishing it [smile]

It's rare for a good article to be written wrongly, come on

When will the male protagonist change back to his true form? It's a bit exciting. I also like Jesmon, which has a five-star rating.

I'm worried about not being able to keep up with the book, and reading it won't be enough [face covering]

Jie Jie Jie, Jie Jie Jie

It feels good. Come on, author.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, author, come on!

The setting is very interesting, but the writing is a bit messy. I hope it gets better and better!

Congratulations on winning the Easter match

Fanfiction worth starting with

It looks good, but a bit unusual.

In the field of Dicuo fandom, I would like to call you the second one (the first one is the Maoke boss Xiaomaoqiu) [Please update]

It's good to read and I love to read it. Finally, there is a good-looking book on Tomato [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]